Only Marriage Will Do is on Pre-Order on Amazon

On Tuesday, as part of my Release Day celebration for Only Scandal Will Do, I revealed the cover for Book 2 of my House of Pleasure series, Only Marriage Will Do. Yesterday I put it up for pre-order on Amazon at the pre-order price of $1.99. When the book releases on July 31, the price will revert to its regular price of $4.99.

So grab your copy today! Just click here!

BLURB:

Happy-ever-afters don’t always begin at “I do.”

When two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down, she’s left wondering what on earth to do. The first gentleman claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was actually betrothed to him once upon a time, an action she now bitterly regrets. Out of other options, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger comes to call, and declares he is her husband, hoping to discourage her dubious bridegroom from pursuing his claim. But when she finally has a moment alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. And if any damsel ever needed his help it’s this one. Against his better judgment—and distracted by Juliet’s charming ways and dazzling beauty—he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate days away to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. But when the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head once more, Amiable is forced to wonder if he is indeed married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is forced to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

(I’m actually still tinkering with the blurb, so stay tuned for changes!)

EXCERPT:

London

July 2, 1761

The brass lion-head knocker under Amiable Dawson’s hand sent a sharp rap through the dark walnut door of Dunham House for the second time. The hot July sun hadn’t done his temper any good as he waited on the marble stoop for entrance to the Marquess of Dalbury’s townhouse. He’d been in a foul mood ever since the news of his beloved Katarina’s marriage to the marquess had reached him. Blast it to hell, the girl had accepted his proposal. At least he could make sure she was well and well taken care of by this man she had married.

At last a short, dark-haired maid opened the door. She took one look at him, gasped, and stepped back into the house. Her eyes widened and she glanced to her right, wringing her hands. “Who may I say—”

A man shouted from within. “No, I do not believe you.”

“I do not care what you believe. I told you the truth.” A woman’s voice, raised and sharp with terror, sent a chill through Amiable.

Katarina. What in God’s name?

He barged past the stunned girl and strode down the hall toward the commotion. He burst through the doorway, expecting to defend the woman he loved, only to stop dead at the sight of a man lunging across a sofa and grasping a woman by the wrist. Amiable had half drawn his sword before he realized the woman was not Katarina, but a complete stranger. He dropped it back into its scabbard. None of his affair after all.

The young man, foppishly dressed in a robin’s egg blue satin coat dripping too many layers of frothy lace at throat and wrists, looked at Amiable, a snarl on his lips.

Taking advantage of the distraction, the woman wrenched her arm from the man’s grip. “Praise God. He has arrived at last.” She staggered as she righted herself. “Now you will have to believe me, Philippe.”

The fop scrambled back off the sofa and groped for a black lacquer walking stick that lay on the floor. Lips pressed together, he glowered at the woman. “That remains to be seen, ma chère. In any case, I have shown you the papers. They speak for themselves.”

The woman ran from behind the sofa to Amiable’s side, grazed a kiss over his cheek, and whispered, “For God’s sake, help me. I am alone and he wants to force me to go with him. Please, agree with whatever I say.”

He smiled into her pleading face, then grasped her hands and gave them a gentle squeeze to signal his acquiescence. “Whatever is the matter, my dear?” Hell if he knew. However, he could play his part, even with little information. Let the lady lead and he’d follow as well as he could.

The woman swayed toward him, then took a deep breath. “My dear, may I present Viscount St. Cyr?” She nodded toward the fop. “Philippe, my husband, the Earl of Manning.”

Only Marriage Will Do is available for pre-order on Amazon. Grab your copy for just $1.99 today!

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The Writer’s Eye: Using the Senses in Romance Writing ~ The Sense of Touch

 

When I first began writing, I blogged a lot about the craft of writing and my thoughts on writing, pretty much as I went along. One series of posts I did almost ten years ago was on using the senses in writing romance. Since I’m once again looking through the writer’s eye at the craft of writing, I thought I’d revisit these posts over the next few weeks, look at them with a more experienced eye and revise as the need arises.

The mechanics of the sense of touch are different from those of the other four senses.  Sight, smell, taste, and sound are each located in one specific part of the body.  Touch is located everywhere.  This sense originates in the dermis, the deepest layer of skin.  It contains thousands of nerve receptors that, when stimulated, carry messages of pain or pleasure to the brain via the spinal cord.

Of greatest interest to the writer, however, is the fact that touch is experienced over every inch of the body.  Immediately, the possibilities for the use of this sense explode.  Any part of a character’s body can be described as feeling some stimulus and can therefore be affected by it.  Heroines can delight in cool sand between their toes, revel in the heat of the sun on their face, or shiver as an ice-cube slides down their back.

Describing an intimate touch is the stock in trade of the romance writer.  We’ve all written love scenes and, from sweet to scorching hot, the sense of touch figures prominently.  A kiss is a mere touch of the lips—but in the hands of a skillful wordsmith, it is an event that will rock the reader to her soul.  Well written, smokin’ love scenes transport the reader into the scene most often through depiction of the sense of touch.  Catherine Texier, in the article Awaken Her Senses, describes exactly how revealing a man’s touch can be: “The touch of a man is his imprint, his signature.  How soft or callous his hands are, how dexterous his fingers, how insolent and bold, how sensual or rough his handling of your body. . . .  Each one of his moves reveals his character, his mood of the moment, and his knowledge of you.”

When all is said and done, however, what we are talking about is the skillful use of language.  Writers create everything using the exact words that will evoke the senses in the reader.  Channel that language into your writing and your readers will “feel” right along with your characters.

A quick excerpt from my newly released romance Only Scandal Will Do, the hero and heroine’s first kiss hopefully illustrates that all important sense of touch:

She felt every magnificent swirl of his tongue, not only in her mouth but in the deep, private places of her body as well.  Katarina moaned into his mouth, the low, guttural sound coming from some unknown reservoir of need.  Pressing him to her, her hands slid up the steely hard muscles of his back, evident even through his cloak and clothes. 

Do you include the sense of touch in your writing as much as you should?  Do you create opportunities for your reader to feel everything right along with the characters?  Please leave a comment and thanks for sharing!

Thanks for coming by! Join me next week when I explore the use of smell in romance writing.

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The House of Pleasure Series ~Release Day Celebration for Only Scandal Will Do Part 4

As a final bit of celebration Only Scandal Will Do‘s release, I wanted  to introduce you to all of the House of Pleasure books. It is a five book series, set in Georgian England in the early 1760s, just as George III is taking the throne. It’s a time of wild and wicked ways, when sword fighting was a way of life, and duels prevailed as the measure of a man’s honor.

One of the things that binds the series together are the interactions of the Marquess of Dalbury and his friends and relatives, but also the setting of several scenes in each book in the House of Pleasure, the exclusive and notorious brothel where the marquess first encounters Lady Katarina Fitzwilliam. The cast of characters intertwine throughout the books, although they can each be read as stand alone novels.

 

Let me introduce you to each one, with a little surprise at the end.

Only Scandal Will Do

 

BLURB:

He has the woman of his dreams, but can he find a way to win her heart?

Kidnapped, displayed on the auction block of a notorious brothel, and sold to the highest bidder, Lady Katherine Fitzwilliam is furious and vows to fight her way out. Unfortunately, the rogue who bought her is way too charming and attractive to make that easy. He seduces Kat almost to the point of ruin, but she manages to escape him, although thoughts of him tend to linger long after she’s free.

Duncan, Marquess of Dalbury succumbs to temptation one night and purchases a fiery beauty whose very looks fill him with hot desire. When she insists she’s a lady, he scoffs, but is surprised when she flees before he can claim his pleasure. When he discovers she’s sister to a peer, Duncan is horrified to have compromised her. He offers marriage to scotch the scandal and gain an heir. However, the dazzling charms of the red-haired beauty, coupled with her astonishing skill with a sword, ensnares his heart and soul. If only Katarina didn’t hate him with a fury hotter than three hells…

Can he manage to turn her anger against him into a passion for him? Or will they be doomed to live together, but forever apart?

Now available on Amazon and other e-retailers.

Only Marriage Will Do

Only Marriage Will Do is the story of what happens to Lady Juliet Ferrers after her brother, the Marquess of Dalbury, leaves town. On her own for several hours before she’s scheduled to stay with a friend, Lady Juliet manages to embroil herself with not one but two engaging gentlemen, with the result that she cannot tell which one she is actually married to!

 

 

Available for pre-sale tomorrow on Amazon.

Only A Mistress Will Do

The man of her dreams . . . belongs to another woman.

Destitute and without friends, Violet Carlton is forced to seek employment at the House of Pleasure in London. She steels herself for her first customer and is shocked when the man rescues her instead of ravishing her. A grateful Violet cannot help but admire the handsome Viscount Trevor. But she must curb her desire for the dashing nobleman she can never have because he is already betrothed to another . . .

Tristan had gone to the House of Pleasure for a last bit of fun before he became a faithful married man. But when he recognizes the woman in his bed, he becomes determined to save her instead. Now, his heart wars with his head as he falls for the vulnerable courtesan. Unable to break his betrothal without a scandal, Tris resolves to find Violet proper employment or a husband of her own. Still, his arms ache for Violet, urging him to abandon propriety and sacrifice everything to be with the woman he loves. . .

Available on Amazon and other e-retailers.

Only Seduction Will Do

“Won’t you come to bed, my lord?”
 
In a vulnerable moment, Alethea Forsythe allows herself to be seduced by a married peer.  Now she is with child—and without recourse.  Her reputation will soon be in tatters and she will be forced to wed a stranger—unless she takes matters into her own hands.
 
When Jack Fitzwilliam, the Earl of Manning, is summoned from the House of Pleasure on a matter of importance, he hardly expects to receive a marriage proposal. He’s long been aware of Alethea’s infatuation with him, but at twenty-three, taking on an expectant bride is not in his plans.  Yet the desperation in the lady’s lovely eyes overrides his misgivings.
 
Alethea would not have believed it possible for a man to be too chivalrous. But though her new husband is perfectly amicable in public, he insists they maintain separate quarters. Desperate to possess his heart and prove herself a wife in every way, she boldly reaches out to Jack. And as their unexpected connection between silken sheets is tested by jealousy and misfortune, Jack must decide where honor ends…and true passion begins . .

Available on Amazon and other e-retailers.

Only Pleasure Will Do

Only Pleasure Will Do is the final book of the House of Pleasure series. It is the story of Amorina Vestry, the madam of the brothel, who is not exactly what she seems to be. When she is kidnapped, Sir Reginald Matthews, the Bow Street Runner who is cousin to Lady Katarina and her brother, the Earl of Manning, is engaged to find her and together when he does, they embark on a dangerous and dark journey filled with treachery, scandal, and passion.

This final book of the series will release in late August, the third House of Pleasure book to be released independently this summer. I’m finishing the edits for it now and by the first of August it will be up for pre-sale. It is an original work, never before published, so I hope by summer’s end, you’ll have caught up on the series and be ready for the final installment of the series.

And now for the fun part: The Giveaway

For stopping by and helping me celebrate this fabulous Release Day, I’ll be giving away a $10.00 Amazon gift card as well as e-copies of Only Scandal Will Do and Only Marriage Will Do to one lucky commenter on this post.

Thank you to everyone who’s been by today to help me celebrate!

 

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Cover Reveal for Only Marriage Will Do ~Release Day Celebration for Only Scandal Will Do Part 3

As part of the celebration of Only Scandal Will Do, I wanted  to  also reveal the new cover for Book 2 of the House of Pleasure series, Only Marriage Will Do. So with no further ado, the new cover is revealed!

Another stunning cover design by Danielle Fine. I am so loving this new set of covers!

Only Marriage Will Do is the story of what happens to Lady Juliet Ferrers after her brother, the Marquess of Dalbury, leaves town. On her own for several hours before she’s scheduled to stay with a friend, Lady Juliet manages to embroil herself with not one but two engaging gentlemen, with the result that she cannot tell which one she is actually married to!

Join me here on my blog tomorrow when Only Marriage Will Do goes on pre-sale for $1.99. This wild and wicked romance novel will release on July 31, at which time it will revert to its regular price of $4.99.

BLURB:

He has the woman of his dreams, but can he find a way to win her heart?

Kidnapped, displayed on the auction block of a notorious brothel, and sold to the highest bidder, Lady Katherine Fitzwilliam is furious and vows to fight her way out. Unfortunately, the rogue who bought her is way too charming and attractive to make that easy. He seduces Kat almost to the point of ruin, but she manages to escape him, although thoughts of him tend to linger long after she’s free.

Duncan, Marquess of Dalbury succumbs to temptation one night and purchases a fiery beauty whose very looks fill him with hot desire. When she insists she’s a lady, he scoffs, but is surprised when she flees before he can claim his pleasure. When he discovers she’s sister to a peer, Duncan is horrified to have compromised her. He offers marriage to scotch the scandal and gain an heir. However, the dazzling charms of the red-haired beauty, coupled with her astonishing skill with a sword, ensnares his heart and soul. If only Katarina didn’t hate him with a fury hotter than three hells…

Can he manage to turn her anger against him into a passion for him? Or will they be doomed to live together, but forever apart?

 

And now for the fun part: The Giveaway

What is your favorite historical novel? My own is Devilish by Jo Beverley, from her Georgian Malloren series that inspired my House of Pleasure series.  Leave a comment telling me what your fave is and at the end of the day I’ll draw a random name from all the commenters to win a copy of Only Marriage Will Do and a swag pack from Jenna Jaxon including several new items, plus my signature lavender sachet.

Please come back to the party at 6:00 for a celebration the whole House of Pleasure series!

 

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Celebration With Food ~ Release Day for Only Scandal Will Do Part 2

At long last, Only Scandal Will Do is released as an indie publication!  Woo Hoo!

BLURB:

He has the woman of his dreams, but can he find a way to win her heart?

Kidnapped, displayed on the auction block of a notorious brothel, and sold to the highest bidder, Lady Katherine Fitzwilliam is furious and vows to fight her way out. Unfortunately, the rogue who bought her is way too charming and attractive to make that easy. He seduces Kat almost to the point of ruin, but she manages to escape him, although thoughts of him tend to linger long after she’s free.

Duncan, Marquess of Dalbury succumbs to temptation one night and purchases a fiery beauty whose very looks fill him with hot desire. When she insists she’s a lady, he scoffs, but is surprised when she flees before he can claim his pleasure. When he discovers she’s sister to a peer, Duncan is horrified to have compromised her. He offers marriage to scotch the scandal and gain an heir. However, the dazzling charms of the red-haired beauty, coupled with her astonishing skill with a sword, ensnares his heart and soul. If only Katarina didn’t hate him with a fury hotter than three hells…

Can he manage to turn her anger against him into a passion for him? Or will they be doomed to live together, but forever apart?

 

I wanted to celebrate this book’s release with food–my favorite way to celebrate anything! 🙂

Of course, it’s unfortunately virtual food, but still, I thought some of the cuisine from 18th century America, where the heroine, Lady Katarina Fitzwilliam is from, would be fun to explore.

Eighteenth century cooking, in America and England, was accomplished over an open fireplace in the kitchen, with lots of marvelous gadgets to help the cook create delicious delicacies: pastries, cakes, cookies, puddings all looking scrumptious!

Left to right: various cookies, lemon cheesecake, jam tarts, Queen cakes, and whitepot pudding.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All accompanied by pots and pots of tea! Now this is a celebration!


And now for the fun part: The Giveaway

What is your favorite food to celebrate with? What sweet treats do you love to eat?  Leave a comment on this post and at the end of the day I’ll draw a random name from all the commenters to win a copy of The Perfect Afternoon Tea Recipe Book and a swag pack from Jenna Jaxon including several new items, plus my signature lavender sachet.

Please come back to the party at 2:00 for the cover reveal of Only Marriage Will Do!

 

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Release Day for Only Scandal Will Do!

At long last, Only Scandal Will Do is released as an indie publication!  Woo Hoo!

Originally released in 2012 by Lyrical Press, Only Scandal Will Do has been one of my favorites of the books I’ve written. It’s original editor, Mary Murray, was absolutely fabulous for a very new author to work with and I will always treasure my time working with her. For those who have not read it yet, I wish you a great reading experience and hope you enjoy this book as much as I still do.

Here is a taste of Scandal. The original book trailer was produced by my current editor, Danielle Fine. However, now that the cover has changed again, I’ve updated the trailer still using Dani’s images, but with different music from Animoto and the gorgeous new cover at the end, also courtesy of Danielle Fine.

https://animoto.com/play/L2bOujmCtfbZBoN01GpMzg

BLURB:

He has the woman of his dreams, but can he find a way to win her heart?

Kidnapped, displayed on the auction block of a notorious brothel, and sold to the highest bidder, Lady Katherine Fitzwilliam is furious and vows to fight her way out. Unfortunately, the rogue who bought her is way too charming and attractive to make that easy. He seduces Kat almost to the point of ruin, but she manages to escape him, although thoughts of him tend to linger long after she’s free.

Duncan, Marquess of Dalbury succumbs to temptation one night and purchases a fiery beauty whose very looks fill him with hot desire. When she insists she’s a lady, he scoffs, but is surprised when she flees before he can claim his pleasure. When he discovers she’s sister to a peer, Duncan is horrified to have compromised her. He offers marriage to scotch the scandal and gain an heir. However, the dazzling charms of the red-haired beauty, coupled with her astonishing skill with a sword, ensnares his heart and soul. If only Katarina didn’t hate him with a fury hotter than three hells…

Can he manage to turn her anger against him into a passion for him? Or will they be doomed to live together, but forever apart?

EXCERPT:

“Please release me, sir,” she demanded, trying to keep her temper in check. She needed to woo this man to her cause. And though it galled her, she could only do so with soft words, not blows. Perhaps the blows could come later. “I beg you to aid me in my hour of need.” She put every ounce of charm into her smile; she could cajole him, as long as he couldn’t read her mind.

“Ah, but I have needs too, slave.” His hands were in her hair again, as though he could not help himself.

Well aware from his husky tone what needs the man likely had, Kat winced. If only she could see all of his face. It was so difficult to judge the man under that golden mask. She forced herself to relax, though the thought of his hands on her raised gooseflesh everywhere. It was only her hair, after all. No great sin. Perhaps if she softened her demeanor, she could convince him of her plight. She could offer honeyed tones for a little while.

“Will you hear my story of how a lady ended up in this House of Pleasure, sir?” Even to her own ears, her innocent tone sounded false. How would it sound to–

Releasing her hair, the stranger grabbed her hand. “We both know how you will end up, my slave. Come.” He pulled her toward the four-poster and she dug her toes into the rough, worn carpeting. Honey be damned, she had no intention of going anywhere near that bed.

“Let me tell you my story, sir. ’Tis truly enlightening.” She snapped her wrist down, freeing herself from his grasp, then turned and raced across the room, searching in vain for weapons once more. Frustration mounting, she seized the wingback chair. At least it presented a barrier of sorts. She thrust it in front of her.

“Sir, you must hear me. I truly am not what you think.”

His skeptical stare was bearable. But when he pursed his lips and made a “tsk tsking ” sound, he might as well have shouted the word “whore.”

“I am not!” Katarina clutched the chair’s golden upholstery to keep from launching herself at him and wrapping her fingers around his arrogant throat. “I am Lady Katarina Fitzwilliam, sister to the Earl of Manning. I was kidnapped and brought here tonight against my will.”

He cocked his head. Then his mouth twitched. “Truly? What an exciting life you must lead…Lady Katarina, was it?” He chuckled deep in his chest, and took a step toward the chair.

She glared at him. “I am Lady Katarina Fitzwilliam, you dullard.”

“And true ladies always run around London at night scandalously underdressed as Greek slaves?”

“My brother and I were on our way to a masquerade ball when I was abducted.”

“As was I, fair lady,” he bowed with an exaggerated flourish, “when I decided to come to this charming establishment instead. Perhaps if we had continued on our ways uninterrupted, we would even now be dancing together at the ball.” That nasty laugh grated against her nerves worse than the screech of rusty nails, making her contemplate murder. If the scoundrel didn’t believe her story, killing him might be her only means of escape.

And now for the fun part: The Giveaway

I’d really like to know what you think of Only Scandal Will Do just from the blurb, excerpt, and trailer. Leave a comment telling me what you think, and at the end of the day I’ll draw a random name from all the commenters to win a copy of Only Scandal Will Do and a swag pack from Jenna Jaxon including several new items, plus my signature lavender sachet.

Please come back to the party at 10:00 for a celebration with 18th century food!

 

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Medieval Monday ~ An Excerpt from A Winter Knight by Barbara Bettis

Welcome to Medieval Monday, a blog hop for those who love a medieval romance. Over the next weeks, 10 other medieval romance novelists and I will share snippets from one of our works. I haven’t been able to share snippets with these wonderful authors for a while, but I’m so glad I’m back!

Our theme for this session is Nature, and today I’m hosting Barbara Bettis’s A Winter Knight.

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BLURB:

He’s running from his past; she’s running from her future. But on a snowy winter night, they find each other and the surprising gift of love.

Sir Nicholas has given up on marriage. These days he’s content to captain his friend’s troops and avoid entanglements—until one winter night when he rescues a half-frozen woman from a snowstorm. Her irrepressible spirit and kindness to others reminds him that all ladies aren’t like his former intended, who wed his brother while Nick was on crusade. But he can’t open his heart to Lady Clare. She’s bound to another, and Nick won’t forfeit his honor. Even if she were free, he has nothing to offer but love, and this lady deserves everything.

Lady Clare’s dying grandfather has arranged her betrothal, but the arrival of the man she’s to wed sends her fleeing into a snowstorm. Injured when her horse stumbles, she’s rescued by a mysterious knight. She recovers at his run-down manor, safe at last—until her betrothed tracks her down two days before Christmas. Trapped at home with the wedding imminent, she longs for the winter knight she’s come to love.

Only a miracle can bring Clare and Nick together. But at Christmas, anything is possible

EXCERPT:

Scanning the landscape, Nicholas spotted a mound in the road a few paces ahead. Odd place for a drift. He swung down and approached. Not a drift. He hunched beside the motionless form. A smattering of snow blended with the cloth that covered the mound. He pulled aside a corner of—fine, white wool? The inside of the material was lined in fur. The whole was tucked around a body.

Tugging gently, Nicholas freed more of the cloth to uncover a female, huddled in upon herself. When he turned the still figure, her head fell to the side, revealing bluing lips in a face as white as the ground.

Merciful God.

She is dead!

What will Nicholas do? Find out next time at Ashley York’s: https://www.ashleyyorkauthor.com/blog

Remember how he found her? See https://www.cathymacraeauthor.com/bits-n-bobs-author-blog

BUY LINKS:

AMAZON: https://amzn.to/356xovq

KOBO : https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/a-winter-knight

 

Thank you so much for sharing that excerpt, Barbara. Hopefully, I’ll be seeing everyone on Barbara’s blog today as well for my snippet from Time Enough to Love.

And see you next Monday for more excerpts on Medieval Monday.

The Time Enough to Love medieval romance series by Jenna Jaxon

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 6/28/20 Only Scandal Will Do ~ One Drop of Blood

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

 I’m finishing up today with snippets from the first of my House of Pleasure books, Only Scandal Will Do.  I re-releases on Tuesday and for July I’ll move on to Only Marriage Will Do, Book 2 of the series that will release at the end of July. 

 

Check out my new blurb for Only Scandal Will Do:

BLURB:  

He has the woman of his dreams, but can he find a way to win her heart?

Kidnapped, displayed on the auction block of a notorious brothel, and sold to the highest bidder, Lady Katherine Fitzwilliam is furious and vows to fight her way out. Unfortunately, the rogue who bought her is way too charming and attractive to make that easy. He seduces Kat almost to the point of ruin, but she manages to escape him, although thoughts of him tend to linger long after she’s free.

Duncan, Marquess of Dalbury succumbs to temptation one night and purchases a fiery beauty whose very looks fill him with hot desire. When she insists she’s a lady, he scoffs, but is surprised when she flees before he can claim his pleasure. When he discovers she’s sister to a peer, Duncan is horrified to have compromised her. He offers marriage to scotch the scandal and gain an heir. However, the dazzling charms of the red-haired beauty, coupled with her astonishing skill with a sword, ensnares his heart and soul. If only Katarina didn’t hate him with a fury hotter than three hells…

Can he manage to turn her anger against him into a passion for him? Or will they be doomed to live together, but forever apart?

I began my snippets for Scandal well into the book. Lady Katarina Fitzwilliam has been kidnapped and sold at auction in a brothel, The House of Pleasure. She escaped her purchaser, Duncan, Marquess of Dalbury, only to be discovered by him some days later at a ball. He wishes to marry her, but she loathes him. Now he’s afraid they will both be ruined by the incident in the brothel and has forced her brother to defend her honor in a duel. However, Kat, who has learned excellent skills with a sword from her brother, has insisted on defending her own honor in a private duel with Dalbury, the stakes the highest of all:  marriage. If she wins, he abandons all hope of having her, if he wins, she marries him immediately. In this snippet, I’ve skipped ahead to the point just after Duncan has made a hit on Kat’s arm, but did not draw blood. Duncan has just disarmed Katarina and is asking for her to yield. She refuses, insisting he draw first blood to win the match, leaving Duncan with a difficult choice. Today’s snippet begins where last weeks’ left off. We are still in Duncan’s POV.

EXCERPT:

The padded jacket precluded a wound to arms or torso; breeches did likewise to the lower body and thighs. He could wound the calf, but she wore knitted stockings that might bind the blade and make a ragged, nasty wound. Her hands were encased in leather gloves and he would be damned if he would mark her face–he was going to live with that face for many, many years and would not curse himself every time he looked at her because he had marred her beauty. What did that leave?

He continued to circle her, searching for a glimpse of skin that would allow him a small wound–it need only be one drop of blood, for Christ’s sake.

Her coat and shirt were both collarless. She had loosely tied one of her brother’s cravats around her neck, but it was now askew from the ferocity of the fight, baring part of her neck. He moved behind her again and she tensed, likely in apprehension, not knowing from what direction the blade would come.

Duncan tossed his rapier to Lord Trevor, and quietly stepped so close to Katarina that his breath stirred the hair at her neck. He moved his head even closer, until his mouth was poised beside her left ear and her breathing quickened.

And now to finish the scene :

“My lady,” he whispered, “you have given me little choice in this matter. I would not wound you, but I will not forfeit the match. Your protection has also tied my hands in the matter of where to wound you. So I must take where I may find.”

She began to tremble at his words. If it were done

He turned his head and sought the delicate flesh at the nape of her neck, the one place on her not protected.

She went still, sucked in a breath and held it, as he worked at the tender spot open mouthed. With the tip of his tongue, he massaged the warm skin of her neck, salty from her exertions against him. A low moan, akin to the one she had given him in the garden two nights ago, escaped her before a shiver chased down her body. Then he nipped the skin, breaking it, drawing the precious drop that claimed her as his. She gasped, and he whispered again in her ear, “You did not stipulate, Lady Katarina, that the blood must be drawn with the sword. I therefore claim victory in the duel. Will you honor the forfeit?”

 Only Scandal Will Do is up on pre-order until this Tuesday for the pre-order price of just .99. It is available on Amazon, B & N, Smashwords, iTunes, and Kobo. The book reverts to its regular price of $2.99 on Release Day, Tuesday, June 30. Grab yours while you can!

And here is the new book trailer I made this week for Only Scandal Will Do on Animoto! Enjoy!

https://animoto.com/play/L2bOujmCtfbZBoN01GpMzg

Please come by my blog on Tuesday for the release party!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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The Writer’s Eye: Using the Senses in Romance Writing ~ The Sense of Sound

 

When I first began writing, I blogged a lot about the craft of writing and my thoughts on writing, pretty much as I went along. One series of posts I did almost ten years ago was on using the senses in writing romance. Since I’m once again looking through the writer’s eye at the craft of writing, I thought I’d revisit these posts over the next few weeks, look at them with a more experienced eye and revise as the need arises.

First, the senses are channels of communication, including sound.  Each time we hear a sound, we are receiving information about something.  Even the way information is presented sends messages.  So hearing is a major way that we communicate.

I don’t know about you, but when I’m writing, I see the story unfold like it was a movie spooling out of my mind. And one thing all movies have is a soundtrack to provide the sounds: the whistling of the wind, the revving of an engine, the squeaky creak of a door to a spooky house. Your novel won’t have such a soundtrack, unless you provide it with your words. Put succinctly by Orly Konig-Lopez in her article for Writers in the Storm, “When writing, you have to put those sounds into words. Your reader needs to hear what your characters are experiencing.” You don’t want your characters to seem to be living in a vacuum devoid of sound. I read somewhere that after the original Star Trek series premiered, they decided to add the “whoosh” into the soundtrack of the opening whenever the Enterprise would zip by. They said that of course there wouldn’t be sound in space, but people would naturally expect a sound, so they added it.

Add those sounds to your scenes! Your readers will be pulled into the work because of it.

Next, use paralanguage to make your dialogue pop. Paralanguage is all the sounds we hear connected to language other than the words themselves.  Using these elements—vocal fillers, pitch, tone, rate, volume, inflection—you can give a complete picture of how the characters sound when they speak and reveal themselves.  A character who uses vocal fillers–um, er, well, you know, and like—has a character trait that may suggest hesitancy.  A heroine whose voice squeaks signals her excitement; the hero who drops his tone to husky is also excited, but in a different way.  How fast or slow they speak, how loud or soft their voice is, all set the scene and enhance what characters are experiencing.

Good advice from The Author Studio article “How to Use All Five Senses When Writing A Romance Novel” speaks to this use of nonverbal elements: “Let your characters notice how the other one speaks, not just the words that they use, but the quality of their voice. Is it clear and high or low and raspy? Do they whisper, or shout, their sweet nothings? Don’t forget to get nonverbal, too; whether it’s a sigh or a moan, so much in romance is said in sounds that aren’t words, and so much about the character is revealed through what sounds they make and when.”

And finally, make your romance novel richer by adding sounds the POV character would naturally hear or be aware of within the scene.  The crackle of leaves underfoot in a dry forest, the swift, dull thudding of horses hooves on dry mud, the blood pounding in the heroine’s ears as her heart beats faster at sight of the hero.  Sounds that surround your hero and heroine should sink the reader into the psyche of the character, letting the reader “hear” what the character does.  The better your descriptive writing skills, the better the experience for your audience.

Tell me how you put your reader into your scenes?  Do you make an effort to put all five senses into your writing?  Do you find it difficult to include all five?  Do you find yourself using only your favorite senses?  Thanks for sharing!

Thanks for coming by! Join me next week when I explore the use of touch in romance writing.

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Only Scandal Will Do ~ New Book Trailer

I am really excited and a bit proud to show off the little book trailer I made this past weekend for Only Scandal Will Do! It releases a week from today, so I’d like to show the trailer off today and hopefully it will promote the book for the release next week.

There was a book trailer by my editor/designer Danielle Fine, done years ago, when Scandal had its original cover design for Lyrical Press. Now, of course there is a brand new cover so the trailer is out of date, but I really liked it a lot, so I took most of the pictures used in the original, and reworked them a little bit. This one isn’t nearly as professional as Dani’s was, and the music of the original trailer was absolutely perfect and perfectly timed. I didn’t have the means to upgrade, so my new trailer doesn’t have the bells and whistles (and it has the watermark for Animoto on it), but I hope it gives a sense of the book to readers who might wonder what it’s about.

So without further ado, here is my new trailer for

Only Scandal Will Do

 

https://animoto.com/play/L2bOujmCtfbZBoN01GpMzg

 

Only Scandal Will Do is available at

Amazon, Smashwords, B & N, iTunes, and Kobo.

The pre-order price is .99, but will rise to its regular price of $2.99 on July 1, 2020.

Come by next Tuesday, June 30, for the release party! 🙂

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