Countdown to Only Marriage Will Do Release ~ The Proxy Marriage

Next Friday, July 31 (where on earth has July gone?) Book 2 of the House of Pleasure series, Only Marriage Will Do, will release as an indie title! I’m really stoked about having this first of my Georgian series out with the new covers and a few changes here and there. I’m really enjoying revisiting the characters and story lines too. I hope those of my readers who haven’t sampled this steamy series will give it a try.

To get everyone primed and ready for the release, I’ll be posting a series of articles on my blog here with little tidbits of trivia regarding my research for Only Marriage Will Do along with short excerpts from the novel to whet your appetite.

One of the major parts of the storyline for Only Marriage Will Do is the question of Lady Juliet Ferrers marital status. From the beginning, we find a Frenchman who insists she was married to him via a proxy marriage over a year previously. The question then becomes is he telling the truth and if so, is the marriage legal in England.

Proxy marriages have been around for centuries, often utilized by royalty to bind monarchs and princes in matrimony across great distances when an alliance is needed but the logistics of a conventional wedding in person is impossible. A substitute then is found for the bride or groom, legal documents  attesting to the marriage are signed and witnessed, and the marriage is considered as legal as any other performed with bride and groom in the church.

However, in 1753, Lord Hardwicke’s Marriage Act was signed into law in England in order to prevent clandestine marriages. It stipulated that the couple must be married in an Anglican church either after the banns had been read or a marriage license had been obtained and consent of parents for parties under the age of twenty-one. (There were other stipulations of the Act as well, but these are the significant ones for the story.)

The stipulation that both bride and groom must meet in person should make a proxy marriage invalid. However, as the act doesn’t specifically address the validity of a proxy marriage, and the laws of France do accept such a marriage ceremony, there is enough of a legal argument to make Juliet’s marital status very sketchy indeed. And as she is terrified of the Frenchman who claims to be her husband, and she meets and falls in love with Captain Amiable Dawson, thereby hangs the tale. Is she bound to the cruel foreigner or can she marry her knight in shining armor?

Here’s a short excerpt that gives you a taste of this predicament:

“Do you know why the count is trying to perpetrate this fraud on you, my lady?”

“No, I don’t know. Even if such a marriage took place in France, in England it is invalid. I made that perfectly clear to Philippe.”

“Are you sure, Lady Juliet?” He had little knowledge of the laws concerning such things, but it made no sense to go to the trouble and expense of a marriage by proxy if it did not bind the parties by law.

“Yes, my brother explained it to me. The Hardwicke Act made such marriages invalid in England. The proxy ceremony in France, on the other hand, would bind Philippe to me until he returned to England for it to be performed legally.” She turned back to gaze out the window. “By the time my brother sent the proxy to France I didn’t even want to marry Philippe, but I feared telling Duncan. Vicious rumors about me had besieged us for months and he wanted to make the marriage work for my sake.”

“Rumors about you, my lady?”

She hung her head. “Surely you heard them. The gossips of Society could talk of nothing else last year.”

“I am but lately come from the colonies. We hear very little of London’s scandals there.” He should not distress her more. “If you would rather not speak of it—”

“No, I don’t mind. Everyone else knows.” She sighed and ran her hand along the back of the sofa, then dropped into a rose-colored companion chair and motioned for him to take a seat opposite her. “Over a year and a half ago, Earl Ferrers shot and killed a man. He was arrested and charged with murder. Our family name is the same as his title, although we are connected only through marriage. The earl pled insanity, although it did not save him, despite several genuinely mad family members.”

She stared at him intently then continued. “Several rumors surfaced that I had inherited the Ferrers insanity. My brother called out the man who started them and killed him in a duel. He…” She swallowed hard. “He killed two men for my honor and dueled with others as well. Duncan also suffered horrible allegations.” She shifted in her seat and tried to smile. “So you see, the Ferrers family was hardly a bargain in the marriage mart last year. My brother thought he was acting in my best interest, sending the proxy for our marriage.”

“Did you not wish to marry the viscount?”

She tensed and avoided his eyes. “At that point, no, I didn’t. We had quarreled bitterly just before he left London.” Her voice softened until he had to lean toward her to hear. Tears rolled down her cheeks and she turned her head away. “And he was not always kind.”

Amiable stood it for about five seconds. “My dear.” He rose, gathered her into his arms, and settled her head against his chest again. “I demand the right of a temporary husband to comfort you,” he murmured in her ear. “Stay still with your head just there.”

Given her choices, I think I’d opt for Amiable Dawson as well, wouldn’t you?

Only Marriage Will Do is still available for the pre-order price of $1.99 on Amazon through July 31.

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The Writer’s Eye: A Different Point of View

 

Until about two months ago, when my daughter started talking to me about a YA book called Red Hood by Elena K. Arnold, I had never heard of a book being written in the second person. (Yeah, I guess I’m not as well read when it comes to books outside Stephen King or historical romance.) So I questioned my daughter about how such a book would be written.

“It’s kind of like those interactive books where they say, ‘You can turn left or right. You decide to turn right.’ It uses the words ‘you’ and ‘your’ where a first person point of view would use ‘I’ and ‘my.’”

I thought about it and although I think it would be too off-putting for me to read (I stopped reading Patricia Cornwell because she started writing in present tense), I am intrigued by general readers’ responses to the second person POV.

My first thought was that second person POV would bring the reader into the story in an immediate way that even first person does not. Melissa Tydel, writing for The Write Stuff says, “Second person allows the readers to experience the story as if it’s their own…Using the pronoun ‘you’ and describing action as it happens supplies a personal sense of urgency, propelling the story—and the reader—forward.” She also points out that because it’s not often used, it offers a fresher experience for the reader.

I was interested enough in finding out if this was true across the board, or if second person had its critics as well. I checked out reviews for Red Hood and found that eight out of thirty one reviews had mentioned the second point of view experience. Two reviewers simply mentioned that the book was written in second person. Perhaps not surprisingly three enjoyed the second person POV, saying it “made the experience more personal,” “put you right in the main character’s shoes,” and “it worked perfectly…by driving the story forward and submerging the reading into the narrative.”

There were detractors too, of course, also three, who said “a big problem with the lack of connection to the characters was that the book was written in the second person,’ ‘the second person narrative was jarring and kept me from connecting to the character,’ and ‘the only think I could not get used to was the second person POV.’”

So second person point of view can be problematic for writers. You may have to deal with readers who are turned off by this rather different take on the perspective of your book, however, if you have a strong sense that this is the way the story needs to be told, I say listen to that instinct (your muse, most likely). At worst, you may have to go back and re-write the book in a more conventional POV. But perhaps this is the thing that makes your book work when nothing else would. That makes the reader sit up and take notice of the story because that POV engages them in the story as nothing else would have.

Here are some other books that have utilized the second person POV that you might give a look: Booked by Kwame Alexander, Brass by Xhenet Aliu, The Diver’s Clothes Lie Empty by Vendela Vida, and The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern.

Have you read any books written in the second person? Did you like or dislike them? I think I may just have to read one of these so I can judge for myself.

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 7/19/20 Only Marriage Will Do ~ ” I Come to Claim My Wife”

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

For July I’m celebrating Christmas all month, so one would think I’d take snippets from one of my Christmas novellas. However, instead I’m choosing a Christmas scene from the second House of Pleasure book, Only Marriage Will Do, which is now up for pre-order on Amazon. It will release on July 31.  

 

Check out my new blurb for Only Marriage Will Do:

BLURB: 

Not all Happy-ever-afters begin at “I do.”

Two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down. The first claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was betrothed to him once upon a time. To deter him, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger appears, declaring he is her husband. But when she is finally alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. Against his better judgment, he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate far to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. However, the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head again, forcing Amiable to wonder if he is married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is compelled to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

I began my snippets for Marriage well into the story just as I did for Scandal. Captain Amiable Dawson and Lady Juliet Ferrers married in July under rather strange circumstances: another man, a former suitor, has claimed he is already married to Juliet. She and Amiable spent the autumn months trying to verify that their marriage was indeed valid, but have not heard definitively from the courts. So on Christmas Eve, Amiable’s sisters have thrown them a reception to celebrate their marriage. Now, however, an unknown man has crashed the party, bringing one with him too well known to Juliet–the man claiming to be her true husband.

EXCERPT:

“How dare you enter here?” Amiable dropped his hand to his sword. “Damnation.” No weapon to hand. He had not deemed it necessary at this gathering.

“I dare to come claim my wife, monsieur—my legal wife.” St. Cyr’s smile broadened as he waved his hand toward Mr. Haimes.

The gentleman spoke up quickly. “I suggest we join his lordship in the reception room,” he turned glowering eyes on St. Cyr, “where I instructed you to wait, my lord.”

“I have come to claim that which is my own, Haimes—I have waited long enough.”

And now a litte more of the scene :

“She’s not going anywhere with you, St. Cyr.” Spoiling for a fight, Amiable glanced at the family’s ancient ceremonial broadsword hung above the fireplace. By God, he’d take that weapon and end the discussion here and now.

“At last I have the law on my side, Monsieur Morley. Do you plan to disobey the fine English law that says a wife belongs with her husband?”

Juliet clutched his arm tighter. Stark terror drained her face to a pasty pale. “Do not worry, sweetheart,” he murmured in her ear. “I will never let you go.”

 

Only Marriage Will Do is available on Amazon for pre-order until July 31 at the pre-order price of just $1.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, Saturday, August 1. Grab yours while you can!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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The Writer’s Eye: Using the Senses in Romance Writing ~ The Sense of Taste

 

When I first began writing, I blogged a lot about the craft of writing and my thoughts on writing, pretty much as I went along. One series of posts I did almost ten years ago was on using the senses in writing romance. Since I’m once again looking through the writer’s eye at the craft of writing, I thought I’d revisit these posts over the next few weeks, look at them with a more experienced eye and revise as the need arises. This is the final post on the topic of senses, writing with the sense of taste.

Picture a candlelit dinner that ends with dry champagne and juicy strawberries dipped in dark chocolate, the sweet and tart flavors mingle on the characters’ tongues as they look into each other’s eyes and think about a mingling of another sort.  Can you almost taste that moment? 

If you can, then I have successfully demonstrated the power the description of taste has over the reader.  This power is what you need to exercise when you write romance.  Even though the sense of taste is, hands down, the most difficult one to put into your writing, it is nevertheless essential that you do so.

One of the powers of the sense of taste is that taste is linked to smell and can also evoke memories.  “Food has the power to evoke emotion.  Taste can inspire the imagination and trigger memories of the past,” says Krysten Hammond, in an article called “Writing Sense:  The Sense of Taste.”  She groups foods into three categories:  savory foods, comfort foods, and sweet foods.  Each category has the ability to connect characters to different experiences, from the worldly sensuousness of the savory, to the coziness of comfort food, to the decadence and abandon of sweets.

We often believe writing about taste is difficult because there are limited opportunities for the action.  I mean, just how many scenes can one write with the characters sitting down to dinner or noshing between meals?  Laurie Alice Eakes reminds us that there are more opportunities for exploring taste than merely relying on food.  “We also taste in other ways. Fear brings a flavor to our mouths, a dry, tinny sensation. Your character wakes up from a blow on the head and has a foul taste in one’s mouth.”  In her article, “Writing with Good Senses Part V: Taste,” she suggests another way to include this sense other than with the use of food.  “Your character is traveling on a bicycle, motorcycle, or horse. The road is dusty. He tastes—what is in the area? Alkali? Copper? Or maybe she’s lying in the grass nibbling on a blade of it. Yes, this is technically eating, but it’s not a meal or snack.”

Of course, the ultimate place for the sense of taste is when the hero and heroine discover each other using this sense in the most intimate ways.  Possibly the best article I have found that describes intimate ways to taste is “Awaken Her Senses,” in Best Life Magazine.  The section on page 72 entitled  “Taste:  Your flavor awakened me and I have been hungry ever since,” by Daphne Merkin, vividly describes the many ways and places that lovers can explore each other using taste.  “What I can still taste on my tongue…is a musky essence of his skin, fragrant with artifice (the soap and cologne) and cut with reality (the perspiration brought on by physical exertion).”  She  describes the taste of his breath, “slightly minty, with a papery undertone of cigarette smoke,” and after they made love, “I would lean over and run my tongue along the side of his neck, half ingesting and half inhaling the taste of him.”

When the circumstances of our plots offer such an opportunity to showcase this sense, we as writers must seize the moment in our characters’ lives and make the most of it.

I doubt that I have always used the sense of taste as effectively as I might.  The following short passage from  my medieval romance, Time Enough to Love, is one in which I have actually managed to used taste:

She bit into the succulent roasted squab, her favorite dish, then dared glance back to Lord Braeton’s table again.  He was staring at her.  Alyse stopped, teeth sunk in the squab’s leg.  The delicate, flavorful meat turned rancid in her mouth, its luscious smell now noisome.  She dropped the morsel back onto her trencher with nerveless fingers.

Having now written this post, however, I see places in the passage where the description of taste can be certainly be enhanced.  Ah, the glory of revision!

Do you include the sense of taste in your writing as much as you should?  Do you create opportunities for this sense to “shine” in your works?  Please leave a comment and thanks for sharing!

Thanks for coming by! Join me next week when I move on to another aspect of the writing life.

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Medieval Monday: Final Excerpt from Time Enough to Love

Welcome to Medieval Monday, a blog hop for those who love a medieval romance. Over the next 11 weeks, I and 10 other medieval romance novelists will share snippets from one of our works.

This is our last session for our theme of Nature, and I’m finishing up with an extended excerpt from my medieval romance Time Enough to Love.

We began toward the end of the book, when the hero, Sir Geoffrey Longford and heroine, Lady Alyse de Courcy, have just escaped the Black Plague in Bordeaux, France, and are traveling toward Alyse’s father’s home in northern France. They have been camping  for almost 10 days as their journey takes them out into the beautiful French countryside.

As they put up camp and settled down for the night, Alyse becomes ill, which brings out the fact that she is pregnant. The question upon which that revolves is whose child is it?

I hope you enjoy this final snippet from Time Enough to Love, available on Amazon, B & N, and Smashwords.

BLURB: 

When Lady Alyse de Courcy is betrothed to Sir Geoffrey Longford, she has no choice but to make the best of a bad bargain. The hulking knight is far from her ideal man, and although he does possess some wit and charm, he is no match for the sinfully sensual man she secretly admires, Thomas, Earl of Braeton, her betrothed’s best friend.

From the first, Sir Geoffrey finds himself smitten by Lady Alyse, and, despite her infatuation with his friend, vows to win her love. When Geoffrey puts his mind to wooing Alyse, he is delighted to find her succumbing to his seduction. But when cruel circumstances separate them, Geoffrey must watch helplessly as Thomas steps in to protect Alyse—and falls in love with her himself.

As the three courtiers accompany Princess Joanna to her wedding in Spain, they run headlong into the Black Plague. With her world plunged into chaos, Alyse struggles with her feelings for both the men she loves. But which love will survive?

EXCERPT:

“I know not what to hope for, Geoffrey.” The stony silence cut her like a knife. She had known he would take the news ill. ’Twas why she had hidden it as long as she could. Mayhap she could reason with him.

“This child is the only hope that some part of Thomas is still alive. He has no other heir. If this child is yours, Thomas and the Knowlton line are dead. As much as I would love to think that I bear your son, there is part of me that prays it is Thomas’s I bear instead.”

He stared at her so long without speaking that she began to tremble. What manner would his disappointment take?

“’Twas always Thomas you loved, was it not, Lady Braeton?”

She inhaled sharply. Lady Braeton. He would deny their very marriage in his rage?

“Thomas warned me you were in love with him the night our betrothal was announced. I saw it in your face, although I chose not to believe it after we met. I dared to think I had managed to capture your heart.” The bitterness in his voice was almost more than she could bear. “More fool I to think I could compete with the many charms of Thomas Knowlton.”

Icy fingers wrapped around her heart. “Geoffrey, that is not true! I have loved you almost from the moment of our first meeting.” He must believe her, for ’twas the truth. But she was too tired to think, too tired to reason with him.

Geoffrey’s harsh chuckle made her cringe. “I suppose it was quite a pleasant surprise to find me wed to another and Thomas asking to marry you at my request. I have done you great service since June, have I not, my lady?”

“No.” Would this nightmare never end? “My life has been naught but misery since then.” Alyse longed to scream at him, to pound his chest until she could beat sense into him. But his scornful words thrust too deep into her heart and exhaustion sapped her will. Miserable, she turned away from Geoffrey and vowed she would stay as far from him as possible. Perhaps she would find solace in sleep. She muffled her sobs, her last remaining strength draining into the cold ground.

To find out what happens next, Time Enough to Love is available at Amazon, B & N, and Smashwords.

The Time Enough to Love series by Jenna Jaxon

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 7/12/20 Only Marriage Will Do ~ Cold Dread

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

For July I’m celebrating Christmas all month, so one would think I’d take snippets from one of my Christmas novellas. However, instead I’m choosing a Christmas scene from the second House of Pleasure book, Only Marriage Will Do, which is now up for pre-order on Amazon. It will release on July 31.  

 

Check out my new blurb for Only Marriage Will Do:

BLURB: 

Not all Happy-ever-afters begin at “I do.”

Two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down. The first claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was betrothed to him once upon a time. To deter him, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger appears, declaring he is her husband. But when she is finally alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. Against his better judgment, he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate far to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. However, the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head again, forcing Amiable to wonder if he is married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is compelled to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

I begin my snippets for Marriage well into the story just as I did for Scandal. Captain Amiable Dawson and Lady Juliet Ferrers married in July under rather strange circumstances: another man, a former suitor, has claimed he is already married to Juliet. She and Amiable spent the autumn months trying to verify that their marriage was indeed valid, but have not heard definitively from the courts. So on Christmas Eve, Amiable’s sisters have thrown them a reception to celebrate their marriage.

EXCERPT:

“Very well, love, we will go together.” With a reassuring pat on her arm, Amiable led her out of the receiving line. When they reached Katarina, she gave them a nervous smile then closed her eyes briefly before speaking.

“Amiable, Juliet, this man,” she nodded toward the stocky gentleman, “is Mr. Haimes, one of Sir John Fielding’s Bow Street Runners. He is here because—” she fell silent as words seemed to fail her.

Cold dread gripped Juliet’s heart.

Katarina took a deep breath, a false smile plastered on her face. “Duncan is waiting for us in the small reception room in the front of the house.”

“Why?” Juliet turned anxious eyes to her husband.

And now to finish the scene :

“Because I have come to finally take you home, chérie.” The loathsome voice sent a shower of fear through her as Lord St. Cyr sauntered around the corner to stand in front of her, his cruel smile aimed directly at her.

 

Only Marriage Will Do is available on Amazon for pre-order until July 31 at the pre-order price of just $1.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, Saturday, August 1. Grab yours while you can!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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The Writer’s Eye: Using the Senses in Romance Writing ~ The Sense of Smell

 

When I first began writing, I blogged a lot about the craft of writing and my thoughts on writing, pretty much as I went along. One series of posts I did almost ten years ago was on using the senses in writing romance. Since I’m once again looking through the writer’s eye at the craft of writing, I thought I’d revisit these posts over the next few weeks, look at them with a more experienced eye and revise as the need arises.

In post number two post number four of this series, I will explore the often neglected sense of smell.  Remember that the senses are channels of communication.  What does this sense communicate to you and to your characters?  How important is the sense of smell and how can we insure that we give it the prominence it is due in romance writing?

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The sense of smell has been called our least important sense; is there any wonder, then, that it is often the one least used in writing, according to Chip Scanlan in his article “Writing With Your Nose.” “Our antiseptic age seems designed to rob us of smells or confuse our nose with synthetic concoctions that mask noxious chemicals with the aromas of the orchard.” Helen Keller called smell “the fallen angel.”

Least important perhaps, but still powerful, for nothing is so memorable as a smell.  I have only to inhale the pungent aroma of a fresh-lit cigar and I am transported back to my aunt’s car early in the morning, a six-year-old again, taking my uncle to work.  He smoked cigars.  Odors have the power to fix time and place in our minds like a snapshot.  Use that power in your writing to help your characters create a past.

Smell is also evocative of emotion.  “The information of incoming odors is first processed by the emotions and subsequently identified. This places our sense of smell at the root of our emotional being,” states Laura Walters in “The Sweet Smell of Romance.”

Many writers will use the sense of smell when their hero and heroine meet for the first time.  Their own unique scents create a powerful attractive force, which is a documented phenomenon.  “Scents act as powerful triggers to our primal instincts when seeking out and evaluating a mate,” according to Dr. Alan R. Hirsch.

And finally, make your writing richer by adding odors the POV character would naturally smell within the scene to create a true sense of place.  These smells need not always be pleasant; in real life we smell both the roses and the manure in which they grow.  But creating an environment that evokes the world around your character will enhance your readers’ experience of that world.

The following excerpts from Only Scandal Will Do, my Georgian historical romance, shows how effective the sense of smell can be used to put the reader intimately into the scene.

“Lean your head just there, sweet.” His hand pressed her firmly against him so she could hear the strong beat of his heart, smell the clean, comforting citrus of his cologne.  She liked that fresh smell.

But later that scent has different connotations:

She was rewarded, finally, for flung into the corner, hidden by the chair, lay the man’s big, black cloak.  Gleefully, she grabbed the expensive garment and pulled the warm folds around her.  It smelled like him, the clean, citrus rising from the collar.  That scent might haunt her for the rest of her life, but could be endured for now.

And in a final example, a noisome smell can sometimes evoke an even stronger sense of character.

By the time the world stopped spinning, she was being borne down the corridor in Nigel’s arms.  The rank smell of his sweaty, unwashed body permeated the mask and Kat fought back a wave of nausea.   

Tell me how you put your reader into your scenes using the sense of smell?   Do you find it more difficult to include smell than the other four senses?  Is there a particular smell you find yourself using specifically for heroes or heroines?

 

 

Thanks for coming by! Join me next week when I wrap up my thoughts on the senses by exploring the use of taste in romance writing.

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Medieval Monday ~ An Excerpt from The Prince’s Highland Bride by Cathy & DD MacRae

Welcome to Medieval Monday, a blog hop for those who love a medieval romance. Over the next weeks, 10 other medieval romance novelists and I will share snippets from one of our works. I haven’t been able to share snippets with these wonderful authors for a while, but I’m so glad I’m back!

Our theme for this session is Nature, and today I’m hosting Cathy & DD MacRae’s The Prince’s Highland Bride.

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BLURB:

Free of court intrigue, Phillipe seeks a new start in life. Falling in love was not in his plans. Until he met Maggie MacLaren.

Phillipe de Poitiers, a prince of Antioch, finds himself a breath away from wrongful execution. Risking everything, he leaves behind his crown, his family, his country—and a body sworn to be his by the Bishop, himself.

Free of court intrigue and drawn to Scotland by memories of a woman who once possessed his heart, Phillipe sells his sword to pay for his travels and accepts the task of guarding the daughter of Laird MacLaren.

When Maggie MacLaren’s abusive marriage fails, she wants nothing more than to retire to her childhood home on the banks of Loch Lomond. Trouble follows her, putting her clan in danger, and she travels to the Isle of Hola, placing her safety in the hands of a mysterious mercenary with a haunted smile and a kind heart.

As Maggie and Phillipe struggle with their pasts, love blooms. But when a pirate’s treasure offers a seductive lure, will it free them—or prove the downfall of all they hold dear?

Nature can provide beauty and inspiration. It can also bring danger. Maggie’s island is a place of solace and great beauty, but it is also completely without defenses, something Phillipe must correct before he completes his task of protecting the woman he has come to love—and says good-bye to her forever.

EXCERPT:

The little girl shook her head violently and more strands of hair escaped the frayed plaits.

The other child stepped between Narfi and Svala. “Leave her alone. Ma said we mustn’t fight in front of Freya.”

Narfi sent her a scowl then gave a one-shoulder shrug.

“’Tis verra kind of ye, Narfi,” Maggie soothed. “But teasing lasses isnae how ye prove yer worth as a hunter. Come with me and I’ll let ye watch as Colyn eats.”

Join me on my blog next week for the final bit of the snippet: https://www.cathymacraeauthor.com/bits-n-bobs-author-blog

BUY LINKS:

Amazon: https://www.amzn.com/dp/B086Z153VH

 

Thank you so much for sharing that excerpt, Cathy. Hopefully, I’ll be seeing everyone on Cathy’s blog today as well for my snippet from Time Enough to Love.

And see you next Monday for the final excerpt from my Time Enough to Love romance on Medieval Monday.

The Time Enough to Love medieval romance series by Jenna Jaxon

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 7/05/20 Only Marriage Will Do ~ “I Don’t Like This”

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

For July I’m celebrating Christmas all month, so one would think I’d take snippets from one of my Christmas novellas. However, instead I’m choosing a Christmas scene from the second House of Pleasure book, Only Marriage Will Do, which is now up for pre-order on Amazon. It will release on July 31.  

 

Check out my new blurb for Only Marriage Will Do:

BLURB: 

Not all Happy-ever-afters begin at “I do.”

Two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down. The first claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was betrothed to him once upon a time. To deter him, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger appears, declaring he is her husband. But when she is finally alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. Against his better judgment, he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate far to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. However, the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head again, forcing Amiable to wonder if he is married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is compelled to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

I begin my snippets for Marriage well into the story just as I did for Scandal. Captain Amiable Dawson and Lady Juliet Ferrers married in July under rather strange circumstances: another man, a former suitor, has claimed he is already married to Juliet.She and Amiable spent the autumn months trying to verify that their marriage was indeed valid, but have not heard definitively from the courts. So on Christmas Eve, Amiable’s sisters have thrown them a reception to celebrate their marriage.

EXCERPT:

Laughing to herself, Juliet peered about the crowded room and spied Katarina near the entrance to the ballroom, a strange man, dressed in plain clothing, at her side. Deep in conversation, the two seemed at odds. Some instinct urged her to flight–she clutched her husband’s arm, her gaze darting about for Duncan.

“What is wrong, my dear?” Amiable looked down at her, frown lines springing onto his brow, “Are you fatigued already?”

“No, but look at the man Kat is talking to. Do you know him? He seems out of place here, don’t you think?” She glanced back to find her sister-in-law beckoning to them. “I don’t like this.”

And now to finish the scene :

“It’s likely nothing to alarm you. sweet. I’ll go see what this is about.” He took a step toward the mismatched couple.

“No.” She dug her fingers into his arm, and he pulled her forward with his momentum. “I won’t let you go, no matter what.”

 

Only Marriage Will Do is available on Amazon for pre-order until July 31 at the pre-order price of just $1.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, Saturday, August 1. Grab yours while you can!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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Happy 4th of July!

Wishing everyone a

Happy 4th of July!

This year, believe it or not, our timeshare week begins today, July 4th, so my husband and I are traveling down to the Outer Banks for a week of relaxing in the sun while staying socially distant. I hope to send you pictures and videos of our home away from home that we’ve had for over thirty years. We absolutly love  the place and can’t wait to get there again, despite COVID-19. We do plan to be careful when eating out and at the pool (I seldom even go to the pool, just sit on the deck and relax and write) so I’m excited to be going back.

The 4th of July has been special for the last 18 years, every since we moved to eastern Virginia, just across the York River from Yorktown and Williamsburg where the American Experiment began. It’s brought a deeper sense of history to me living here where our independence was won.

(Pictures courtesy of Wikimedia Commons.)

So I hope your celebration for the day is full of fun, food, and (at a safe distance) family.

HAPPY 4TH OF JULY!

Last year I posted the musical number “Battle of Yorktown” from Hamilton because it fit so well with the celebration of our Independence Day. So I’ve re-posted it again. And if you have the new Disney Plus channel, you can watch the entire musical with the original cast. I absolutely recommend it for your 4th of July celebration pleasure.

The Battle of Yorktown

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