Sweet Saturday Sample: 9/01/2 Time Enough To Love–Betrothal “A Stir of Desire”

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Welcome back to Sweet Saturday Sample!  All excerpts here are rated PG-13 or milder. Here’s another post from my new WIP, my medieval trilogy Time Enough To Love.  Part 1 is called Betrothal.  The series is set in England and France in 1348.  Betrothal takes place at the court of King Edward III.

Lady Alyse de Courcy is a waiting gentlewoman to Princess Joanna, youngest daughter of King Edward.  After receiving the news that the new courtier, Sir Geoffrey Longford, is her betrothed, a dazed Alyse is less than happy with her arranged marriage.   Today’s snippet takes place after their initial meeting.,  I’ve switched to Geoffrey and Thomas in their chamber. It picks up the last line or two from last week’s Six Sentence Sunday post.  Thomas is rather in a snit when Geoffrey turns him down on an offer for a “night out with the boys.”  He leaves Geoffrey with his thoughts of Alyse, which turn more intimate as he prepares for bed.

DISCLAIMER:  TODAY’S EXCERPT IS PG-13.

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His thoughts turned to the more intimate things she would have to get used to, a stir of desire rising in him. He imagined her thick black hair, fanned out on the bed, her full-lipped mouth beneath his, and the small dark mole just above the right corner of her lips tantalizing because of its exotic nature. That dot had entranced Geoffrey in the Great Hall earlier. His mind fixed on the tiny, curious mark, and filled his head with images of his mouth on hers, his tongue creeping up to touch the seductive spot. A shiver coursed through him.

The image of her naked, luscious body rose before him, as did his insistent cock. Thought of two weeks of such torture elicited a low groan. Perhaps he’d seek relief with another before the wedding night. Too much hunger might make him overeager and the last thing he wanted was to hurt Alyse more than necessary. The problems of sampling plain fare were not unknown to him, though his tastes usually ran as Thomas’s did to the more experienced. Still… this plain fare, with the addition of a little spice, would be quite enjoyable.

  With that pleasant thought, Geoffrey quit the window, doffed his chausses and doused the light. He contemplated the morrow when the campaign for the capitulation of Lady Alyse would begin, its success to be decided in this bed two weeks hence. As he drifted down into sleep, Geoffrey grinned in anticipation:  he dearly loved a challenge.

Thus ends Chapter 1.  What do you think?  I have a tentative release date for Betrothal of mid-October, with the other two books to come in November and December.  I can’t wait to share more of this story with you. 🙂

I hope you enjoyed this latest sample from  Time Enough to Love.  Stop by SSS tomorrow for six sentences from 7 Days of Seduction.   And today be sure to click here to visit more Sweet Samples.

   

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Romancing the Hop

One of my all-time favorite movies is Romancing the Stone.  Romance and comedy go hand in hand in this wonderfully plotted story, with characters you cared about and fell in love with from the first screen images until the last.  You (the viewer) couldn’t help but be swept up in the life of Joan Wilder, romance novelist, as she lives the life she’s written about but has never experienced.

Have we ever experienced true romance?  Is it candlelight dinners and flowers and long walks on the beach?  Or is it risking your all, fighting beside your significant other, to rescue them and save the day?  Not just Romancing the Stone fits this definition, but Last of the Mohicans (Daniel Day Lewis, be still my heart!), Star Wars, and Mr. & Mrs. Smith.

What are you willing to lose to gain everything?  How do you gauge romance in your life?

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My characters in Only Scandal Will Do are more than willing to fight alongside each other-
-or facing one another!  Lady Katarina is capable of meeting any man with a sword in her hand, while Duncan Ferrers, Marquess of Dalbury, itches to meet her–in more ways than one! Katarina leads him a merry chase and they must learn all the facets of romance before they are truly satisfied.

Excerpt from Only Scandal Will Do:

“I assure you, there was never a night like that before.” Lord Dalbury spoke quietly, and Katarina sensed a tension in him. “I had never done such a thing before. Never participated in such an auction. Never tried to take a woman unwillingly to my bed.” He stopped speaking. Just stopped. Then his breath hissed as though he’d slowly released it.

“I cannot find the words to tell you how deeply I regret I was not a better man who night.” He paused, and she held still and waited. “What I tried to do was madness, without thought, without honor. I do not even have an excuse other than my base desires, and that your abundant charms overwhelmed me.” His face was shadowy in the scarce light of the sickle moon, but he sounded contrite. “I have no right to ask for your forgiveness. I have no right to expect it. But I would ask you to allow me to attempt to remedy the situation.”

Kat shook her head slowly. “What on earth do you believe you could do, Lord Dalbury, that could even come close to a remedy for the terror and humiliation you put me through? Do you think now that I have met you, heard your feeble attempts at an apology, and rejected them, the memory of that night will magically disappear?” She fought to control her anger, though she yearned to blast him with it. “What magic potion would you have me take that would erase the memory of you pinning me to the bed? Because if you have such an elixir, then yes, I will gladly take it from you and obliterate you absolutely and irrevocably.”

He stood silent at her words, then said simply, “I have only myself to offer, my lady.”

“You would have me kill you, my lord? In that, too, I agree I would oblige you, but not at the cost of my own life. I understand the English law punishes those who do murder quite severely.” Kat was astonished when he lurched backward, as from a blow.

“No, my lady, I would not have you kill me,” he said, sounding grimly amused. “Though indeed that would probably give you most satisfaction. I meant I would have you marry me.”

His words surprised a laugh out of her. “Marry you?” The laughter grew. “I see, my lord, you think me both a whore and a fool.”

“I think you are neither, Lady Katarina.”

“Then you are the fool to believe I would put such a man as you in control of every aspect of my life.” That he thought she would even entertain the suggestion was insulting.

The pale moonlight shadowed his face, but she could read displeasure there just the same. “You judge me solely on one act that, I assure you, was grossly out of character for me. You cannot possibly know what kind of husband I would be.”

“And never will, Lord Dalbury. I can swear to you that I would not marry you if I were in Hell and you were my only hope of Heaven.”

He inclined his head toward her, a faint smile touching his lips. “I believe you made a similar claim about dancing with me, Lady Katarina. Yet we have indeed enjoyed a dance together despite your words.” His tone was soft, the sensuous, cajoling one he had used to seduce her that night in the House of Pleasure.

Kat trembled, recalling the incredible sensations of his hands, his mouth on her body. Damn. He could not do this to her again. Not just with his voice.

“Is there nothing that would entice you to leave your Hell for my Heaven?”

She struggled to answer, opened her lips to deny it, only to find her mouth completely sealed by his.

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7 Days of Seduction for Horny Hump Day 8/29/12 : Day 3

WARNING:  MATERIAL NOT SUITABLE FOR THOSE UNDER THE AGE OF 18!

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Participating authors in Horny Hump Day post three sentences from their published works or WIP, hot like a firecracker! LOL

Today’s Horny Hump Day has another new nibble from my current erotic novella WIP, 7 Days of Seduction.  I’m on 2nd round edits for it, so I’m hoping in a week or two I’ll be announcing a release date! 🙂

So Day Three has Ashley and Hunter on a dinner date.  Although dinner may not only be what’s on the plate.  He’s just slipped Ashley out of her dress.

 

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She now stood dressed in thigh high black stockings, stacked heels and nothing else. Her breasts jutted out, nipples peaked by the sudden change in temperature. Hunter swallowed, closed his eyes and tried to think of something other than shoving his dick into her perfect creamy flesh.

The pic isn’t exactly right for the scene, but I LOVE it!

 

BTW–My full-length historical novel, Only Scandal Will Do is available for purchase on Amazon, iTunes, ARe and the Lyrical Press store.

Please check out the Horny Hump Day blog site for the other sites on the hop and go visit the other hot authors.   The site also gives the details of how to sign up for next week if you’d like to play with us. 🙂

Thanks so much for visiting the Journal once more for Horny Hump Day.

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“Finish The Damn Book” Contest

For those of you who don’t know, I’m a member of the Chesapeake Romance Writers, my local chapter of Romance Writers of America.  This past year has been a rough one for the chapter because we lost long-time member Judi McCoy, author of fourteen romances and the very popular “Dogwalker” romantic mystery series.

Judi was a driving force in our chapter, a mentor to new writers, a great critique partner, and an avid dog lover.  Her beloved bichon frise, Rudy, was a rescue dog and Judy supported the Tidewater Bichon Frise Rescue organization where she adopted him.

To honor the memory of Judi and Rudy, Chesapeake Romance Writers is holding what we hope will become an annual writer’s contest, called “Finish the Damn Book!”  That was one of Judi’s favorite pieces of advice to all of us writers and we thought it an apropos title for this contest.  If you’ve finished a book, at least 55K in length, please consider submitting it to our contest.  A portion of the proceeds will be donated to the Tidewater Bichon Frise Rescue organization in memory of Judi and Rudy.

Complete details for the contest can be found on our website, or you can email crwc@rocketmail.com with any questions, but I’ll give you the highlights here.

The contest is open to both published and unpublished authors.

To enter you need to submit the first and last chapters of your unpublished 55K+ manuscript, plus a synopsis of the entire work.  Total submission must not exceed 50 pages.

Deadline for Entry Fee:  5:00pm October 1, 2012

Deadline for Submissions:  5:00pm October 12, 2012

Categories include:  Contemporary, Paranormal, Historical, Mainstream with Romantic Elements, and Young Adult.

Three finalists from each category will advance to Finals Judging.

Finalist Judges for the contest:

Contemporary: Deb Nemeth, Carina Press

Paranormal: Amanda Barnett, The Wild Rose Press

Historical: Mary Murray, Lyrical Press

Mainstream w/Romantic Elements: Valerie Mann, Decadent Publishing

Young Adult: TBA

Entry Fee:  $25.00 for RWA members, $35.00 for non-RWA members

All Finalists will receive a certificate and a banner for their website.                                                                                               First place Winners in each category will receive a Rudy Statuette and a check for $50.00.                                                                       All entrants will receive detailed feedback on their first-round score sheets.

I hope you will consider entering our “Finish the Damn Book!” Contest.  You’ll get great feedback and the chance to get your work before some excellent judges in the publishing industry.  If you have questions for me, you can ask via comments or my Contact Me page.

I hope to see your name on a finalist list come November 30!

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Six Sentence Sunday–08/26/12 7 Days of Seduction: Day 2

Happy Sunday!  I’m continuing with 7 Days of Seduction, an erotic novella I hope will be ready for publication soon!

This snippet takes place on Day 2–after waking from a very erotic dream, Ashley decides to relieve her unsatisfied passion in the shower.  About to get down to business, she’s interrupted by the very man she’s been trying to find, the hunk on the sex video.  He appears and invites himself into her shower.

He clenched her nipple tips, tweaking them hard enough to cause pain that morphed into pleasure. Her pussy flooded with heat and moisture, an ache she’d wanted satisfied since her dream—hell, since Friday night.

As if reading her mind, Hunter stepped back, leaving her panting. “Hang on a minute, Ash.” He turned away and when he turned back around he’d sheathed his cock in bright orange.

Ashley stared then smiled, remembering the Smurf dick from the video, and asked, “Are you always so colorful?”

Thanks so much for visiting me today.  Now pop over to the Six Sentence Sunday list and check out the rest of the snippets.  They’re fantastic!

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Sweet Saturday Sample: 8/2512 Time Enough To Love–Betrothal

Welcome back to Sweet Saturday Sample!  All excerpts here are rated PG-13 or milder. Here’s another post from my new WIP, my medieval trilogy Time Enough To Love.  Part 1 is called Betrothal.  The series is set in England and France in 1348.  Betrothal takes place at the court of King Edward III.

Lady Alyse de Courcy is a waiting gentlewoman to Princess Joanna, youngest daughter of King Edward.  After receiving the news that the new courtier, Sir Geoffrey Longford, is her betrothed, a dazed Alyse is less than happy with her arranged marriage.   Today’s snippet takes place after their initial meeting.,  I’ve switched to Geoffrey and Thomas in their chamber. It picks up the last line or two from last week’s Six Sentence Sunday post.  Thomas is rather in a snit when Geoffrey turns him down on an offer for a “night out with the boys.”  He leaves Geoffrey with his thoughts of Alyse.

“You know, Geoffrey, according to the art of courtly love it is the height of bad manners to fall in love with your own wife. A man’s true love is found with another man’s lady.” Thomas always saw too much.

He coolly turned the tables. “Mayhap, then, you will oblige me by marrying Lady Alyse yourself, lest I disappoint the rules.”

With a snort of derision Thomas got to his feet, apparently done sparring for the night. “Not for the wide world, my friend.  Although I bear you great love, Geoffrey, I would not saddle myself with an untried maid even on a bet. To which end I did not offer for the fair Alyse when I had the chance.” He set his empty cup down and flashed even white teeth at his companion. “I prefer the well-seasoned dish to plain fare.” He made for the door then turned as he opened it. “Are you not coming?”

Geoffrey rose and stretched. “Nay, Thomas. I have business to attend to in the morning. Another time, mayhap.”

With a groan, Thomas left the chamber to Geoffrey, who went to stare out the window at the shadowy trees across the royal park. Thomas’s question still preyed on his mind. The lightning stab of desire when he caught the maid’s eye he understood well. She was comely, with face and form fashioned to warm a man’s bed well. But why did his flesh seem afire whenever he touched her?  Such feelings were alien, unknown in all his previous dealings with women. This was different—and disturbing.

 He sighed, and thought of the changes that would soon rule his life. Already ruled it. His refusal to carouse with Thomas was the first sacrifice. He had always matched Thomas pace for pace in whatever pastime they favored—hawking, gaming, wenching. This was the first night he had cried off. Too bad he disappointed his friend, but he had devised a plan to satisfy Alyse’s need for time and wanted to put it into motion at the soonest possible moment. Which meant an early breakfast.

He imagined his betrothed’s face, her crystal blue eyes wide when he laid the plan before her, and could not suppress a smile. She might be outraged, but he aimed to give her exactly what she had asked for. Hercules had succeeded at another labor; she would have to become used to life with a resourceful man. 

What is Geoffrey planning?  And will it succeed?

I hope you enjoyed this latest sample from  Time Enough to Love.  Stop by SSS tomorrow for six sentences from 7 Days of Seduction.   And today be sure to click here to visit moreSweet Samples.

   

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Friday Favorites: The Beta

I know a lot of readers and writers are totally enamored of their alpha heroes.  And who wouldn’t be?  They’re a strong, incredibly motivated, take-charge kind of guy.

But what about the other males in the book?  The best friend, the sidekick, in some cases, the comic relief.  Do you have a favorite among the betas in books?

In my books, I’m probably most partial to Thomas Knowlton, Earl of Brayton, in Time Enough to Love.  Now, I know early on in the first book, Betrothal, Thomas does not show himself in a very sympathetic light.  He’s jealous of Geoffrey’s attentions to his betrothed and his anger gets the better of him, causing him to make trouble between the couple.  But Thomas learns the error of his ways and comes to value the friendship of both Geoffrey and Alyse.  Here’s a little snippet from the point where Thomas has an epiphany regarding Alyse.

He lifted his carefully penitent face to hers, opened his mouth to speak, then paused, as if he would change his mind. His eyes widened, as if with some revelation, and his mask of composure seemed swept away, leaving in its wake a man full of contrition.

“Lady Alyse de Courcy. You see before you a man with a contrite heart who would ask your gracious mercy. In my infinite folly, I have spoken words against your gentle character that were false and slanderous. They have, indeed, caused you much pain. I acknowledge these words were spoken without true understanding of your intellect or your kind, generous nature and therefore were falsely judgmental.” Here Thomas peered into her eyes beseechingly. “I sincerely regret the grievous harm I have done you, lady. Had I the power to recall those words, they would have never been spoken. I regret that is not within the realm of God’s mercy. I can only offer what little I have, and therefore lay my hand and my heart before you. If it is within your kind nature to forgive a wretch such as I, I swear my hand to your service and my heart to your purpose, what’ere it may be, from this day forward.”

Stunned and touched by the sincere words, Alyse sat silent for several moments,  amazed that there had been none of the glib courtier in that apology. His words had come not from his head, but from his heart. An unexpected turn of events. The primary reason she had declined to hear his apology was her fear that it would be all pretty words with no  true feeling behind them. To her shame, she had sorely misjudged him. There had been too much honesty in his words for her to doubt his sincerity, too much genuine remorse in his warm brown eyes at the end to mistrust him. 

I like a man who admits when he’s wrong.  And a little grovelling never hurt either.  Still, Thomas is a very charismatic character, though he’s actually a beta, and I’ve grown very fond of him.

So, who’s your favorite beta male?  Please share him with us!

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Virginity Unmasked

As an author of historical romance, I find myself preoccupied with rather odd things to research at times.  Bathing, as I’ve commented on in an earlier post, ways to execute people, symptoms of the Bubonic Plague.  You know, fun stuff. 🙂

When I was writing the second book in my House of Pleasure series, Only Marriage Will Do, I came to a point where a woman is accused of having had her virginity repaired after an indiscretion.  I’d read that such things have been done throughout history and while researching this fascinating subject, I ran into some other information that raised my eyebrows.

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Most historical romance authors, except for those who write sweet or inspirational works, have at some point written a deflowering scene.  Married or not, the virgin takes the plunge and makes love for the first time with the hero.  So, at what point does the deflowering take place?

Where is the hymen, that historical measurement of a young girl’s virgin status, located on a woman’s body?  Until I did my research, I believed that it was a membrane that stretched across the vagina, about a quarter of the way into it.  I’d read many romance novels where the hero penetrated well past the opening before encountering this little barrier.  He could even change his mind, back out, and have her still remain a virgin.

Well, not to burst any bubbles, but it ain’t necessarily so.

The hymen is actually a membrane that surrounds the opening to the vagina. Here’s a diagram from The Marriage Bed that shows where it is.  According to A Hymen Primer for Romance Writers, “It’s maybe a centimeter in there, it’s thin verging on transparent, and it generally comes pre-perfed.” When a man inserts his “manhood” for the first time, the membrane tears, there’s a little pain and likely some blood.  But it’s right there at the opening–there is no going back in reality.  If smaller things–like fingers– are inserted, the hymen likely won’t tear.  It’s already perforated to varying degrees in the center, so it will accommodate some things.

When I read about this, I went back and changed my deflowering scene in Only Scandal Will Do.  I do like accuracy.

But then I began to wonder, “How did the “half-way-up-the-vagina” position come to be so popular?  More research ensued.  And led me back to my original question, “How do you repair a hymen?”

Today it can be done with surgery or “fake hymens.”  In the 18th century and before most likely a small bladder of animal blood was inserted into the vagina of the non-virgin.  When the man entered the woman he would encounter the bladder about half-way up the vagina, rupture it, cause the blood to flow and voila, a virgin is deflowered. There are other methods as well, but this is probably the one that gave rise to that particular myth.

Hymens are actually a poor indicator of virginity.  For instance, a hymen may actually be present, yet a woman may not bleed the first time she has intercourse. “It is highly elastic and in most cases perfectly capable of stretching enough to fit a penis without tearing. In most women it doesn’t show any obvious changes after penetration, so there is no way to determine by the state of the hymen whether a woman has ever been penetrated by a penis or not,” according to Dr. Pisaster in her article The Cherry Myth. Bleeding is often caused not by the hymen tearing, but by lack of proper lubrication.

So my research paid off.  I’m more informed about women’s anatomy and the placement of the hymen.  Will this help me write a hotter love scene?  I’m not sure, but when my virgin is deflowered, I hope everyone will be satisfied.

Have you read or written a love scene where the heroine gets deflowered?  How did you approach this delicate subject?  Does accuracy count here, or is poetic license allowed?

 

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7 Days of Seduction for Horny Hump Day 8/22/12 : Day 2

WARNING:  MATERIAL NOT SUITABLE FOR THOSE UNDER THE AGE OF 18!

NOT SAFE FOR WORK!

Participating authors in Horny Hump Day post three sentences from their published works or WIP, hot like a firecracker! LOL

Today’s Horny Hump Day has a nibble from my current erotic novella WIP, 7 Days of Seduction, which I’m thrilled to show off the new cover for! I changed the title from the written “seven” to the number 7, but I’m still tickled about it.:)

So Day Two has Ashley hot for the phantom hunk on the video, but she doesn’t know who he is.  And she’s desperate to find out. So she’s dreaming about him just before she wakes.

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“You gonna come for me, Ash?” His husky voice made her every hair stand on end. He set the tip of his tongue against the peak of her nipple and licked around it, hard.

BTW–My full-length historical novel, Only Scandal Will Do is available for purchase on Amazon, iTunes, ARe and the Lyrical Press store.

I’ve also got an interview and review today at From The TBR Pile with a swag pack giveaway.

Please check out the Horny Hump Day blog site for the other sites on the hop and go visit the other hot authors.   The site also gives the details of how to sign up for next week if you’d like to play with us. 🙂

Thanks so much for visiting the Journal once more for Horny Hump Day.

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Six Sentence Sunday–08/19/12 7 Days of Seduction

Happy Sunday!  I’m changing to another WIP, 7 Days of Seduction, an erotic novella I hope will be ready for publication soon!

This snippet takes place on Day 1–a little after my Horny Hump Day offering on Wednesday.  Ashley and Sam are watching the video of their menage with a stranger last night–a menage neither of them remembers.

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“My dick is cold,” Sam whimpered from the video. The Ashley of last night ignored him, instead running her tongue over the hunk’s chest as her fingers tugged on his nipples.

She looked down to see her hands plucking her hard crests through the tee-shirt. “We need to stop this, Sam.”

“Are you crazy?  This is one of the hottest sex videos I’ve seen in weeks—and we haven’t even gotten to the good parts yet!”

Thanks so much for visiting me today.  Now pop over to the Six Sentence Sunday list and check out the rest of the snippets.  You’ll have a blast!

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