Six Sentence Sunday 8/21–As Long As You’re Mine

We’re back once more for Six Sentence Sunday.  I truly appreciate everyone’s comments each week.  Thank you to all who choose to visit my blog.  I hope you’re having as much fun as I am.  Last week my blog hit its record high for hits for one day.  I’m really psyched!

This week, again we see another scene with Rafe and Samantha.  Today we’re going to eavesdrop on a bit of their meeting out under the copper beech.  Rafe has just asked her if she will consent to become his wife.

“You don’t want to marry me.”

            “No, my lady, I must say I do not.”

             “Thank God,” she said as she let out the breath she had been holding, and relaxed. “Did you tell my father that you didn’t want to marry me?” she asked, then pushed herself away from the tree and came to stand before him, looking up expectantly.

            “No, I never voiced that opinion to him,” Rafael said, looking at her curiously.  The animation that had sprung into her face transformed her from a merely beautiful woman to an exquisite woman of unparalleled beauty; it was like watching life breathed into a china doll.

At last Samantha has an ally; or does she?

Hope you’re still enjoying the six each week from As Long As You’re Mine. Next week we’ll see what we can come up with.

For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.

And if you liked my six, perhaps you’d like some of my published work as well.  Heart of Deception, is available for purchase from Books To Go Now!, and Hog Wild from New Dawning International Bookfair.  Both are available from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks.

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31 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday 8/21–As Long As You’re Mine

  1. I liked the china doll line, but I confess I found the sentence awkward because of using ‘woman’ twice 🙂

    As always, I eagerly await what comes next 😉

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  2. Cindy's avatar Cindy says:

    Can’t wait to read the whole story!! Rage is sounding more amazing each week.

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  3. I sooooo hope this turns out to be a marriage of (in)convenience romance! Likeing Rafe more and more. Samanatha, too.

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  4. Aimee Laine's avatar Aimee Laine says:

    A truthful bachelor?
    ““No, my lady, I must say I do not.””
    Priceless! 🙂

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  5. Sue's avatar Sue says:

    Nooo, of couse neither wishes to marry the other. Of course not – 😀 🙂

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  6. This is taking an interesting turn!

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  7. Toni Kelly's avatar Toni Kelly says:

    love your six as usual. Congrats on the contract with your other work. You deserve it after all your hard work.

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  8. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    I can’t wait to read the whole book!

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  9. Gem Sivad's avatar Gem Sivad says:

    I love your voice and this story is out of the ball park. Is it/ when will it be/ how soon and where–available?

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Thank you so much, Gem! I’m not quite half way through revisions, but my goal is to complete them this week. Then betas and out to publishers–so a little while? But I’m determined to get it out ASAP! 🙂

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  10. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    Oh, very very good! Excellent six. That last sentence was brilliant.

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  11. Lia Davis's avatar Lia Davis says:

    Love these two. Thanks for sharing.

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  12. Sherry Gloag's avatar Sherry Gloag says:

    Ooooh I love this last line. Is he going to persue her after all, I wonder?

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  13. authorjenniferlowery's avatar Jennifer Lowery~Writer says:

    An ally? Hmmm…maybe eventually 🙂 Great six, Jenna! And congrats on reaching a record high on your blog!

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  14. caseama's avatar caseamajor says:

    An ally indeed. She is a silly goose for wanting out of this arrangement. But I love that he is so open with her and honest.

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      He’s going to be upfront with her, that’s for sure. And she has her reasons for wanting out. If anyone can bring her around, it’s Rafe. Thanks, for coming by, Casea!

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  15. Lindsay's avatar Lindsay says:

    If I’m not mistaken wasn’t Samantha totally and completely compromised by Rafe, this one, not the one she wants to marry. And wasn’t said compromise witnessed by her father of all people. As such, considering the times, why would she be given the choice to marry. It’s a give. I turly can’t wait to read how she will get out of this situation.

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Yes, Lindsay, she’s throoughly compromised. But she’s also as stubborn as a bulldog with a bone. LOL Her father told Rafe she has a very inventive way of thinking. But you’ll have to wait to see what happens!

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