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Okay, I can’t stop myself. Since Betrothal just released, I’m continuing with a sample from my medieval, Time Enough to Love: Book 1 ~ Betrothal.
BETROTHAL
RELEASED ON APRIL 19!
WOOHOO!
This series is set in England and France in 1348. Part 1, Betrothal, takes place at the court of King Edward III.
You can read April 14’s post here.
This excerpt takes place later that night, after Alyse and Geoffrey’s quarrel and Geoffrey and Thomas’s violent disagreement. Alyse is in the Great Hall, thinking about her options.
She could not decide who had angered her most. Geoffrey’s betrayal stung mightily, but she believed him led astray by his friend. She was more than willing to heap blame on that conceited lord, whose earlier disregard incensed her anew. Bitter memories of Lord Braeton blatantly ignoring her at court functions flooded her mind, and she winced to think how she had tried to dally with him the few times they had conversed.
Well, she had gotten the better of him last night. She smiled for the first time that day at the thought of her banter with him. He had seemed more
respectful of her after she had taken him down a peg. And appreciative. She recalled his appraising look after their exchange.
As if he saw me for the first time.
Alyse sat straight up on her bench. Had her spirited wordplay drawn his attention at last? Perhaps he had sown seeds of discord between her and Geoffrey out of jealousy. Perchance he was angry that she had to marry another.
Too late.
She slouched again. She was betrothed to Geoffrey. Nothing could change that. Could it? Had she ever heard of a betrothal being broken?
She glanced around the room, recalling as much gossip as possible from the past months. Had there not been talk about Lady Mary Percy and Sir Roger Delaney? One person surely knew.
“Maurya.”

llustration of an ”entremet”, a type of medieval meal entertainment, staged at a banquet given by Charles V of France
Her companion turned to her and shook her head. “’Tis too early to retire yet, Alyse. Wait a bit and I shall get John to escort you.”
“Nay, ’tis not that.” Alyse glanced at Patrick on her left and lowered her voice. “Tell me about Sir Roger’s betrothal. ’Tis no longer contracted, is it?”
Maurya met her eyes with a hard stare. “Do not think of it, Alyse. Your spat with Sir Geoffrey will blow away like a March wind. He is an honorable and chivalrous man. If you give him a chance, I believe he will make amends for his behavior.”
Alyse gazed back at her, undeterred. “They were betrothed, were they not? And now she is to wed another.”
I hope you enjoyed this latest sample from Betrothal. Join me tomorrow on Weekend Writing Warriors for the REAL conclusion to my excerpts from Book I of Time Enough to Love.
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I’m also curious about this other couple. I’d guess that breaking an engagement was a pretty big deal back then.
Congratulations on your release!
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It was a big deal, but the king had absolute say. Check out my WWW post for some answers about the fate of Lady Mary and Sir Roger. Thanks for coming by, Carrie Anne. 🙂
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For some reason I burst out into the song “Yesterday” and Jess ran from the room. Book sounds great. Love the cover. (I would tell you its nice, but turns out people don’t like that.)
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“Yesterday?” Okay. I’m glad you like the cover, Liza. LOL From you that’s a great compliment. 🙂 Thanks for coming by!
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Again congrats on your release. She’d better grow up and understand she’s not going to get the man she wants.
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Alyse does have some growing up to do. She’s been rather pampered until now. She needs to put on her big girl panties and…oh, that’s right. There were no panties in 1348. LOL I guess she’ll figure it out. 🙂 Thanks for coming by, Lindsay!
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Not good! She needs to get over her snit!
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Alyse has a way of holding onto her “ideal love” that gets her into trouble time and again. 🙂 She does need to get over it! Thanks for coming by, Ella!
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Yes am curious about the other couple too but Alyse is just weighing her options me thinks. Glad to see it’s up on Amazon and doing well
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Thanks, Sue! Yes, Alyse is weighing her options (which were few), and she’s still mad at Geoffrey, so hope springs eternal (well, not quite as the book relates).
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Intriguing snippet. I’m curious as to what will happen…I like how her companion sees through her 🙂
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Alyse would never make a poker player! So glad you like the story. Thanks for coming by. 🙂
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Congrats on the release. It’s a great story.
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Thank you, Elaine! I appreciate your kind words. 🙂
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Great snippet, Jenna. I wonder what happened to the other couple.
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Oh, you find out in the book. And it’s not something Alyse wants to hear! Thanks for coming by, Sara. 🙂
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