Six Sentence Sunday–11/20 Almost Perfect

Back for another snippet at Six Sentence Sunday?   Thank you to both first-time visitors and those who return each week.  I appreciate everyone stopping by.  

My erotic Contemporary Almost Perfect releases this coming Friday!  So I’m giving you the next six from the book.  Hope you enjoy!  LOL  

Stranded on a desert island,  expecting her fantasy 1 Night Stand date–an Orlando Bloom-esque pirate ready to ravish her with her full permission–Pam finds instead her ex-husband.  While trying to make small-talk, their conversation turns  nasty; then nasty gives way to downright rude!

“You were at the damned office all day and half the night–can I help it if I was too exhausted to stay awake to ‘service’ you when you got in at 3am?”

“Why you were you so exhausted, Pam? You sat around and watched those damned movies all day long. How tiring is that? Unless there were additional ‘coming’ attractions in-between show times?” The mild manner of his voice suggested disinterest, but his eyes focused on her face, alert for any hint of guilt.

 The gloves (not the panties) are coming off!  Come back next week for six more sentences for Almost Perfect.   And please visit the other Six Sentence Sunday snippets.  You’ll be glad you did!

Don’t forget:  My giveaways are still going on until Monday for the In-Between Days Blog Hop  AND the Save a Turkey: Gobble a Book Blog Hop.  Sure hope to see you on in the winner’s circle!

Have a great Sunday!

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21 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday–11/20 Almost Perfect

  1. I can’t imagine a more tense situation, wow!

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  2. I loved the tension and inuendo.

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  3. Alix Cameron's avatar Alix Cameron says:

    Great writing!!

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  4. MSmith's avatar mirriamsmyth says:

    Wow, great tension between them. Funny how bitterness always brings out the worst in people.

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  5. Congrats on your upcoming release! Love the tension here!

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  6. Good choice of six, Jenna! The tension is so thick you’d need a chainsaw to cut it.

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  7. You know, it seems they should have had this conversation long before they divorced. I can tell they still have feelings for each other. Wonder how it’ll work out?

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  8. Wonderful six…love the tension and emotion. Congrats on your release 🙂

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  9. So not your typical 1NS. Can’t wait! 🙂

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  10. Nina Pierce's avatar Nina Pierce says:

    Of course I can’t help but wonder why the exes are together. Best of luck with the new rlease.

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  11. One of my favorite parts of a book is intense dialogue scenes. You’ve captured it well, Jenna.

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  12. Gem Sivad's avatar Gem Sivad says:

    Let the games begin. *BG* Love the tension between these two.

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  13. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    Ooooooh I love it when characters fight with words!!!

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  14. gayleramage's avatar gayleramage says:

    Great snippet and glad she didn’t get her Orlando Bloom fantasy – this is much more interesting! 😀

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  15. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    Boy is he mad. I wonder how these two can ever get back together?

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  16. Liz Crowe's avatar Liz Crowe says:

    nicely done….I love the tension.

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  17. Carly Fall's avatar Carly Fall says:

    This date isn’t going to be one for the picture album, is it? 🙂
    Nice six.

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  18. Sue's avatar Sue says:

    this will end by either the panties coming off, or one of them strangling the other. At this point I can’t tell which it will be.

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  19. Lia Davis's avatar Lia Davis says:

    This isn’t going so well. lol Love it. I so want to stay in this conversation to see how it ends. 🙂 Great six.

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  20. Lindsay's avatar Lindsay says:

    You can hear the bitterness in his voice.

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