Six Sentence Sunday–11/13 Almost Perfect

Back for another snippet at Six Sentence Sunday?   Thank you to both first-time visitors and those who return each week.  I appreciate everyone stopping by.  

My erotic Contemporary Almost Perfect releases in two weeks so I thought I’d share that with you this week and next. 

Stranded on a desert island,  expecting her fantasy 1 Night Stand date–an Orlando Bloom-esque pirate ready to ravish her with her full permission–Pam finds instead her ex-husband.  While trying to make small-talk, their conversation turns  nasty.

 “What I do with my alimony is my damn business, Roger. You wanted out of the marriage bad enough to pay substantially for it.”

“I think any man would want out of a marriage where his wife compares him to a lukewarm Pee-wee Herman, then likens his lovemaking skills to ‘Pee-wee’s Big Top Adventure with the good bits taken out.’”  Spoken in a soft, even tone, the words made Pam squirm, but there was no way to deny it—those were her exact words the night he threw her out.

“I just called it as I saw it, Roger.”

“And you saw it so infrequently I’m surprised you remembered.”

Did I say this got nasty?  Understatement of the year! LOL  Come back next week when things really heat up between these two!  And please visit the other Six Sentence Sunday snippets.  You’ll be glad you did!

Don’t forget:  my day to tell you all about my upcoming release is this Monday, November 14.  I’ll be having a giveaway featuring Almost Perfect, plus an Amazon gift card to kick off both the In-Between Days tour  AND the Save a Turkey: Gobble a Book Blog Hop.  Sure hope to see you on Monday!

Have a great Sunday!

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20 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday–11/13 Almost Perfect

  1. Awesome six! I love that last line! I look forward to seeing what you have for us next Sunday! Have a great week!

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  2. I think there’s still something between them! What’s he doing there, otherwise? Can’t wait until the ‘pirate’ shows up!

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  3. Ouch. Unmarital not bliss. 😉

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  4. Lydia Sharp's avatar Lydia Sharp says:

    Love that last line.

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  5. i like t he blog and would love read it and blog it on face book
    and would love to blog to my face book

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  6. Sherry Gloag's avatar Sherry Gloag says:

    Yep, you said it got nasty! I reckon retribution is-a-comin’ Best wishes with the relase

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  7. the bookcover is great and would like to win and read it

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  8. OH YEAH….great tension and dialogue….you did an amazing job with this scene.

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  9. Cheryl Yeko's avatar Cheryl Yeko says:

    Man, she’s good! And his come back…awesome.

    Great six.

    -Cheryl

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  10. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    Ouch! Great scene, Jenna!

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  11. Pee-Wee Herman? LOL!!! Now that’s a low blow.

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  12. Wonderful choice for your six sentences, Jenna!

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  13. Sue's avatar Sue says:

    hmm she did not mince words, did she. No wonder he kicked her out.

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  14. Pee Wee Herman! OMG. Loved the conflict.

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  15. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    WOW, WOW, WOW!!!! I wish this was 20 sentence Sunday!

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  16. Lia Davis's avatar Lia Davis says:

    OMG. lol Now I definitely can’t wait for release day to see how this plays out. Great six!

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  17. MSmith's avatar mirriamsmyth says:

    Oh gosh. Angry and bitter much? Love the six, Jenna 🙂

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