Sweet Saturday Sample–11/12 Almost Perfect

Welcome back for another Sweet Saturday Sample!   Thank you to both first-time visitors and those who return each week.  I appreciate everyone stopping by.  

Today’s sample  is something completely different from the samples I’ve been sharing.  My erotic Contemporary Almost Perfect releases in two weeks and though it is erotic and really rather R rated late in the book, the early parts are pretty PG.  So I thought I’d share those parts with you this week and next. 

Pam has just been stranded on a desert island and is expecting her fantasy 1 Night Stand date–an Orlando Bloom-esque pirate ready to ravish her with her full permission.  While trying to dry her clothes she gets interrupted.

Feeling marginally better, she stalked out of the water then raced over hot sand to a haven of shady palms. She dropped the shoes and unbuttoned her shirt. It would dry better off and she disliked the feel of wet cloth next to her skin. The warm breeze made her consider removal of the top and shorts as well. A quick glance around told her she was alone. Her bikini panties she’d leave on—the wisp of polyester would dry instantly. Moments later, feeling wicked to be on a beach all but naked, Pam draped shorts and shirt over low-lying bushes. The towering palms shaded them, but the heat would bake them dry.

She contemplated the bandeau, wavering. It wasn’t like anyone would see her. “Screw it.” Pam crossed her arms, grasped the ends of the stretchy top and started to yank it over her head.

“Hello!” A faint shout sounded down the beach.

“Crap!” Pam pulled the top back down, thankful she hadn’t gotten it over her head. The wet fabric clung to her; if she’d taken it off, she’d never have gotten it back on. She crouched, grabbed her shorts and struggled into them.

“Hello?” The voice moved closer, definitely masculine.

Pam finished zipping the shorts and ducked lower behind the bushes. Was it the pirates?  Sounded too friendly for pirates. Maybe the Nautilus had come back. Doubtful. They hadn’t had time. Then it hit her. This was her one-night stand. She hadn’t specified her “date” had to be a pirate. Maybe they would spend their night here on a deserted island and be rescued by a pirate ship.

“Hello?  Is someone there?” His deep voice sounded pleasant and…somehow familiar. Too familiar.

“Crap!” Pamela shot up from behind the shrubs and stalked onto the beach.

The man headed toward her, still at least ten yards away.

Pamela put her hands, now balled into fists, on her hips and glared at his approach. “I am so getting a refund from Madame Eve!” she yelled when he came within earshot. “Roger!  What the hell are you doing here?”

If you’ve read the blurb for this story you know who Roger is, but what is he doing in the middle of her fantasy date?  Come by Six Sentence Sunday tomorrow for six more from this work and next Saturday for another sampling of Almost Perfect.  You can also join in the fun with your own sample next week.  And follow this link to Sweet Saturday Sample to find more “sweet” offerings. 

I’m also extending my giveaway from yesterday to include today.  Check out yesterday’s post:  Holy Giveaway, Batman! and enter to win a book from Decadent Publishing.

And come join me and some of my fellow Decadent Authors on the In-Between Days Blog Hop.  My day to tell you all about my upcoming releases is this Monday, November 14.  I’ll be having a giveaway of some of my works plus an Amazon gift card to kick off both the In-Between Days tour  AND the Save a Turkey: Gobble a Book Blog Hop.  Sure hope to see you on Monday!

Have a great weekend!

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16 Responses to Sweet Saturday Sample–11/12 Almost Perfect

  1. Did Roger come to spoil her fun?! What a terrific sample. Sounds like a fun story.

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  2. MSmith's avatar mirriamsmyth says:

    Wow, she is spittin’ mad! Not sure who I’d hate to be more – Roger or Madam Eve. Love it, Jenna. Can’t wait to own it!

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  3. Marsha Ward's avatar Marsha Ward says:

    Boy, is she upset! Thanks, Jenna. Made me laugh.

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  4. I was actually disappointed there wasn’t more to read! I wonder if Pam got sand in her wet shorts when she struggled back into them!

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  5. Sue's avatar Sue says:

    ok I’d better read the blurb – how annoying – a one night stand but with someone she obviously did not wish to encounter 😀

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  6. Sounds like a fun story!

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  7. GREAT scene. I can see the setting, and her decision to undress on this “fantasy island” seems perfectly logical… at the time. What fun!

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  8. This is a great sample! Humor mixed with tension is always dynamic for me 🙂

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  9. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    Jenna, you are amazing. I loved it, and if there were more, I’d keep reading!
    Excellent sample.

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  10. Jean's avatar Jean says:

    I hate to be interrupted when I’m getting dressed. Love the tension you create in this scene and I’m dying to know more. Good luck with your new release.

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  11. Great sample. Very representative of the story, too. Good luck on your release, Jenna! I’m sure your story will be a hot item that day.

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  12. Serry Gloag's avatar Serry Gloag says:

    I always enjoy the dry humour within your writing. Sparks are about to fly.

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  13. I saw your name and thought isn’t that JJ from Six Sentence Sunday? Fun sample. Some days you just can’t have any privacy.

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  14. Lia Davis's avatar Lia Davis says:

    Awesome! Can’t wait for release day. Great sample.

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