Six Sentence Sunday–As Long As You’re Mine

Welcome back to Six Sentence Sunday.  My thanks again to those who visit me every week and those who are visiting for the first time.  I do appreciate comments so please, let me know what you think of my six.

This week I thought you might like to see some more of Rafael’s interview with Samantha’s father.  He’s way too cocky for his own good. Enjoy!

“I turned over in bed and my hand landed on…” Rafe pulled up short; this was her father after all, “a very female part of the female anatomy.” 

Face red and eyes bulging, if Clarendon did not have apoplexy at this moment, he was safe for the rest of his life. 

“She called me by my name, Rafe, and was very. . .encouraging, shall we say?  But I swear to you, my lord, I did not know it was Lady Samantha.”

“Then who did you think it was, a succubus?”

“I thought it was one of the maids, my lord.”

Somehow I think Rafe is just digging himself deeper!  Hope you enjoyed these six from As Long As You’re Mine. For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.

If you’d like to see more of my work, check out my previous posts under “Christmas in July” and enjoy three free reads.

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45 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday–As Long As You’re Mine

  1. I don’t see how he can get out of this unscathed. Great six!

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  2. pippajay's avatar pippajay says:

    Hahahaha, kind of catch 22! Is claiming that he thought it was one of the maids an insult or an excuse?!

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  3. Sonya Clark's avatar Sonya Clark says:

    Terrific snippet, and it made me love both characters, though Rafe a little more. 🙂

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Thanks, Sonya! Rafe seems to be one of the most loveable characters I’ve created. He’s bad enough to be attractive, but not so bad he forgets how to be good. 🙂

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  4. Wow, this seems to be one big mess, and Rafe is the only one enjoying what has happened. A great six!

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  5. Sarah Grimm's avatar Sarah Grimm says:

    he’s digging himself a hole that will be hard to climb out of, isn’t he. LOL Really enjoyed your six, Jenna!

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  6. Rafe is a scamp, and a bad-boy like that is always fun to read about. You want to smack him and smooch him at the same time. That can be arranged.

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  7. I love how the last line seems like a perfect rationalization of the situation…

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  8. I’m loving this scene! No matter what Rafe says, it won’t sit well with Clarendon. After all, his daughter is “ruined.” Good description of the father’s physical reaction.
    (And thanks for commenting on my six!)

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      My pleasure, Sandra. And thanks for your comment! Yes, sadly Samantha is “ruined” and that bodes ill for Rafe’s chances of talking himself out of the situation, “smooth” talker that he is. LOL

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  9. Bree Younger's avatar Bree Younger says:

    I don’t think he’s going to get out of this, no matter what his explanations. lol!

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  10. Jayel Kaye's avatar Jayel Kaye says:

    succubus. Loved that. Even pissed the father has a sense of humor

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  11. “This was her father…” I’m glad he has some awareness… of the hole he’s digging! Hilarious.

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  12. Great six. Definitely sounds like he’s digging a deep hole.

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  13. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    LOL, oh yeah, the hole is getting deeper. Love it!

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  14. Sue's avatar Sue says:

    succubus – oh my rolling and laffing – he maid that up!

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  15. Cate Masters's avatar Cate Masters says:

    Yikes, adding insult to injury, lol. Love the line about apoplexy, made me chuckle! Great six.

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  16. Gem Sivad's avatar Gem Sivad says:

    This is so fun I want to spend the day reading the whole book. Great six, Jenna.

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  17. Graylin Fox's avatar Graylin Fox says:

    HEHEH.. Cover your ass. Nice work Rafe.

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  18. Lia Davis's avatar Lia Davis says:

    Great six! Yes I do believe he is digging that hole bigger.

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  19. lol funny and I don’t feel bad for him one bit!

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  20. authorjenniferlowery's avatar Jennifer Lowery~Writer says:

    Great six Jenna! Love Rafe-he’s always fun to read. Thanks for posting! Can’t wait to read more 🙂

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  21. lizculver's avatar lizculver says:

    Love all of your characters! This Rafe is just fabulous! I could see the father with his red face about to have a stroke! More please!

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  22. MSmith's avatar mirriamsmyth says:

    So, um, when’s the book coming out? I love a good historical – to read, not write – and this one’s got me super hooked. I’ve read your teaser tidbits which are hardly enough now to whet my appetite. I need the meal. LOL

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Sorry to disappoint, Mirriam, but I’m just now starting the second draft! I’m hoping to have it ready to query by the end of August. So God only knows! I’ve been querying one book hard for the past 6 months and no takers so far, though it is out with an editor now who seemed very interested. So you may have to wait a bit for the ALAYM meal to be cooked! But thanks for the vote of confidence and for stopping by!

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  23. Lindsay's avatar Lindsay says:

    Not expecting a young virginal well-bred lady to share his bed you do have to admit that Rafe does have a good point though.

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Oh, he’s actually the “innocent” one in all this, though his defense of just “doin’ what comes naturally” kind of doesn’t hold water. He was up to no good regardless of who he thought was in his bed! LOL Thanks, Lindsay.

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