Six Sentence Sunday–As Long As You’re Mine

Welcome back to Six Sentence Sunday.  My thanks again to those who visit me every week and those who are visiting for the first time.  I do appreciate comments so please, let me know what you think of my six. 

This week I thought you might like to see some of Rafael’s interview with Samantha’s father–the morning after.  Enjoy!

Rafael Beauregard forced himself to relax before the irate father, affecting an attitude of contrition that he did not particularly feel.  After all, he hadn’t invited the chit to his bed, although he should have thrown her out of it once he figured out what she wanted.  But he hadn’t known it wasn’t. . . .  .

“Lord Clarendon, this has been a case of mistaken identity, or mistaken bedrooms on your daughter’s part I believe.  I arrived late last night, well after dinner, was shown to my room, and went to bed.  What took place thereafter,” he paused and could not repress a smile, “was the stuff dreams are made of.”

Hope you enjoyed these six from As Long As You’re Mine. For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.  

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52 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday–As Long As You’re Mine

  1. PaperbackDiva's avatar pbdiva says:

    I’m sure Daddy wouldn’t appreciate what Rafe’s dreaming of!

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  2. Alix's avatar Alix says:

    Fantastic six Jenna! You have totally got me in the palm of your hand. Thank you.

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  3. Toni Kelly's avatar Toni Kelly says:

    Fun six sentences, Jenna. I’d like to know what the father’s response to that was, lol. I could only imagine a fist in the face!

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  4. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    Jenna, I just might!!! Again, awesome six!

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  5. Cara Bristol's avatar Cara Bristol says:

    Enjoyed your six. Great job.

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  6. Gem Sivad's avatar Gem Sivad says:

    What a great set-up. He’s definitely not letting the situation down his sense of humor. Love this story. 🙂

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  7. I love these characters! Rafe’s last line is priceless, but I doubt if it’s the sort of thing a father wants to hear about his daughter.
    PS: I’ve enjoyed your Coping with Authorship posts. Thanks, too, for commenting on my Six Sentence post.

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      You are so welcome, Sandy! No, that’s not the sort of thing a father wants to hear–but Rafe, being Rafe, doesn’t stop there! So glad you’re enjoying the posts. I’m loving I.O.U. Sex. Gotta download tonight!

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  8. He needs to watch what he says in such a delicate situation. What a delightful cad.

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  9. Graylin Fox's avatar Graylin Fox says:

    I like him a lot! Great six.

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  10. Brenda's avatar Brenda says:

    LOL, awesome, Jenna. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your sentences.

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  11. Great Regency voice. Love Rafe. Great six. Definitely want to read more of this.

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  12. Love the Regency voice and love Rafe! Great six. Want to read more of this!

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  13. Bree Younger's avatar Bree Younger says:

    I don’t think that’s what you’re supposed to say to the father if you’re trying to soothe ruffled feelings. lol! Great snip!

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  14. Marie Dees's avatar Marie Dees says:

    Hmm, I love Rafe, but I’m not sure that last line is what a father wants to hear. Poor guy. Well, both of them in this case.

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  15. Cate Masters's avatar Cate Masters says:

    Ha! Love his sarcastic voice. “Chit” made me laugh, and the last line was excellent!

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  16. lol pretty cheeky comment from him. Nice!

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  17. caseama's avatar caseamajor says:

    ***Sigh*** I love Rafe. This makes me want to read those beginning chapters again. Great six. Rafael Beauregard is the stuff dreams are made of and that’s the truth.

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  18. authorjenniferlowery's avatar Jennifer Lowery~Writer says:

    Rake! Now I have to read what happened after 🙂 Great post! Love your six!

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      They didn’t use the term “rake” by the late Victorian period, when the novel is set, but it kind of sums up his rather cavalier attitude. He is quite cocky–pun intended! LOL Thanks, Jennifer.

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  19. Rafe appears to be honest to the point of foolishness. Or is he? Might he have an ulterior motive? The worm turns. Great snippet, Jenna!

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  20. lizculver's avatar lizculver says:

    What a tease! You have got to give us the father’s reaction after that last line!

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Maybe. 🙂 Or I could make you wait until it comes out. But I doubt I’ll be that mean–I’m just starting the revision. You’ll have to wait at least until next Sunday though. 🙂

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  21. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    Holy crap! Does he want to live long? The man has big cajones, I’ll give him that!

    Great job, Jenna!

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  22. Lisa Kumar's avatar Lisa Kumar says:

    Whoa, the way he ended isn’t sure to impress Samantha’s father! ‘The stuff of dreams,’ indeeed! X-rated dreams, apparentely;) Great six!

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  23. sue's avatar sue says:

    giggles galore – yeah – and I bet Samantha has to choose between the two – good stuff here!

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  24. Lindsay's avatar Lindsay says:

    Ah, yeah right. Wrong Rafe but the chit has been compromised so unless he, Rafe, this one, doesn’t want to meet the father before they break their fast, choice of weapons being to the agreived, doesn’t want to end up in the parson’s mousetrap he’d better do some fancy fast talking. And god help Rafe if there are any brothers around.
    I’m loving this story more and more

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