Welcome back to Six Sentence Sunday. My thanks again to those who visit me every week. I do appreciate your comments so please, let me know what you think of my six. This week we find out more about the note Raif left for Samantha. Enjoy!
“Sometime after eleven, Lady Armstrong approached me and told me my things had been moved to another room because their nephew had arrived unexpectedly and that room is always reserved for him; but I put all that in the note I left you.”
“I was in my room until after two o’clock, Raif, and I saw no note.”
“I left it on your pillow, where you couldn’t miss it.”
Samantha stared at him, and in a tightly reined voice asked, “You thought I wouldn’t miss it on the pillow I had no intentions of sleeping on?”
His eyes widened as his mouth formed the word, “Oh.”
At that moment Samantha was almost glad she was not going to be trapped forever with this idiot.
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LOL!! Great last line… ;-D
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Ha, he’s an idiot! She might well have had a lucky escape.
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She certainly did, Pippa! Thanks for stopping by!
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D’oh, Raif! lol
Great snippet!
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Thanks, Gayle! Appreciate your stopping by.
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Lol, an idiot, isn’t he? Love the interaction here. Good job!
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You don’t know the half of it! Thanks, Zee!
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I think she dodged a bullet! 🙂
~Xakara
Dawn’s Early Light 6SS
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Oh, yes she did! Thanks for coming by, Xakara.
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Ah…a smart girl. I’d feel the same. Good six!
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Thanks, Bree! Samantha’s a smart cookie all right. Just a bit too stubborn for her own good, however. 🙂
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nicely done!
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Thank you, Sarah! I always appreciate a pat on the back! 🙂
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“Oh” says so much! Great dialogue between these two.
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Thanks so much, Sandra. Having worked in the theatre, I love creating dialogue that depicts the characters as much as the narration does. The power of words that we know so well!
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I am really enjoying this story, as it seems everyone else is too. 🙂 I’m not sure which one will be worse for her to end up with. LOL I hope it works out for her though.
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Thanks, Jessica. I’m glad you and the other commenters are enjoying the story too. It was quite fun to write. And of course Sam ends up with the best guy, she just doesn’t know it yet!
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LOL! I do love this story. Thanks for all your help, Jenna! Fun reading your six sentences!
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Thanks, Jennifer! It’s a pleasure. Glad you’re still liking Samantha and her Raif/Rafe. 🙂
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Raif gets an F for “foolish” in Planning. I feel kinda sorry for him. Had he just done his part, he’d have a lovely lady to lead him around by the…nose. Ah well.
Great six, Jenna. You do know how to pick ’em!
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Thanks, Trish. Somehow I don’t think he’d like being lead by Samantha–no matter what she was leading him by. She would have eaten him for lunch. And not in the pleasant way!
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A great six and loved the last line.
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Thanks for coming by, Sam. Yeah, Samantha’s beginning to see a bright side to the messy situation.
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LOL! Nice six! 🙂
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Thanks, Carolyn. Glad you enjoyed them!
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Agreed, he’s too dumb to be stuck with. Very funny snippet. I hope the poor gal works something out for herself!
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Oh, she’s about to meet her match–in the other Rafe. Thanks for commenting, Jessica!
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Love his response – D’oh! Fun six.
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Thanks, Cate. Raif is quite the man of words–not!
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Historically speaking I think we can all agree men are often clueless. Great way to show it again. (And thanks for the headsup about my blog. I let my tech guy know.)
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Thanks, Gem. Yes, men do have that reputation–usually deservedly! You have a tech guy? How envious I am right now! 🙂
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Nicely done! Great 6!
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Thanks, Sandra. Samantha and Raif were lots of fun to write.
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I love this! Such a great exchange between the two and Raif’s ‘Doh!’ moment is priceless. Also loved Samantha’s thought at the end.
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Raif’s “Doh” moments are, unfortunately, all too frequent. 🙂 Thanks for comments, Liz.
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OMG – will men never learn how to think? that is so realistic – love it!
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FOr men to think they have to use the brain on their shoulders. Not the other one.
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And how often does that happen? LOL
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Thinking’s not Raif’s forte either! Thanks for coming by, sassay!
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Those two had better work on their communication skills. This is getting better by the week.
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Communication is not their forte. 🙂 Thanks for coming by, Lindsay.
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