Six Sentence Sunday–As Long As You’re Mine

Hello and welcome back to Six Sentence Sunday.  Thank you so much for visiting every week.  I do appreciate your comments so please, let me know what you think of my six!  This week I finished a Work in Progress that I have been working on for over a year.  I kept having to stop and start it because of other projects, but we (the characters and I)persevered and now it is ready to begin the critiquing process.  So what better way to start than with a snippet for Six Sentence Sunday.

In order to force her father to allow her marriage to Raiford Tolbert, Lady Samantha Easterling devised the scandalous plan of being found in bed with Raif.  After a wildly passionate night, she has called her father and Lord Armstrong as witnesses to her ruin:

The dark brown head emerged from beneath the covers and she saw a hand pass over his face, wiping sleep away.  She turned triumphant eyes to her father, savoring the look of shock and dismay on his face and that of Lord Armstrong.  She could hear the wedding march playing in her head already.  Joyously, she turned back toward her lover calling, “Raif, dear. . . .”

The next moment Samantha was clutching the bedclothes to her chest, all but falling out of the bed in her effort to get away from the man beside her. 

A naked stranger stared up at her with curious brown eyes and asked almost crossly,  “Who the hell are you, sweetheart?”

Hope you enjoyed my six from As Long As You’re Mine.  Please leave a comment and let me know what you thought!

And remember my newly released  Heart of Deception, is now available for purchase from Books To Go Now!, Amazon, and Barnes & Noble and Hog Wild from New Dawning International Bookfair.

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29 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday–As Long As You’re Mine

  1. lanirhea's avatar lanirhea says:

    Uh oh! lol You left me hanging here. I need to know what happens next! Great six! Loved it!

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  2. Lisa Kumar's avatar Lisa Kumar says:

    Great six! She got the shock of her life!

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  3. Alix's avatar Alix says:

    Love your six, fantastic twist. Thank you very much for sharing it.

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  4. Sarah Grimm's avatar Sarah Grimm says:

    Oh, my! So many questions. Can’t wait to read more!

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  5. “Who the hell are you, sweetheart?” I LOVE him already! Another one for the TB R list!

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  6. pippajay's avatar pippajay says:

    Hahahahaha, whoops! Methinks the lady should have double-checked the ID of her bedmate, lol.

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  7. Xakara's avatar Xakara says:

    Beautifully hilarious! Loved it! 🙂

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS

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  8. I’m laughing at my computer screen. This is sooo terrific!

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  9. Loved the twist! Will be back to read more.

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  10. lizculver's avatar lizculver says:

    Excellent twist! Can’t wait to read more.

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  11. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    Great job! Super hook!

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  12. Bree Younger's avatar Bree Younger says:

    hahaha!!! Great twist!!

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  13. gayleramage's avatar gayleramage says:

    Whoops! Don’t you just hate it when that happens? ;-D

    Did not expect that! Great snippet!

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  14. Looks like she made a bit of a mistake here. Nice six!

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  15. Marie Dees's avatar Marie Dees says:

    Oh, my. She sort of had that coming, Didn’t she?

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  16. Wonderful six, Jenna! I can hear Raif’s voice clearly in my head and see Samantha’s horrified expression. Well written.

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  17. HA! Awesome! I love it!! 🙂

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  18. Cate Masters's avatar Cate Masters says:

    Loved that last twist! Looking forward to reading more of this.

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  19. Gem's avatar Gem says:

    I love this. I will so be back next week for more.

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  20. Lia Davis's avatar Lia Davis says:

    Nice! Didn’t quite work out the way she thought, did it? 🙂 Great cliffhanger.

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  21. Here she had such a good plan, it couldn’t possibly go right! Looks like this one was worth the wait.

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  22. Paula martin's avatar Paula martin says:

    Great Six – now I want to know why he’s not Raif!

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  23. lol nice twist! Can’t wait to read more!

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  24. sue's avatar sue says:

    oh my – you’ve got my interest! – Ummm why did she think that would work again? 😀

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  25. Lindsay's avatar Lindsay says:

    Very suspenseful six. Interesting twist but also am not admitting anything.

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