SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY – WEEK 4

Welcome back for six more sentences this Sunday.  I decided to continue this week with another six from my Victorian era historical romance As Long As You’re Mine.  Rafael has just reminded Lady Samantha Easterling about their passionate encounter the evening before.

         He ran his tongue lightly over her closed lips and felt her shudder in his embrace.  Encouraged, he teased along the seam, but she pushed strenuously against his chest, so he concentrated instead on seducing her lips, teasing them with gentle tugs, nibbling here and there.  She went deathly still.  He lifted his head and opened his eyes to find ice picks of gray steel staring back at him from less than an inch away.  Reflexes made him straighten abruptly, then. . .

            Wham!  Pain exploded along his left cheek. 

Well, there’s my six for this week.  If you enjoyed this snippet with Rafe and Samantha, please leave me a comment and let me know!  And check out  other great sixes at  http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/ or share your six with us by joining Six Sentence Sunday. 

     Next week I’ll be posting six sentences from my newest WIP Hog Wild, an erotic contemporary twisted fairy tale, based on The Three Little Pigs.  See you then!

 

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33 Responses to SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY – WEEK 4

  1. jayel kaye's avatar jayel kaye says:

    almost jumped out of my skin on that one. wow

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  2. Gayle Ramage's avatar Gayle Ramage says:

    Ooh.. and ouch! Great six!

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  3. Pippa Jay's avatar Pippa Jay says:

    I guess he wasn’t as good a kisser as he thought, lol!

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  4. Lauri J Owen's avatar Lauri J Owen says:

    Good for her! Great six!

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  5. Layna's avatar Layna says:

    Oy! If that isn’t tension then I don’t know what is. LOL Lovely six. Can’t wait to see more! 🙂

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  6. Eleri Stone's avatar Eleri Stone says:

    Well, it sounded like he kinda deserved that. Great six!

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  7. Lindsay's avatar Lindsay says:

    You go Lady. Show him who’s the boss.

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  8. Liana Brooks's avatar Liana Brooks says:

    For some reason I don’t think she’s interested.

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  9. Ada Hoffmann's avatar Ada Hoffmann says:

    Whoah! Quite the surprise! I wonder what he did wrong.

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  10. Rising tension and then … BAM! What a surprise. Love it.

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  11. Claire Robyns's avatar Claire Robyns says:

    Ooh, that didn’t end like I was expecting it to, lol

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  12. Kerrianne's avatar Kerrianne says:

    HA! such a good six!

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  13. She doesn’t melt into his arms? She doesn’t faint on the Aubusson? No shudders or moans of pleasure? I think Rafe needs more practice kissing.

    Great six, JJ.

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  14. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    Great six!

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  15. Simone's avatar Simone says:

    What an impact! :O

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  16. Ash's avatar Ash says:

    Wooooo! Now what will he do? Love a bold heroine!

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  17. Marie Dees's avatar Marie Dees says:

    LOL, great fun. Wham? Poor guy.

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  18. lol guess he’ll have to find a different way around her reserve

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  19. Lisa Kumar's avatar Lisa Kumar says:

    She let him have it! Well, he was taking liberties she wasn’t ready to give him–nevermind the fact she’d already given him more than kisses the previous night!

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  20. Kary's avatar Kary says:

    Poor Rafe. I love these six.

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