Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 8/09/20 Only Pleasure Will Do ~ A Gray Patch on the Wall

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

Today’s snippet is from my just placed on pre-order historical romance, Only Pleasure Will Do. This is the fifth and final book of the House of Pleasure series which will release on August 31.

 

 

Here’s the new blurb for Only Pleasure Will Do:

BLURB: 

The pleasure is all hers…

Amorina Vestry, madam of the House of Pleasure for six long years, has wrested a living out the establishment by devising a variety of ways to give men pleasure. But behind the persona of the ruthless businesswoman, schooled in the erotic arts, lurks another woman with a secret she dares tell no one. Now, in vengeance for thwarting a dastardly plan, Amorina is kidnapped and forced to commit murder to save the one person she loves unconditionally…unless the man she secretly yearns for can rescue her before it’s too late.

When Amorina Vestry goes missing, Sir Reginald Matthews, former Runner now magistrate at Bow Street, agrees to search for the very provocative woman he met a year ago and cannot seem to forget. He manages to track her down, only to be captured by the same madman who took her. Their close proximity in a make-shift prison leads inexorably to a night of passion in which Amorina lowers her guard to reveal a shocking truth. Spurred by his growing attraction to her, Reginald is determined to free them before she commits the most heinous crime imaginable.

As Reginald races to save Amorina, he comes to fear another foe as well. He may very well save his love only to find he must give her up or risk the censure of a society that will condemn her.

Amorina Vestry has been kidnapped and held in two basement rooms for two weeks. In the middle of the night, the door at the top of the stairs–the only possible means of escape–opens. Terrified, she slips into the other room and waits for her chance to escape.

EXCERPT:

The dimly moving figure took his time with each riser. His eyes must’ve adjusted to the gloom by now. Did he think her a gray patch on the wall, perhaps? Over the past weeks, her snowy linen chemise, which she was currently using as a night gown, had grown dingy. She remained rooted to the spot she’d taken once she’d slipped into the room, scarcely daring to breathe.

Three more steps and he’d reach the ground.

She held her breath and prayed.

Two. One.

The man set his feet on the dirt floor and paused, cocked his head.

And now to finish the scene :

Willing him to move toward the back of the stairs, Amorina gathered every scrap of courage she possessed.

Shaking his head, the man turned back toward the staircase.

Amorina launched herself at the table, grabbed the ancient chair, swung it up over her head, and crashed it onto the man’s head.

At the last moment he must’ve heard her, for he threw up an arm in defense, but too late. The edge of the chair crashed into the back of his head with a sickening crack before disintegrating in a shower of wooden bits. She’d apparently underestimated efficacy of the old chair as a weapon, for the man dropped neatly at her feet.

Only Pleasure Will Do is available on Amazon for the pre-order price of  $2.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, September 1. Grab yours while you can!

A Matter of Pleasure, the prologue to Only Pleasure Will Do, is available on Amazon for only .99 and on Smashwords , Kobo, Barnes & Noble, and Apple for free.

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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Red Letter Day: Two Cover Reveals/New Releases

This past weekend was rather awesome for me, as I released two books, one for pre-order and one as a free read, both celebrating the fifth and final book of the House of Pleasure series.

The final novel in the series is Only Pleasure Will Do, now on pre-order on Amazon.

BLURB:

The pleasure is all hers…

Amorina Vestry, madam of the House of Pleasure for six long years, has wrested a living out the establishment by devising a variety of ways to give men pleasure. But behind the persona of the ruthless businesswoman, schooled in the erotic arts, lurks another woman with a secret she dares tell no one. Now, in vengeance for thwarting a dastardly plan, Amorina is kidnapped and forced to commit murder to save the one person she loves unconditionally…unless the man she secretly yearns for can rescue her before it’s too late.

When Amorina Vestry goes missing, Sir Reginald Matthews, former Runner now magistrate at Bow Street, agrees to search for the very provocative woman he met a year ago and cannot seem to forget. He manages to track her down, only to be captured by the same madman who took her. Their close proximity in a make-shift prison leads inexorably to a night of passion in which Amorina lowers her guard to reveal a shocking truth. Spurred by his growing attraction to her, Reginald is determined to free them before she commits the most heinous crime imaginable.

As Reginald races to save Amorina, he comes to fear another foe as well. He may very well save his love only to find he must give her up or risk the censure of a society that will condemn her.

EXCERPT:

The dimly moving figure took his time with each riser. His eyes must’ve adjusted to the gloom by now. Did he think her a gray patch on the wall, perhaps? Over the past week, her snowy linen chemise, which she was currently using as a night gown, had grown dingy. She remained rooted to the spot she’d taken once she’d slipped into the room, scarcely daring to breathe.

Three more steps and he’d reach the ground.

She held her breath and prayed.

Two. One.

The man set his feet on the dirt floor and paused, cocked his head.

Willing him to move toward the back of the stairs, Amorina gathered every scrap of courage she possessed.

Shaking his head, the man turned back toward the staircase.

Amorina launched herself at the table, grabbed the ancient chair, swung it up over her head, and crashed it onto the man’s head.

At the last moment he must’ve heard her, for he threw up an arm in defense, but too late. The edge of the chair crashed into the back of his head with a sickening crack before disintegrating in a shower of wooden bits. She’d apparently underestimated efficacy of the old chair as a weapon, for the man dropped neatly at her feet.

Sobbing as relief poured through her, Amorina stood over him, part of a chair leg—the only piece of the weapon still intact—raised once more. But the figure sprawled on the ground didn’t move, and her frenzied breathing calmed. Tossing the mangled stick onto the body, she then leaped over it, and nimbly flew up the stairs to the door. Slow and silent, she grasped the handle and pulled.

It didn’t budge.

She tried to rattle the door, but it refused to move at all, as though someone had nailed it shut. Leaning her head against the stubborn wood, she swallowed tears. She was still a prisoner, although no longer alone. Heart racing, she turned to peer over the rail at the still figure below. Who was he? Why was he here? And what did he have to do with her?

Keeping a cautious eye on the man, she crept down the steps. A patch of moonlight fell on the floor not far from where he lay. She could at least satisfy her curiosity about one thing. Grasping him under his armpits, Amorina lifted him and rocked back on her heels, an effective way for a woman to move dead-drunk patrons if the need arose. This man was solidly built, to be sure, but she’d moved heavier bodies.

Four steps and the back of his head popped into the light. She laid him down, then tossed the bit of chair leg on the floor. Her hand met the good quality of the pale gray cloak, the material smooth and rich beneath her fingers. A man of some means, then. Likely a former customer, though his form rang no bell of recognition. No need to speculate. She bent and hooked her hands beneath one shoulder and heaved him over. He fell out of the light.

She tugged him back then gasped and dropped his shoulder as though her fingers had been singed. “Reginald Matthews!”

Only Pleasure Will Do is now on pre-order for $2.99 on Amazon. It releases on August 31, after which it will revert to its regular price of $4.99.

And as Amazon pre-order books don’t have a sample available, I simultaneously released the prologue to Only Pleasure Will Do, the first meeting of Amorina Vestry and Reginald Matthews. It’s called A Matter of Pleasure and is also available on Amazon and Smashwords (see below).

BLURB:

While making inquiries at the notorious brothel the House of Pleasure regarding a kidnapping, Bow Street Runner Reginald Matthews ends up with more than just the information he seeks from Amorina Vestry, the house’s sensual madam.  Amorina’s manner reveals more than a passing interest in Matthews, which in turn leads to unforeseen consequences for them both.

Prologue to Only Pleasure Will Do, Book 5 of the House of Pleasure series

EXCERPT:

Patience at an end, Reginald knocked a fourth time, harder, making the door jump on its hinges. At last, the bolt shot back and the door opened, revealing a woman—a very attractive woman, with a pale face and dark hair pleasingly disheveled, as though she’d just risen from her bed, which of course, she had. “May I see the owner of the house, please?”

“You see her now,” she said, opening the door wider, revealing a petite form clad in a bright scarlet silk wrapper that slipped down to reveal one delicate white shoulder. “I am Amorina Vestry, Mr. Matthews,” she frowned, squinting against the light, “whatever are you doing here at this hour of the day?”

The madam’s insinuation was clear, but he ignored it to ask, “You know who I am?”

“But of course I make it my business to know all my patrons—to some degree.”

Reginald gritted his teeth and snapped, “I have never patronized your establishment, madam.”

She stared at him, a flash of hunger in her eyes as she took him in from top to toe. “Perhaps it was just wishful thinking, then,”—the hunger disappeared as quickly as it had come—“but suffice it to say, I do know who you are, Mr. Matthews, now how may I help you?”

“I have a garment, a black cloak that was found near here several weeks ago,” he gestured to the folded material clasped beneath his arm, “but which has only now surfaced from the night watch. I’m trying to ascertain its owner, Madame Vestry. May I come in?” A bare flicker of interest—or alarm—crossed her face at the mention of a black cloak, and his lips curled into a smile. His instinct to try the House of Pleasure first this morning had been exactly right.

“Of course, Mr. Matthews. I’m always eager to assist the Runners with their investigations.” The woman’s tone was smooth, but insincere. She opened the door and let him in, her gaze once more ravishing him as he walked past her.

Warmth began to build within him, in the most inconvenient of places.

A Matter of Pleasure is available on Amazon for .99 and on Smashwords for FREE! (If you go to Smashwords, you can download a MOBI copy for your Kindle.)

I hope you enjoy these awesome August specials!

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 8/02/20 A Matter of Pleasure ~ Wishful Thinking

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

Today’s snippet is from my just released short story, A Matter of Pleasure. This book is actually the Prologue to Only Pleasure Will Do and released yesterday as a promotion for that book. I’ll share an excerpt from it today and switch next Sunday to Only Pleasure Will Do. Today I’m traveling back from Memphis, and promise I’ll be visiting as we roll. 🙂

 

Here’s the new blurb for A Matter of Pleasure:

BLURB: 

While making inquiries at the notorious brothel the House of Pleasure regarding a kidnapping, Bow Street Runner Reginald Matthews ends up with more than just the information he seeks from Amorina Vestry, the house’s sensual madam.  Amorina’s manner reveals more than a passing interest in Matthews, which in turn leads to unforeseen consequences for them both.

Prologue to Only Pleasure Will Do, Book 5 of the House of Pleasure series.

EXCERPT:

Patience at an end, Reginald knocked a fourth time, harder, making the door jump on its hinges. At last, the bolt shot back and the door opened, revealing a woman—a very attractive woman, with a pale face and dark hair pleasingly disheveled, as though she’d just risen from her bed, which of course, she had. “May I see the owner of the house, please?”

“You see her now,” she said, opening the door wider, revealing a petite form clad in a bright scarlet silk wrapper that slipped down to reveal one delicate white shoulder. “I am Amorina Vestry, Mr. Matthews,” she frowned, squinting against the light, “whatever are you doing here at this hour of the day?”

The madam’s insinuation was clear, but he ignored it to ask, “You know who I am?”

“But of course I make it my business to know all my patrons—to some degree.”

Reginald gritted his teeth and snapped, “I have never patronized your establishment, madam.”

She stared at him, a flash of hunger in her eyes as she took him in from top to toe. “Perhaps it was just wishful thinking, then,”—the hunger disappeared as quickly as it had come—“but suffice it to say, I do know who you are, Mr. Matthews, now how may I help you?”

And now to finish the scene :

“I have a garment, a black cloak that was found near here several weeks ago,” he gestured to the folded material clasped beneath his arm, “but which has only now surfaced from the night watch. I’m trying to ascertain its owner, Madame Vestry. May I come in?” A bare flicker of interest—or alarm—crossed her face at the mention of a black cloak, and his lips curled into a smile. His instinct to try the House of Pleasure first this morning had been exactly right.

“Of course, Mr. Matthews. I’m always eager to assist the Runners with their investigations.” The woman’s tone was smooth, but insincere. She opened the door and let him in, her gaze once more ravishing him as he walked past her. Warmth began to build within him, in the most inconvenient of places.

A Matter of Pleasure is available on Amazon for only .99 and on Smashwords for free. Only Pleasure Will Do is available on Amazon for the pre-order price of  $2.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, September 1. Grab yours while you can!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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Release Day for Only Marriage Will Do

Today is Release Day for  Only Marriage Will Do!

This is book 2 in my House of Pleasure series, set in wild and wicked 18th century London. I’m re-releasing books 1 & 2 this summer in anticipation of the final book, Only Pleasure Will Do, releasing at the end of August. I’m so happy to have these two books out again as indie releases with new covers that highlight the steamy historical nature of the series.

BLURB:

Not all happy-ever-afters begin with “I do.”

Two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down. The first claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was betrothed to him once upon a time. To deter him, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger appears, declaring he is her husband. But when she is finally alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. Against his better judgment, he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate far to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. However, the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head again, forcing Amiable to wonder if he is married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is compelled to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

And here’s an excerpt to whet your appetite:

EXCERPT:

The door shut and Juliet plopped down on the bed, arms wrapped around one of the posts, at a sudden loss for words. How delicious the bath would feel. How sorely she needed relaxation at the moment. First, however, she needed to dispatch Amiable.

Mouth drawn, his gaze flickered restlessly from her to the tub.

“Oh.” She jerked her head away before he could see the warmth coloring her cheeks. The images forming in Captain Dawson’s mind might be similar in nature to her dream earlier in the day. A sudden ache hit low in her belly and she couldn’t sit still. She jumped up.

“I apologize for interrupting your bath, my lady.” Amiable lumbered to his feet. He nodded to the tub, keeping his gaze on it rather than her. “I will retire to my room now. I believe it is across the hall, two doors down on the right. If you have further need of me this evening, please send Glynis for me.” He bowed and strode toward the door.

“You did not interrupt my bath, Captain Dawson,” Juliet whispered as he opened door.

He turned and raked his gaze over her for a long moment. “More’s the pity, Lady Juliet.” He cursed, clutched the door latch then jerked it open and left.

How odd men acted sometimes. Still, he had followed her to the White Hart Inn. That mattered most of all. She crossed to the tub. Idly, she dipped her hand in and trailed her fingers through the exquisitely warm water. Perfect. The whole evening’s encounter had been perfect. Although if Amiable had arrived a mere ten minutes later…

“More’s the pity,” she whispered. A blast of heat began in her face and spread until even her toes had turned red. She doffed her night rail and climbed into the tub. Best have another reason for her bright hue should Glynis reappear.

Only Marriage Will Do is now available at Amazon and Smashwords. It will soon be available on other e-book retailers.

Check the blog tomorrow for a surprise House of Pleasure posting!

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The Writer’s Eye: Virtues of Research

 

Most of this week I’ve been focusing on research I did when writing my upcoming release Only Marriage Will Do. I have loved doing research virtually all my life.

One of the happiest times of my life was the two summers I spent researching my dissertation in the Manuscript Reading Room of the National Library of Ireland, tracking down facts and corroborating evidence about the women who helped found the Abbey Theatre in the early years of the 20th century. I also made sojourns to the Library of Congress on a regular basis and went to New York City for a weekend to consult the papers of Lady Gregory at the New York Public Library.

Is there any wonder I became an historical romance author? Not only do I get to weave stories for my readers, but I get to indulge in research in a variety of periods.

However, writers of all genres must do research if they are to engage their fans and keep them deeply embedded in their story. Even contemporary and paranormal authors need to have a thorough grounding in the facts of the everyday activities they are writing about. Contemporary authors have to believe they are writing for that one reader who knows the exact subject touched on in their book. I once spent half a day researching the effect of rubber bullets and if they could injure a person enough to make them appear dead. (FYI: I wrote a few contemporary novellas before I switched to strictly writing historicals.) And for paranormal romances, whatever time period they are placed in, the author must be familiar with the settings, the mannerisms, the folklore that surrounds the paranormal experience they are describing.

I have run across a few historical authors who didn’t get something right, with the result that I was pulled completely out of the story and in a couple of instances didn’t really want to pick them back up again. I have therefore tried to be extremely careful in my research and usually also run things I’m still not quite sure of, especially having to do with titles and forms of address in the 19th century, past an expert.

Writers: How much research to you do for a book? Do you research every detail or do you take poetic license in some cases and make it up as you go along?

Readers: How much do you depend on authors to get the details right? Does it bother you a little or a lot when you read something you know is incorrect?

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Countdown to Only Marriage Will Do Release ~ Perils of Travel

This Friday, July 31 (July is going, going, gone!) Book 2 of the House of Pleasure series, Only Marriage Will Do, will release as an indie title! I’m really stoked about having this next book in my Georgian series out with the new covers and a few changes here and there. I’m really enjoying revisiting the characters and story lines too. I hope those of my readers who liked Only Scandal Will Do will read on for the story of Duncan’s sister Juliet, who went missing at the end of Scandal.

To get everyone primed and ready for the release, I’m posting a series of articles on my blog this week with little tidbits of trivia regarding my research for Only Marriage Will Do along with short excerpts from the novel to whet your appetite.

Aside from the proxy marriage, another major part of the story line for Only Marriage Will Do is the journey Juliet takes to flee the man who claims to be married to her.

 

Travel during the 18th century was in no way easy. Long journeys took days or weeks to accomplish.  Juliet’s flight from London to her brother’s estate in Cumbria, a distance of about 300 miles and 5 hours in a car today, would have taken at least a week if not longer.

Toll booth at night

Roads were not improved once you got out of the London area. Toll roads, privately financed roads that charged a fee to carriages and riders, were kept up better than public roads boomed in the mid-18th century. Most were concentrated around major towns and places of commerce, although they were more scarce in the northwest of England. But even these improved highways were sometimes impassable and fraught with “highway men” who robbed carriages, farmers’ carts, and lone horsemen.

Traveling via carriage or stagecoach, people were subject to frequent stops (about once every three hours) to change horses at coaching inns, which also offered refreshment and rooms for the night. People of wealth would plan out their journeys and send servants ahead to make the arrangements for accommodations. In Juliet’s case, she is alone with just her maid, coachman and groom, so she must take whatever accommodations that happen to be available when she stops for the night. In the book I have tried to use coaching inns that actually existed at the time of the novel (some still are in use today!). And it was very time consuming to calculate how many miles the horses might go for each lap of the journey so I could match it with the correct inns.

So, a trip of this length, riding all day, every day with one or two people in the carriage with you, swaying side to side, always wary of robbers or accidents that could happen at any time, was an adventure to say the least.

 

Here’s a “little” excerpt from Only Marriage Will Do to give you an idea of some of the travails of travel during the 18th century :

By the time the carriage swept into the final inn of the day, a sprawling white stone building rising two stories, the sun had just begun to lower in a sky wreathed by gray thunderclouds. The spotty rain had turned the coach yard to a slimy muck.

“Oh, how wretched the ground looks, Amiable.” Juliet wrinkled her petite nose and frowned. “My pattens are in my luggage, I fear.”

With a laugh at her woebegone face, he swung out of the carriage and sank almost to his ankles in the mire. Damn. Nothing to laugh about here. It would be a tricky business to get the women into the inn without mishap. The single possible way would be to carry them. He motioned for Juliet.

She scrambled toward the open door.

Without warning, he swooped her into his arms, surprising a shriek out of her.

She grasped his neck.

“Glynis, stay in the carriage. I’ll come back for you.” He slipped and slithered through the mud, maneuvering as best he could with Juliet attached to him like a limpet. Her heartbeat hammered against his chest and his own pounded even louder because of her proximity. Spending most of the day in her company had softened him. Now, holding her close, breathing her subtle flowery fragrance, her soft body nestled close to him, his protective instincts warred with his unmistakable lust. He tightened his arms around her, and she sent him a tentative smile then laid her head back on his shoulder. With determination, he concentrated on his footing.

At last, they arrived at the inn’s doorway. She slid down his front onto her feet, sending sudden heat coursing through him. Did she do that on purpose? Minx.

She clung to him for just a moment, her body pressed against his.

Sublime torture. “Stay right here, my dear, while I rescue yet another damsel in distress.” He slogged back toward the carriage and breathed easier.

Once there, he attempted to put his arms around the maid, but she proved more skittish than Juliet. When he finally coaxed her out of the carriage, Glynis lay straight and stiff in his arms. She kept her arms crossed over her chest so he had a much less secure grip, carrying her as he would a platter overburdened with a roast pig.

About midway to the inn door, a coach and six thundered into the yard, horses snorting, their hooves splashing mud.

The conveyance was nowhere near them, but Glynis let out a yelp of fright and tried to rise straight out of his arms.

He wobbled, tried to find his balance as she twisted in his arms. His feet skidded in the treacherous mud. Damnation. If he could only compensate a little more…

Glynis threw her arms around his neck.

Too little too late. The next thing he knew, he lay flat on his back, Glynis sprawled on top of him, both of them plastered with mud. The maid had, of course, fared better, having used her rescuer as a cushion against both the fall and most of the sticky muck. Her clothes might be salvageable.

“Damn it to hell.” He wanted to curse the maid, horses, rain, mud, everything he could think of that had brought him to this pass. He raised his head. A disgusting sucking sound as it came away from the muck made him cringe.

Only Marriage Will Do is still available for the pre-order price of $1.99 on Amazon through Friday, July 31. Grab your copy before it goes up!

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 7/26/20 Only Marriage Will Do ~ Final Ruling

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

Today’s is the last snippet from Only Marriage Will Do because it will release on Friday, July 31 and I’ll switch over for August to the final House of Pleasure novel, Only Pleasure Will Do. This Sunday I’m traveling to Memphis for a writing retreat, so I’ll catch everyone who comes by when it’s not my turn to drive. 🙂 Remember, Only Marriage Will Do is now up for pre-order on Amazon for only $1.99. It will release on July 31 and the price will rise to $4.99. Grab your copy by release day for the discount! 

 

Check out my new blurb for Only Marriage Will Do:

BLURB: 

Not all Happy-ever-afters begin at “I do.”

Two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down. The first claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was betrothed to him once upon a time. To deter him, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger appears, declaring he is her husband. But when she is finally alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. Against his better judgment, he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate far to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. However, the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head again, forcing Amiable to wonder if he is married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is compelled to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

I began my snippets for Marriage well into the story just as I did for Scandal. Captain Amiable Dawson and Lady Juliet Ferrers married in July under rather strange circumstances: another man, a former suitor, has claimed he is already married to Juliet. She and Amiable spent the autumn months trying to verify that their marriage was indeed valid, but have not heard definitively from the courts. So on Christmas Eve, Amiable’s sisters have thrown them a reception to celebrate their marriage. Now, however, an unknown man has crashed the party, bringing one with him too well known to Juliet–the man claiming to be her true husband. Today we find out the court’s determination on their marriage.

EXCERPT:

“I have in my possession a sworn statement from Mr. Grimes, which I watched him sign myself yesterday afternoon,” Haimes raised a sheet of foolscap with writing on it and held it out to ward off any objection as Dalbury stepped forward, “which states he received the final testimony from a Mademoiselle Jeanette Valois three days ago. She writes, as the two witnesses did as well, that the marriage ceremony did take place, with her as the proxy, on February twenty-third, 1760, a week before Count Mallain received the revocation of the proxy.”

Silence shattered the room.

“What of the magistrate?” Amiable could scarcely force the words out of his parched throat. He clasped Juliet’s arm in a death grip. “What was his testimony?”

“The magistrate, Paul d’Eberhart, has died since the event took place, which explains one delay in acquiring the information. No one at court had been assigned to attend to letters addressed to him.” Haimes took a deep breath, his face expressionless.

And now to finish the scene :

“As he is unable to provide testimony, French law therefore affirms the marriage contracted between Philippe…”

“No.” Juliet moaned and twisted on the chaise.

“Viscount St. Cyr and Lady Juliet Ferrers…”

“Nooo,” Juliet screamed and covered her ears. Her body shook and her face paled.

Amiable clutched her, at a loss how else to comfort her. If only stopping the runner’s words could stop the inevitable.

“Is legal and binding.”

“In France, by God.” Amiable shouted and leaped up. “It is still valid only in France.” He moved in front of Juliet, daring anyone to come near.

“I’m afraid not, Mr. Morley.” Haimes shook his head and drew another piece of heavy, official paper from his coat pocket. “Lord St. Cyr’s attorney immediately took the affidavits to the magistrate.” He unfolded the stiff paper, and Amiable’s heart lurched at the sight of the official seal affixed to the bottom. “Today he has ruled, in light of these new circumstances and because the Hardwicke Act is mute on the subject, that the marriage is valid, although irregular.”

He offered it to Amiable, who snatched it and read the document. He read and re-read words he fought to make sense of with the no, no, no shrieking in his mind. Unfortunately, the document’s determination was clear. At last, he forced himself to look into Juliet’s stricken face. The news must come from his lips, cruel though it might be. “It’s true. The court has ruled the marriage valid.”

Remember! Only Marriage Will Do is available on Amazon for pre-order only until July 31 at the pre-order price of just $1.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, Saturday, August 1. Grab yours while you can!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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Countdown to Only Marriage Will Do Release ~ The Proxy Marriage

Next Friday, July 31 (where on earth has July gone?) Book 2 of the House of Pleasure series, Only Marriage Will Do, will release as an indie title! I’m really stoked about having this first of my Georgian series out with the new covers and a few changes here and there. I’m really enjoying revisiting the characters and story lines too. I hope those of my readers who haven’t sampled this steamy series will give it a try.

To get everyone primed and ready for the release, I’ll be posting a series of articles on my blog here with little tidbits of trivia regarding my research for Only Marriage Will Do along with short excerpts from the novel to whet your appetite.

One of the major parts of the storyline for Only Marriage Will Do is the question of Lady Juliet Ferrers marital status. From the beginning, we find a Frenchman who insists she was married to him via a proxy marriage over a year previously. The question then becomes is he telling the truth and if so, is the marriage legal in England.

Proxy marriages have been around for centuries, often utilized by royalty to bind monarchs and princes in matrimony across great distances when an alliance is needed but the logistics of a conventional wedding in person is impossible. A substitute then is found for the bride or groom, legal documents  attesting to the marriage are signed and witnessed, and the marriage is considered as legal as any other performed with bride and groom in the church.

However, in 1753, Lord Hardwicke’s Marriage Act was signed into law in England in order to prevent clandestine marriages. It stipulated that the couple must be married in an Anglican church either after the banns had been read or a marriage license had been obtained and consent of parents for parties under the age of twenty-one. (There were other stipulations of the Act as well, but these are the significant ones for the story.)

The stipulation that both bride and groom must meet in person should make a proxy marriage invalid. However, as the act doesn’t specifically address the validity of a proxy marriage, and the laws of France do accept such a marriage ceremony, there is enough of a legal argument to make Juliet’s marital status very sketchy indeed. And as she is terrified of the Frenchman who claims to be her husband, and she meets and falls in love with Captain Amiable Dawson, thereby hangs the tale. Is she bound to the cruel foreigner or can she marry her knight in shining armor?

Here’s a short excerpt that gives you a taste of this predicament:

“Do you know why the count is trying to perpetrate this fraud on you, my lady?”

“No, I don’t know. Even if such a marriage took place in France, in England it is invalid. I made that perfectly clear to Philippe.”

“Are you sure, Lady Juliet?” He had little knowledge of the laws concerning such things, but it made no sense to go to the trouble and expense of a marriage by proxy if it did not bind the parties by law.

“Yes, my brother explained it to me. The Hardwicke Act made such marriages invalid in England. The proxy ceremony in France, on the other hand, would bind Philippe to me until he returned to England for it to be performed legally.” She turned back to gaze out the window. “By the time my brother sent the proxy to France I didn’t even want to marry Philippe, but I feared telling Duncan. Vicious rumors about me had besieged us for months and he wanted to make the marriage work for my sake.”

“Rumors about you, my lady?”

She hung her head. “Surely you heard them. The gossips of Society could talk of nothing else last year.”

“I am but lately come from the colonies. We hear very little of London’s scandals there.” He should not distress her more. “If you would rather not speak of it—”

“No, I don’t mind. Everyone else knows.” She sighed and ran her hand along the back of the sofa, then dropped into a rose-colored companion chair and motioned for him to take a seat opposite her. “Over a year and a half ago, Earl Ferrers shot and killed a man. He was arrested and charged with murder. Our family name is the same as his title, although we are connected only through marriage. The earl pled insanity, although it did not save him, despite several genuinely mad family members.”

She stared at him intently then continued. “Several rumors surfaced that I had inherited the Ferrers insanity. My brother called out the man who started them and killed him in a duel. He…” She swallowed hard. “He killed two men for my honor and dueled with others as well. Duncan also suffered horrible allegations.” She shifted in her seat and tried to smile. “So you see, the Ferrers family was hardly a bargain in the marriage mart last year. My brother thought he was acting in my best interest, sending the proxy for our marriage.”

“Did you not wish to marry the viscount?”

She tensed and avoided his eyes. “At that point, no, I didn’t. We had quarreled bitterly just before he left London.” Her voice softened until he had to lean toward her to hear. Tears rolled down her cheeks and she turned her head away. “And he was not always kind.”

Amiable stood it for about five seconds. “My dear.” He rose, gathered her into his arms, and settled her head against his chest again. “I demand the right of a temporary husband to comfort you,” he murmured in her ear. “Stay still with your head just there.”

Given her choices, I think I’d opt for Amiable Dawson as well, wouldn’t you?

Only Marriage Will Do is still available for the pre-order price of $1.99 on Amazon through July 31.

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The Writer’s Eye: A Different Point of View

 

Until about two months ago, when my daughter started talking to me about a YA book called Red Hood by Elena K. Arnold, I had never heard of a book being written in the second person. (Yeah, I guess I’m not as well read when it comes to books outside Stephen King or historical romance.) So I questioned my daughter about how such a book would be written.

“It’s kind of like those interactive books where they say, ‘You can turn left or right. You decide to turn right.’ It uses the words ‘you’ and ‘your’ where a first person point of view would use ‘I’ and ‘my.’”

I thought about it and although I think it would be too off-putting for me to read (I stopped reading Patricia Cornwell because she started writing in present tense), I am intrigued by general readers’ responses to the second person POV.

My first thought was that second person POV would bring the reader into the story in an immediate way that even first person does not. Melissa Tydel, writing for The Write Stuff says, “Second person allows the readers to experience the story as if it’s their own…Using the pronoun ‘you’ and describing action as it happens supplies a personal sense of urgency, propelling the story—and the reader—forward.” She also points out that because it’s not often used, it offers a fresher experience for the reader.

I was interested enough in finding out if this was true across the board, or if second person had its critics as well. I checked out reviews for Red Hood and found that eight out of thirty one reviews had mentioned the second point of view experience. Two reviewers simply mentioned that the book was written in second person. Perhaps not surprisingly three enjoyed the second person POV, saying it “made the experience more personal,” “put you right in the main character’s shoes,” and “it worked perfectly…by driving the story forward and submerging the reading into the narrative.”

There were detractors too, of course, also three, who said “a big problem with the lack of connection to the characters was that the book was written in the second person,’ ‘the second person narrative was jarring and kept me from connecting to the character,’ and ‘the only think I could not get used to was the second person POV.’”

So second person point of view can be problematic for writers. You may have to deal with readers who are turned off by this rather different take on the perspective of your book, however, if you have a strong sense that this is the way the story needs to be told, I say listen to that instinct (your muse, most likely). At worst, you may have to go back and re-write the book in a more conventional POV. But perhaps this is the thing that makes your book work when nothing else would. That makes the reader sit up and take notice of the story because that POV engages them in the story as nothing else would have.

Here are some other books that have utilized the second person POV that you might give a look: Booked by Kwame Alexander, Brass by Xhenet Aliu, The Diver’s Clothes Lie Empty by Vendela Vida, and The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern.

Have you read any books written in the second person? Did you like or dislike them? I think I may just have to read one of these so I can judge for myself.

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Weekend Writing Warriors ~ 7/19/20 Only Marriage Will Do ~ ” I Come to Claim My Wife”

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors!

 

For July I’m celebrating Christmas all month, so one would think I’d take snippets from one of my Christmas novellas. However, instead I’m choosing a Christmas scene from the second House of Pleasure book, Only Marriage Will Do, which is now up for pre-order on Amazon. It will release on July 31.  

 

Check out my new blurb for Only Marriage Will Do:

BLURB: 

Not all Happy-ever-afters begin at “I do.”

Two unexpected callers turn Lady Juliet Ferrers’s world upside down. The first claims to be married to her via a proxy marriage, a statement she can scarcely credit—except she was betrothed to him once upon a time. To deter him, Juliet acts boldly when a stranger appears, declaring he is her husband. But when she is finally alone with the handsome visitor, she finds herself hoping she can turn her falsehood about their marriage into truth.

Captain Amiable Dawson seems to have stepped into a fairy land when a beautiful young woman he’s never met introduces him as her husband. The more she explains her situation, the less he is inclined to believe her, yet Amiable is a pushover for a damsel in distress. Against his better judgment, he agrees to accompany her to her family’s estate far to the north. Along the way the passion between them sizzles until a happy-ever-after is all but assured. However, the question of Juliet’s true husband rears its head again, forcing Amiable to wonder if he is married to the lady or not.

When his rival abducts Juliet, Amiable is compelled to choose between the woman he loves or the law of the land that decrees she is not his wife. Desperate to rescue her at any cost, his last resort may be to kill the man who stands in the way of their happiness.

I began my snippets for Marriage well into the story just as I did for Scandal. Captain Amiable Dawson and Lady Juliet Ferrers married in July under rather strange circumstances: another man, a former suitor, has claimed he is already married to Juliet. She and Amiable spent the autumn months trying to verify that their marriage was indeed valid, but have not heard definitively from the courts. So on Christmas Eve, Amiable’s sisters have thrown them a reception to celebrate their marriage. Now, however, an unknown man has crashed the party, bringing one with him too well known to Juliet–the man claiming to be her true husband.

EXCERPT:

“How dare you enter here?” Amiable dropped his hand to his sword. “Damnation.” No weapon to hand. He had not deemed it necessary at this gathering.

“I dare to come claim my wife, monsieur—my legal wife.” St. Cyr’s smile broadened as he waved his hand toward Mr. Haimes.

The gentleman spoke up quickly. “I suggest we join his lordship in the reception room,” he turned glowering eyes on St. Cyr, “where I instructed you to wait, my lord.”

“I have come to claim that which is my own, Haimes—I have waited long enough.”

And now a litte more of the scene :

“She’s not going anywhere with you, St. Cyr.” Spoiling for a fight, Amiable glanced at the family’s ancient ceremonial broadsword hung above the fireplace. By God, he’d take that weapon and end the discussion here and now.

“At last I have the law on my side, Monsieur Morley. Do you plan to disobey the fine English law that says a wife belongs with her husband?”

Juliet clutched his arm tighter. Stark terror drained her face to a pasty pale. “Do not worry, sweetheart,” he murmured in her ear. “I will never let you go.”

 

Only Marriage Will Do is available on Amazon for pre-order until July 31 at the pre-order price of just $1.99. The book reverts to its regular price of $4.99 on the day after Release Day, Saturday, August 1. Grab yours while you can!

And don’t forget to check out the rest of the Warriors here. There’s some fantastic snippets to be read.

 

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