SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY–Hog Wild

 

 

Happy Memorial Day Weekend!  Welcome back and thanks so much for continuing to visit Jenna’s Journal .  Today I have six more sentences from my erotic contemporary  Hog Wild.   And remember Hog Wild and nine other Fractured Fairy Tales release on  June 3rd.  I hope you enjoy the following snippet!

 Lula has finally found Jesse, owner of the Phantom motorcycle she wants, and possessor of the most tantalizing blue eyes she’s ever seen.  Running out of time, she decides on a more direct approach.
 

“I have been looking for you pretty much all day, Jesse,” she said, nodding her head with a gesture that caused his stomach to twist in anticipation. “I have a proposition for you.”

 Anticipation became an outright heat bloom that sank into his cock. He took a breath and raised his bottle of Dos Equis. “Would you like a beer?  If I’m going to be propositioned, we might as well both enjoy ourselves.”

Hope you enjoyed my six.  Please leave a comment and let me know what you thought.  Hog Wild, as well as our other Twisted Tales, will be available for purchase on the New Dawning Bookfair site beginning June 3rd.

For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.   And stop by my blog all this week for excerpts from Hog Wild and the other Fractured Fairy Tales pictured above.

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SNEAK PEEK: Snowy and the Seven Wharves

The next of Jenna’s Journal’s five featured Fractured Fairy Tales (say that five times fast!) is Patricia Green’s Snowy and the Seven Wharves.  We had a look at six sentences last Saturday, when Snowy won for the tale most voters wanted a peek at.  Well, your wish has come true again this week!  And remember, these snippets will be followed next week with blurbs and excerpts, ultimately leading to our Fairy Tale Ending Contest on June 3rd when all ten tales release.

Doc, the WITSEC Marshal who is guarding her one evening, can’t resist Snow White, though he knows he should.

 A kiss. One little kiss. He tilted his head until her breath caressed his lips. She smelled sweet, like ginger cookies. His lips touched hers and he couldn’t help but want to explore, to take, to mark as his own. Their kiss, at first a tease, deepened as he licked her lips and slid his tongue over her teeth and into her mouth.

Not quite the same Doc and Snow White the Brothers Grimm had in mind!  The original tale was well known all over Europe long before the Grimms collected it as Little Snow WhiteSurLaLune gives a wonderful description of its history, suggesting the tale may  actually have originated in Italy. 

More of  our Snowy will be forthcoming next week.  But if you’d like to see currently available works by the same author, visit Patricia Green’s website

You can also go to New Dawning International Bookfair to see all the Fractured Fairy Tales and check back with Jenna’s Journal to find out how to win free books and a Kindle during New Dawning’s launch on June 3rd.

 

 

 

 

Snowy’s favorite man in this retelling is obviously Doc.  Which of the seven original dwarfs was your favorite?

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Into the Woods: Cautionary Tales

“Careful the things you say, children will listen.”

Thus begins one of the songs from Into The Woods, a musical about fairy tales by my favorite composer, Stephen Sondheim.  And if you think about the Fairy Tales we have heard since childhood, you might wonder why we would tell these grim tales to young , unsuspecting children.  This link to a selection of Grimm’s Fairy Tales is a fun, interactive look at some of the original tales in all of their grisly glory.

They are, quite frankly, cautionary tales, told to teach children the sometimes brutal facts of life.  Take for instance, the idea of the wicked step-mother.  This character is found in many fairy tales:  Cinderella, Hansel and Gretel, Snow White are just a few.  Step-mothers abounded in real life because many women died in childbirth and men remarried to have someone to raise their children.  Were they all wicked?  Probably not.  But life was hard and choices harder.  And mothers always look out for their own first.  Step-children must be wary.

What about the preponderance of wolves in fairy tales?  Little Red Riding Hood, The Three Pigs, The Wolf and the Seven Little Kids are three in which the wolf is the villain.  But who is the wolf really?  True, wolves roamed the countryside of Europe and were a great threat to livestock and unwary children.  But a look at the tales reveals the wolf as symbol of the stranger.  And what is today’s litany when we instruct our children?  Don’t talk to strangers.  Fairy tales said it first, said it vividly, made them remember the consequences of disobeying.

Cautionary tales have a purpose.  So to what purpose have we constructed our Twisted Tales?  To entertain, to make readers laugh, to make connections between the land of “Once Upon A Time” and today.  But I believe most importantly that we have given these classic tales a modern twist to reinforce the Happy Ever After that was often sorely lacking in the original tales. 

There are a total of ten Ten Twisted Tales being released on June 3:

Alice in Eroticland by Dee Dawning  (Alice in Wonderland); Sexy Red by Daryl Devore (Little Red Riding Hood); Goose Girl by Giselle Renault (Goose Girl); Purr by Elizabeth Black (Puss ‘N Boots); Glass Slippers and Jeweled Masques by Denyse Bridger (Cinderella); Goldie and the Three Doms (Goldilocks and the Three Bears) and Snowy and the Seven Wharves (Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs) by Patricia Green; Pinocchio Syndrome by Casea Major (Pinocchio); Hideous by Violet Heart (Beauty and the Beast); and Hog Wild by Jenna Jaxon (The Three Little Pigs).

We hope you come by to help us celebrate our release and the launch of New Dawning International Bookfair.  Both my blog and New Dawning will be having contests, giving away books and a new Kindle to put them in.

What is your favorite fairy tale?  Why?  Did it teach you a lesson when you were a child?  Does it now?

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SNEAK PEEK: Hideous

Today I am introducing another of the five featured Fractured Fairy Tales with a sneak peek–six sentences that will hopefully leave you intrigued and wanting more.  These snippets will be followed next week with blurbs and excerpts, ultimately leading to our Fairy Tale Ending Contest on June 3rd when all ten tales release.

Today’s peek is at Hideous, a new take on the classic tale of Beauty and the Beast, by Violet Heart.  Enjoy!

Lord Vanir suffers as a man transformed into a hideous beast. The appearance of lovely Triselle threatens to send him deeper into his living hell.

Who was she? Had she come here for a reason or had she simply stumbled upon his nightmare?

Plaited hair hung past her hips, and her clothing seemed plain. She stepped to his inner bailey and her gaze followed the stone walls of his donjon. Her upturned face revealed large eyes and truly fair features.

His stomach dropped. She had come to increase his despair.

Not quite the Disney fare we all know and love.  The original tale is “as old as time,”  with elements of it reaching as far back as ancient Greece.  The first version of the story we know today was published in 1756 by Madame Le Prince de Beaumont.  

More of Hideous will be forthcoming next week.  But if you’d like to see currently available works by the same author, visit Violet Heart’s My Space Page

You can also go to New Dawning International Bookfair to see all the Fractured Fairy Tales and check back with Jenna’s Journal to find out how to win free books and a Kindle during New Dawning’s launch on June 3rd.

   Do you think Lord Vanir is truly Hideous so far?  Leave a comment and let us know!

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SNEAK PEEK: Goldie and The Three Doms

This week, in addition to some regular posts, I will be introducing each of the five featured Fractured Fairy Tales with a sneak peek–six sentences that will hopefully leave you intrigued and wanting more.  These snippets will be followed next week with blurbs and excerpts, ultimately leading to our Fairy Tale Ending Contest on June 3rd when all ten tales release.

Today’s sneak peek is Goldie and the Three Doms, a twisted re-telling of Goldilocks and the Three Bears, by Patricia Green.  Enjoy!

In this scene, Goldilocks has her first encounter with a Dominant man on Bear Island. His name is Bob Bentley and he’s a real gentleman.

“You realize, of course, that I’m a Dominant.”

“You strike me as a normal kind of guy.”

“I’m a demon in the bedroom,” he warned, then hedged. “Not literally.”

“I’m game.”

“Take off your clothes and come into the playroom with me.”

Sounds a bit different from the story originally published in 1831 by Eleanore Mure.  More of Goldie will be forthcoming next week.  But if you’d like to see currently available works by the same author, visit Patricia Green’s website

You can also go to New Dawning International Bookfair to see all the Fractured Fairy Tales and check back with Jenna’s Journal to find out how to win free books and a Kindle during New Dawning’s launch on June 3rd.

 What do you think of Goldie and the Three Doms so far?  I’d love for you to leave a comment!

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WRITING PROMPTS–Boon or Bust?

Every year my Playwriting classes are filled with new students just burning to write the next Pulitzer Prize winning play.  They have pens and notebooks poised, just waiting for the word to write.  But if I say, “Ok, write a two person scene,” they look puzzled and say “But what do I write about?”

It is often extremely hard to write from nothing.  Suddenly every great idea that was just begging to be written down has gone on vacation, flown the coop, or otherwise left town. Enter the writer’s best friend—the writing prompt.  The first one I give my students is “Write a scene in which the color ______ is used prominently.”  I fill in a different color every year.  And presto changeo, they have a direction.  They have an idea to think about, a springboard for creativity to launch from.  And I get happy students and some often funny, sometimes bizarre, always interesting scenes to read in class.

These prompts are not for every writer.  Some feel too restricted by them, some are more comfortable coming up with ideas on their own.  Sometimes the pressure of having to write on one specific topic is stifling to the writer.  But if you ever get stuck for an idea, then a prompt may seem like a lifeline to a drowning man.

Below I have another prompt I use in many of my classes.  These little snippets are usually used in acting classes and pairs of students make the six or so generic lines into a little scene.  Writers can do this too.  You might want to experiment—go on, take a chance.  Choose one of these little A/B Dialogue Prompts and see if you can create a prose scene around it.  Think of what these lines of dialogue might mean.  Then add setting, create characters to speak them, add more action, more dialogue and VOILA—you have the beginnings of your next book.  Go ahead.  Indulge.

A/B PROMPT

#1                                                                #3

A.        WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?               A.   LOOK AT THAT.
B.        IT’S THE BEST THING.                              B.    MY EYES MUST BE PLAYING
A.        YOU CAN’T MEAN IT.                                           TRICKS ON ME.
B.        YES, I’M SERIOUS.                                         A.     I HAVE TO FIND OUT WHAT
A.        PLEASE.                                                                B.     LET’S GET OUT OF HERE.
B.        WHAT?                                                                  A.     ARE YOU KIDDING?
A.        NOTHING.                                                          B.      NO, I WANT TO GO NOW.
B.        LISTEN.                                                               A.      I JUST CAN’T BELIEVE IT.
A.        NO                                                                            B.       I DO.
                             #2                                                                                #4
A.        EXCUSE ME.                                                    A.        YOU ARE AMAZING.
B.        YES.                                                                       B.        PRECISELY.  NOW LISTEN TO ME.
A.        WALK THIS WAY.                                      A.        LISTEN?  THAT’S ALL I’VE BEEN
B.        IS IT IMPORTANT?                                                DOING.
A.        COME.                                                                 B.        YOU COULD HAVE FOOLED ME.
B.        POSSIBLY.                                                       A.        WHAT AN ATTITUDE YOU HAVE.
A.        SHOULD I?                                                      B.        DON’T TALK TO ME.
B.        WHERE ARE THE OTHERS?               A.        I HAVE EVERY RIGHT IN THE
A.       I’M WAITING.                                                          WORLD.
B.        SO AM I.

I had never really used writing prompts outside the classroom—until New Dawning Bookfair said “Take a traditional fairy tale and twist it, make it modern, make it sexy, make it different.”  My daughter suggested The Three Little Pigs and Hog Wild was born.  And it was the most fun I’ve had writing in a long time.  Try a prompt.   Other writers did!

 

 Have writing prompts worked for you in the past?  If so, what was the prompt and what was the result?  I’d love to hear what helped you jump-start your writing.

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SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY–Guest Blogger Casea Major

 

Happy Sunday to all you Sixers!  Welcome back and thank you for coming.  Today I have a fellow Fractured Fairy Tale author, Casea Major, presenting her six in preparation for our release of all ten Fractured Fairy Tales on June 3rd.  I hope you enjoy Casea’s snippet as much as I have.

Happy Sexy Six Sentence Sunday  From Casea Major

Jenna has kindly allowed me to post today for the upcoming release of my new short story based loosely on Pinocchio
 
Chicago’s newest wiseguy, Chio Pino has just picked up Rosaria De Luca, the boss’ daughter, from the airport.  Her luscious body and direct approach have his brains and nether regions scrambled.  Unfortunately for Chio, his godfather is not a forgiving man and Chio’s lies have “far reaching” consequences.
 

 

  “Are you aroused, Chio? Do you want me?” she taunted him.

What he wanted was to slam on the brakes and relieve his tension in the middle of the freeway – in the middle of her. “No. Why would you think that?”

There was no need to look down. The sound of thread breaking said it all. Not only was he going to die, he was going to die with a dick as long as a fucking broom handle.

Hope you enjoyed the six.  Leave a comment and let us know you stopped by.  Pinocchio Syndrome as well as our other Twister Tales can be purchased on the New Dawning Bookfair site on June 3rd.

Thank you, Casea, for a great six.  For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.   And stop by my blog all this week for more snippets from five of the Fractured Fairy Tales pictured above.

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A Sneak Peek at The Twisted Tales

And the winner is: 

Snowy and the Seven Wharves

by Patricia Green

So here are six sentences from SnowySnow White and the Seven Dwarfs with a really modern (and sexy) twist!

It’s late at night and Snow White wants to take a shower…with her WITSEC guard, Marshal Doc DuMont.

“May I?”
 
“You have to ask?”

She grinned devilishly and used a child’s ploy. “I’ll let you touch mine, if I can touch yours.”

He laughed. “Get in the shower, minx.”

A tantalizing tidbit that hopefully leaves you wanting more–just like Snowy!

If you would like to see more of Patricia Green’s works, check out her website Patricia Green Books.

Tomorrow, fellow author Casea Major will be a guest blogger on Jenna’s Journal with six sentences from her twisted tale Pinoccio Syndrome.  Come check us out at Six Sentence Sunday.

So how did you like Snowy‘s six?  Do you think Marshal Doc can handle this sassy piece?

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FAIRY TALE UPDATE–MEET VIOLET HEART

I have a couple of updates today regarding the release of the Fractured Fairy Tales, the launch of New Dawning International Bookfair, and the Fairy-Tale Ending Contest. 

First, the launch/release date has been moved to June 3.  Which gives us more time to acquaint you with our authors and their fairy tales before the contest takes place.

Second, we have a new author joining the blog, another writer of a Fractured Fairy Tale,  Violet Heart.  Violet’s tale–Hideous, a twist on Beauty and the Beast–will join our other tales in the June 3rd contest, making your prize now FIVE brand new stories.  Talk about a Fairy-Tale Ending!  Take a look at Hideous:

Triselle finds relief from her peasant drudgery in the unlikely arms of Vanir, a cursed beast.

Another intriguing tale to add to you TBR list!  Along with

FIVE GREAT NEW SEXY TALES  ALL ABOUT THAT HAPPILY EVER AFTER!

Stop by tomorrow for a snippet from one of these new works.  (Visit my previous post for one line teasers about each of the other tales.) Leave a comment telling me which Fairy Tale you’d like to read and I’ll post at least six sentences from the one with the most votes!  How’s that for an HEA?

Click on this link to take a look at more offerings available from New Dawning International Bookfair

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Fractured Fairy Tales Releasing May 27

Fractured Fairy Tales?  Who broke ’em?  WE DID!

On Jenna’s Journal this week Patricia Green, Casea Major, and I will begin celebrating the   publication of our short stories–fractured fairy tales that will be released on May 27 in conjunction with the launch of New Dawning International Bookfair, a new e-publisher and “bookstore to the world.”

What are fractured fairy tales?  Take a fairy tale we all know and love, then give it a modern twist of some sort.  The movie Pretty Woman is a twisted re-telling of Cinderella.  Our tales have similar, though somewhat more provocative twists to them.

Goldilocks and the Three Bears

becomes

Fed up with Femville’s wussy men, Goldie is looking for a strong-willed guy who’s not too gentle, not too harsh, but just right.

The classic fairy-tale Pinocchio meets the Sopranos as

 A rookie wiseguy with a telltale dick tries to dodge the advances of the mob boss’ daughter he’s assigned to protect.

 

 

The Three Little Pigs become Harley-Davidson riders in

A beautiful-but-frustrated woman on the prowl seduces three Harley “hogs” to gain the sexual satisfaction she craves, and the dream bike she desires.

And Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs takes on a completely new image

Hiding from her evil stepmother, Snow White finds herself in the WITSEC program, protected by tall and sexy Marshal Doc DuMont.

 

All of our tales have a sexy edge the originals certainly did not.  But all of our tales have a Happily Ever After, which some of the originals also did not have. 

We think we have improved on the originals–come check us out and see for yourselves!

New Dawning International Bookfair will release all of the Fractured Fairy Tales on Friday, May 27.  Jenna’s Journal will  hold a Fairy-Tale Ending Contest that day.  The Prize:  copies of all four of the works posted here on Jenna’s Journal. 

To enter is as easy as dropping breadcrumbs like Hansel and Gretel:  Visit Jenna’s Journal each day next week and read the posts by authors Patricia Green, Casea Major, and me, Jenna Jaxon.  Read the blurbs and excerpts too.  On Friday, May 27th I will post five questions about our Fairy Tales and their authors.  Answer all five questions and email the answers to me and you will be entered to receive your very own Fairy-Tale Ending–four brand new stories to read.

I will be posting more about the Fairy-Tales, New Dawning International Bookfair, and our fabulous authors during this week, so stop by and check us out–

“Because happy is what happens when all your dreams come true!”

–Glinda The Good from Wicked

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