Reviewed by Jenna: “When Heroes Break Bad”–“An Arranged Marriage” by Jo Beverley

Good Morning, fellow readers.  I’m actually cheating a bit today.  I’m reviewing a much older book than usual, Jo Beverley’s first in the Company of Rogues series, An Arranged Marriage.  This is for two reasons: first, because I love the book, and second because I wanted to use it as a jumping off point for a discussion of Heroes I’ve been itching to do. 

I’m actually piggy-backing off of two postings from the past few days.  One was on a Goodreads post Leia Shaw did last week that ended up talking about heroes.  The other is a blog posted yesterday by fellow writer Casea Major over on Tabitha’s Nocturnal Nights.  Her post was entitled “What is It About the Hero that Captures Our Imagination?” and she gives us reasons why we instinctually seek a hero.

My question is:  what happens when heroes fail?  Not necessarily fail in accomplishing the task they are set, but fail to live up to the ideal we have of them as hero?  We put heroes up on pedestals by forcing expectations on them, especially in romance novels.  Real life heroes we cut some slack–they are human after all.  But our romance heroes are held to a higher standard, well, because they are the higher standard we want others to measure up to. 

So what happens when the hero falls off that pedestal?

Nicholas Delaney, the hero of An Arranged Marriage, does fall and though he tries to climb back up, he never quite makes it, in my opinion.  The novel’s premise, for those who may not have read it, is Nicholas is pressured into an arranged marriage with Eleanor, a woman who his twin brother raped but cannot marry.  Nicholas is engaged, at the time, as a government spy, trying to prevent another rise to power by Napoleon.  In order to do this, he must seduce a former lover and courtesan to get her cooperation in this delicate matter.  So he’s having a very sordid affair for three-quarters of the book, cheating on his wife, who of course finds out about it.  Well, but it’s just an arranged marriage, so no big deal, right? 

 Wrong, because during the course of the book, Nicholas and Eleanor fall in love.  But he continues to carry on the affair, for God and country.  In the end, though, he does break with the courtesan and come back to Eleanor, who learns the truth and forgives him.

I have read the book several times and the character of Nicholas Delaney is as charismatic and charming as they come.  He is the hero’s hero, the leader of a band of very powerful men–including the heir of a duke, a speaker in Parliament, soldiers, others of high-ranking nobility–called the Company of Rogues, a schoolboy band of friends whose friendship remains steadfast long past the schoolroom.  Nicholas is also a ladies’ man–a renowned lover with a handsome face and beautiful body.  And he is an extremely compassionate, warm, loving man.  The perfect hero.

But how does the perfect hero cheat on his wife, cause her untold misery, pain and humiliation, and still remain the perfect hero?  Does his single-minded devotion to his country outweigh his duty to his wife?  And why, at the end when he is seeking forgiveness from Eleanor, does he not seem quite contrite enough?

This last may be my biggest beef with Nicholas (and by extension with Ms. Beverley who created him).  I might be able to forgive this hero for continuing his affair in the service of his country.  But he never seems to try to atone sufficiently for his sins when he and Eleanor are reunited.  And I, as reader, am left feeling that he gets off too lightly in the scheme of things.  I still love the book–I recommend it as a deeply romantic novel–though it has given me a love-hate relationship with its hero.

So what do you do with a flawed hero?  A hero who falls off his pedestal, who doesn’t quite live up to your expectations of hero-like behavior?  Are there other heroes out there like Nicholas Delaney who you love to hate?  Please share your thoughts with me on this topic.  I’d really like to get some perspective–am I holding Nicholas to too high a standard?

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Six Sentence Sunday 8/14–As Long As You’re Mine

Welcome back once more to Six Sentence Sunday.  I truly appreciate everyone’s comments each week.  Thank you to those old and new who choose to visit my blog.  I hope you’re having as much fun as I am.

This week, as promised, we see more of Rafe and Samantha’s first official meeting.  This week Rafe has just asked to accompany Samantha on an early morning ride to discuss some rather personal and pertinent things.   Enjoy!

“I can hardly think what we have to discuss, sir, either in public or in private.”

He cocked his head to the side, looking suddenly whimsical, like an elf contemplating mischief. “True, there will be no real discussion.  But there is information I believe you should be made aware of, and having just endured half-an-hour’s interview with your father I assured him I would speak with you forthwith.  If you would care to have the information laid before you in such a busy room I will oblige you; however, I advise you I do not take well to hysterics.”

“It is fortunate then, Mr. Beauregard, that I have no intention of having any.” 

Samantha would be the  last person to have hysterics, I imagine. LOL

Hope you’re still enjoying the six each week from As Long As You’re Mine. Next week we’ll probably have a little of the meeting Rafe is requesting, before I change gears and begin something completely different.

For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.

And if you liked my six, perhaps you’d like some of my published work as well.  Heart of Deception, is available for purchase from Books To Go Now!, and Hog Wild from New Dawning International Bookfair.  Both are available from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks.

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Update: Name Game Contest

Good Evening, Everyone!  I have an update today about my untitled erotic novella (yes, I think it may actually hit 20K now).

I finished chapters 1 & 2, then promptly combined them to make Chapter 1, titled Saturday Afternoon.   I’m now thinking I need to have a chapter for each day of Hunter’s seduction of Ashley, each one named for a day of the week and time of day when most of the action of the chapter takes place.  Theoretically, then, there should be seven chapters.  That’s my thought for now, though everything’s open to change.

I also wanted to give you a couple of images to help with the search for a title.  One is of Hunter and Ashley:

I had actually thought about this photo for the cover, but went with the other shower scene instead.  I still love this shot.  She’s the perfect image of my idea of Ashley.

Here’s the blurb  again to give you an idea about what’s going on to match with the above  photos:

Ashley is known for her outrageous parties and last Friday night was no exception.  Only this time she wakes to find a video of her in the middle of a menage a trois with her ex-boyfriend and a gorgeous stranger.  Unable to remember anything about the night, other than the hot sex she sees on the computer screen, Ashley begins a search for Mr. Hunk.  She has no luck until he unexpectedly shows up–in her shower. 

Hunter Hopewell, Mr. Hunk in the flesh, would love to initiate Ash into a variety of sexual experiences he finds exciting, but fears his tastes are too wild even for her.  As the week of escalating sexual encounters intensifies, will Ashley let go of her final inhibitions and join Hunter in the promise of a truly unforgettable Friday night?

And a little snippet to give you an idea about Ashley.

WARNING:  R-rated excerpt (language).

“Oh, shit!”  The pounding in Ashley Thompson’s head had a fast, staccato beat to it, not unlike the new Nikki Menaj song on the radio.  She clapped her hands over her eyes to shield them from the bright morning—maybe early afternoon—light that filtered through the dusty mini-blinds.  She breathed slowly, trying not to throw up.  That was always the worst fucking part of Friday night—throwing up Saturday morning.

Ash turned her head to the right in slow increments, already aware of the body lying next to her.  “Oh, Jesus.  Just let me know the guy.” 

Hope this gives you more ideas for possible titles.  Throughout the week I will continue to post snippets of the work and on Thursday announce a winner.  Even if none of the suggestions seems exactly right, a contestant’s name will be drawn at random to receive a copy of one of my books.

Thanks again for your help and please check back for more updates and excerpts from the book throughout the week.

Available for purchase at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks as well as the publisher websites.

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Sweet Saturday Sample–8/13 Only Scandal Will Do

Welcome back to Sweet Saturday Sample.  My great thanks to all who’ve been coming by the past couple of weeks.  I appreciate your comments very much.  And any newcomers, let me thank you as well for sampling my work.

This week I’m continuing to post from my Georgian historical novel Only Scandal Will Do, which is out with an editor and an agent.  This week we meet the hero, Duncan Ferrers, Marquis of Dalbury, and find out his woes. His best friend is trying to tempt him to go out carousing and Duncan tries awfully hard to resist.  Please enjoy!

Duncan shook his head.  “But what invitation are you talking about, Tom?  My aunt’s masquerade?”

“God, no!” Tommy grimaced.  “The one to Madam Vestry’s latest auction.” His smile widened into a leer.  “The madam has hit upon a fresh idea for an auction.  Tableaux.”

Duncan doubted he had heard right.  “She’s auctioning off tableaux?  Of what?  And why?”

Tommy’s bright blue eyes glittered with excitement.  “Tableaux of your deepest desires or darkest fantasies.  Haven’t you imagined having a fantasy come true, Duncan?  A slave to your master?  A pirate with a captured maid?  A Roman soldier and a vestal virgin?”  The young man chuckled at that.  “I doubt you’ll find a virgin there tonight, though I understand some of these girls are new.”

Duncan’s smile widened at the images suggested, but shook his head.  Perhaps if things had been different.  “What time’s the auction?”

“Due to start at eight, as usual.  Didn’t you get the invitation?”

“I received it, but I didn’t open it.”  Avoiding his friend’s astonished face, his eyes slid to the mantel clock.  “It’s gone seven now.  I can take you to Madame Vestry’s on the way to my aunt’s.”

His friend gawked at him, mouth open.  “You’re really not going?  I would have believed you’d be keener on this, after the long voyage.”

“Oh, I’m keen enough, but I can’t be seen at Amorina’s.  You know that.”

“Where’s your sense of adventure, Duncan?”

“Left it in Italy.”  Duncan stared intently at the fire for a moment.  “You heard about my cousin, Roger Ferrers?”

“Killed in that hold-up out on the Guildford road.  Sorry, Duncan.” Tommy’s gaze was now also absorbed in the dancing flames.  “That’s what brought you back?”

“Yes,” Duncan frowned at the memory and his jaw tightened.  “My aunt wrote telling me it was my duty to return, marry and produce an heir.  Which is true.”  He scowled.  “Easier said than done though.”  After the series of scandals that had rocked him last year it might be a cold day in hell before he could convince a woman to walk down the aisle with him.

Not a very pretty picture for Duncan.  Should he choose duty or desire?  Decisions, decisions. 🙂

Thanks again for visiting me for some Sweets.  Come back next week for another “Sweet Sample” or join in the fun with your own.  Follow this link to Sweet Saturday Sample to find more “sweet” offerings.

If you liked the above sample, you might also like some of my published work.  Heart of Deception, set in Victorian England, is available at Books to Go NowHog Wild, an erotic contemporary retelling of The Three Little Pigs, is available at New Dawning Bookfair.  And both are available at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks.  Blurbs for both books can be found on my Published Works page.

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Reader’s Corner: Name Game Contest

Good Morning, Readers!  I have a little request for all of you in the Reader’s Corner today.  I have just started writing a new erotic contemporary romance, called. . .

But that’s the problem.  I’ve just been calling it “About Friday Night” because it was inspired by Katy Perry’s current hit single “Last Friday Night,” about the aftermath of a wild party.  But I need a really hot, sexy title to put with the hot book cover I’ve been given:

I just love that cover!

So I wondered if you would help me by leaving title suggestions in the comment section?  I’ll even make it sweeter by offering a copy of this book, when it’s published, to the person suggesting the title I like best, or, if you don’t want to wait that long, a copy of either of my published works. 

I will tell you that this book is not currently under contract to be published, although I plan to submit it to New Dawning International Bookfair, the e-publisher who brought out my other erotic contemporary, Hog Wild, in June.  And I certainly hope it too finds a home there.

Here’s the blurb for my untitled work, to give you an idea about what’s going on to match with the above steamy photo:

Ashley is known for her outrageous parties and last Friday night was no exception.  Only this time she wakes to find a video of her in the middle of a menage a trois with her ex-boyfriend and a gorgeous stranger.  Unable to remember anything about the night, other than the hot sex she sees on the computer screen, Ashley begins a search for Mr. Hunk.  She has no luck until he unexpectedly shows up–in her shower. 

Hunter Hopewell, Mr. Hunk in the flesh, would love to initiate Ash into a variety of sexual experiences he finds exciting, but fears his tastes are too wild even for her.  As the week of escalating sexual encounters intensifies, will Ashley let go of her final inhibitions and join Hunter in the promise of a truly unforgettable Friday night?

I’d love to have your suggestions and will post the winner next week in the Reader’s Corner.  Throughout the week I will post snippets of the work, again to help you put on your thinking caps.  At the end of the week, if none of the suggestions seems exactly right for the work, a contestant’s name will be drawn at random to receive a copy of one of my books.

Thank you so much for your help and please check back for updates and excerpts from the book throughout the week.

Available for purchase at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks as well as the publisher websites.

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Reviewed by Jenna: “Paying the Piper”: I.O.U. Sex by Sandra Nachlinger and Sandra Allen

Would you call your high school boyfriend, the one you kissed and teased, but left unsatisfied all those years ago, and finally say, “Okay, Buddy, I’m ready to pay my dues now?”  A hilarious, scandalous, crazy idea?  Probably.  But would you do it? 

After reading a diary from their graduation year of 1965, three high school BBFs, June, Kiki and Peggy, decide that they owe those patient, long-suffering boyfriends a good ole roll in the hay, make a pact (just like in high school) and set out to accomplish just that in Sandra Nachlinger and Sandra Allen’s funny, sexy, and poignant book, I.O.U. Sex

The girls have weathered a lot of life since they last saw their sweethearts and have learned some hard lessons. The pact, and a couple more of life’s unexpected curve balls, brings them to a deeper understanding of themselves and each other that allows them to move forward and embrace their lives as they were meant to be. 

Though the premise sounds terribly funny, and the humor of the situations run throughout the book, what captured the reader in me was the relationship of the three women.  Even though the book is subtitled:  A Baby Boomer Romance, the women in the book and their goals and dreams are timeless.  Everyone has that one boyfriend in high school, the one who got away, who you’d love to track down and reminisce with, even if no sex was involved.  Every reader has dreams that didn’t quite come true, and hopefully friends to share that loss with.  The friendship between the three women that shines throughout this book is the friendship I certainly wish I’d had. 

The women’s romances, skillfully intertwined with their personal growth stories, also touched me on a deep level.  Because there is always that one man you think of and say, “What if…”  June, Kiki, and Peggy all get to experience the thrill of what might have been.  And the reader is fortunate enough to be taken right along with them.

June, Kiki, and Peggy each contact their former sweethearts.  All three have secrets to keep from their men and all of them confront obstacles in keeping their pact.  Do they all go through with it?  Can each one put paid to her account by the end of the book?  Or was this just another one of Kiki’s hair-brained schemes?  I.O.U. Sex offers the answers in a funny, sexy and thoroughly entertaining read. 

Come on and pay the piper!  

I.O.U. Sex is available in paperback on CreateSpace, and as an e-book on Amazon and Smashwords.  You can also check out the website for I.O.U. Sex, to learn more about the book and its authors.

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The Dance of Touch–Jenna Guest Blogs on Savvy Authors

Hey!  With so much going on, I clean forgot that I had a guest blog going up on the Savvy Authors Blogsite today.  Actually, yesterday 8/7, but you can still go view it.  It’s a continuation of my Come to Your Senses series, this post focussing on the sense of touch. 

The link to Savvy Authors website is highlighted.  Come by and check it out.  You can comment either here at Jenna’s Journal, or on the Savvy Authors’ site.  Let me know what you think!  How easy/hard is it to get the sense of touch into your writing?

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Six Sentence Sunday 8/7–As Long As You’re Mine

Welcome back to Six Sentence Sunday.  My thanks again to those who visit me every week and those who are visiting for the first time.  I do appreciate comments so please, let me know what you think of my six. 

I do want to let my Six Sentence Sunday readers to know, if you don’t already, that my contemporary romance Almost Perfect has been accepted by Decadent Publishing for their 1Night Stand series!  I had an excerpt of it up on the blog a few days ago under an UPDATE post.  I invite you to check it out to see the story’s beginning.

 

This week, as promised, we see Rafe and Samantha’s meeting, or actually her first good view of him, from her POV.  Quite a different experience!  Enjoy!

 

When Samantha saw the tall, dark-haired young man heading towards her and her hostess, her first thought was relief that she was not going to have to marry a troll.  Rafael Beauregard was a handsome man she had to admit, though she was equally sure that he would never in a hundred years have been a man she would have chosen to marry.  The dark brows above equally dark eyes had an arch to them as he crossed the room, a sign she gauged to be a propensity towards mischief. 

I bet he’s turned some heads. Samantha eyed his easy gait and broad smile.  Just arrogant enough to tempt a woman to. . . her thought broke off and her face grew hot as she recalled vividly what that mouth had done to her in the night.

Those memories would make anyone blush!  Hope you enjoyed these six from As Long As You’re Mine. Next week we’ll probably have a little more of this meeting, before I send the novel out into the world to make its way.

For more great snippets please go to Six Sentence Sunday.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.  

Remember!  Today is the last day to enjoy my  “Christmas in July” free reads.  They are available under the Christmas in July page through tonight.

And if you liked my six, perhaps you’d like some of my published work as well.  Heart of Deception, is available for purchase from Books To Go Now!, and Hog Wild from New Dawning International Bookfair.  Both are available from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks.

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Sweet Saturday Sample–8/6 Only Scandal Will Do

Welcome back to Sweet Saturday Sample.  Thank you very much to those of you who are coming back again this week from the premiere of Sweet last weekend.  And a big Hello and Welcome to new folks sampling for the first time today.  This blog tour is similar in nature to Six Sentence Sunday if you’re familiar with that.  We post an excerpt of our work–published or WIP–that’s no higher in heat level than PG-13 for your enjoyment.

Sweet Saturday Sample proved a wonderful talisman for me:  the story I put up last week —Almost Perfect–was accepted for publication this past week in Decadent Publishing’s 1Night Stand series! This week I’m going to try to keep that ball rolling and post from my Georgian historical novel Only Scandal Will Do, which is also out with an editor and an agent.  Again, this is the opening scene, so you won’t need any set-up!  Please enjoy!

London, 1761

“Put her back in the carriage, now!”

Her assailant’s gravelly voice sent a shiver of fear through Lady Katarina Fitzwilliam.  Violent hands seized and tossed her back into the carriage.

Now she was gagged, hands pinioned behind her back and ankles bound together.  Trussed like a Christmas goose, she could only lie in a cramped bundle on the hard plank floor of the dim carriage, her diaphanous Grecian costume in ruins, and scheme how to get out of this predicament.  The horses jerked forward and the uneven cobblestones of the London streets jounced her already aching body.

All because I was bored.  Doggedly, Katarina tested the bonds securing her hands, strained against the coarse rope then relaxed, seeking play in the cords.  There was none.  She muttered a curse and forced her whole body to relax.  Tension would never free her.  Rough and tumble games growing up with Jack had taught her that.

Jack!  God, where is he?  Is he alive or . . . She had heard one muted cry when they were attacked, then nothing.  If her brother were dead it would be her fault.  Because she was bored.

She pulled and twisted her wrists.  If we had stayed in Virginia we would have been better off.  London was far wilder than she would have believed; although she had heard of women being abducted by highwaymen she had thought them only tales.  Until now.

But Jack had inherited a title, forcing them to come to London.  The year of mourning for their father was not quite over, so Great-Aunt Harriet had taken command of what little social life Katarina was allowed.  For the past month she had been stuck all day with strong tea and inane gossip about people she did not know.  Finally, she rebelled and forced Jack to escort her to a masquerade ball at seven this evening, ironically attired as Athena, goddess of war.

A particularly nasty rut jarred the carriage.  What wouldn’t she give for Athena’s armor at this moment, or at least her spear.  She had to admit, though, she had gotten her wish.  She wasn’t bored now.

I think Kat’s in for a bumpy night!  In more ways than one.

Thanks again for visiting me for some Sweets.  Come back next week for another “Sweet Sample” or join in the fun with your own.  Follow this link to Sweet Saturday Sample to find more “sweet” offerings.

If you liked the above sample, you might also like some of my published work.  Heart of Deception, set in Victorian England, is available at Books to Go NowHog Wild, an erotic contemporary retelling of The Three Little Pigs, is available at New Dawning Bookfair.  And both are available at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and All Romance Ebooks.  Blurbs for both books can be found on my Published Works page.

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UPDATE: Almost Perfect Accepted by Decadent Publishing

Since today was Readers Corner, I didn’t think you’d mind an update on the author in question. 

Earlier today  I received an email from Decadent Publishing offering me a contract on my contemporary romance Almost Perfect for their 1Night Stand series.   The series’ premise is that 1Night Stand is an exclusive online dating service that matches people with the  perfect person for them for a one night encounter.  And Madame Eve, the owner of the service, can do wonders with her matchmaking abilities–from alien encounters, to time-travel, to shapeshifters–nothing is too far out, if it leads to a HEA!

In Almost Perfect, Pam Kimball wants a 1Night Stand fantasy adventure to jump-start her life, put a new man in her bed, and make her forget her ex-husband Roger.  Her Pirates of the Caribbean themed request seems like a dream come true for Pam, a die-hard movie fan, until she ends up abandoned on a deserted island…well, not quite deserted. 

If you’d like a little sample of  Almost Perfect, below is the excerpt I posted last week for Sweet Saturday Sample.  The excerpt is rated G, the book, however, tends a bit more towards an R rating!

“Happy birthday to me.” 

Pamela Kimball stowed a pair of cute Donna Karan shorts in her Louie Vuitton bag. 

“Happy birthday to me.”  She added a moss-green brushed cotton top.

“Happy birthday, dear Pamela.”  A midnight blue babydoll nightgown with peek-a-boo cups came next.  Thank God she had the figure to do it justice.   Pam laid the scrap of filmy lace on top of her clothes. 

“Happy birthday to me.”  She added a pair of white satin mules—the maribou ripped off and replaced with rhinestones—and zipped the bag shut.

Two years after her divorce she was finally getting on with her life.  Hence the nightgown.

She picked up the printed email from Madame Eve, a reservation printout from the Castillo Resort in Miami, and the Chariots For Hire confirmation.  She glanced at the latter and opened her cell phone.  “This is Pamela Kimball.  I reserved a limo to take me to Dulles for an 8:00 am flight.”  In three hours the magic would begin.

I hope that little snippet whetted your appetite for more of Almost Perfect.  Not sure when this will be released, but I’ll let you know as soon as I get my cover art, which should be the next part of the process.  In the meantime, below are several covers for already existing 1Night Stand romances (or soon to be released ones).  You might want to check them out as well! 

This is all for my update, but I should be posting again by the weekend for Sweet Saturday Sample and Six Sentence Sunday.  Hope you join me!

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