Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! I’m working on my medieval novella, Betrothal, so I thought I’d share six sentences of that this week.
This snippet continues from where I left off yesterday on Sweet Saturday Sample, which you can read here. Geoffrey has just given Alyse some unexpected news about the coming joust and the part she is to play in itAn.
Alyse’s mouth dropped open and a thrill coursed through her body. “But I am only Princess Joanna’s attendant, Sir Geoffrey. Usually such honors are reserved for the Queen’s and Princess Isabella’s ladies, or the Duchesses and Countesses in the Royal Family. Why did they choose me?”
“Because I am to be one of the knights, and I begged a boon of the king to allow you to be my lady.”
She stared at him in shock, almost unbelieving, though she knew he would not lie about such a thing.
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Great cover for this little gem! Sounds like a nice surprise for her!
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Geoffrey must’ve fallen hard for her if he begged for that favor!
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the ultimate declaration of the times… to beg a boon of the king.
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Oooh, does she have a surprise coming.
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I like the consistent voice of this piece.
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Sounds like a nice surprise for her!
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Oooh, interesting. I’m wondering what happens next.
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Love the tension here! This was such a cool phrase: begged a boon of the king. Loved it! Great 6! 😀
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And that means she’s very special to him. Now, is he special to her? I’m definitely going to find out. 🙂
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Oh, a surprise for her on both accounts. Great six! 🙂
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Great six… I’m wondering what Alyse will think of Geoffrey now….
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