Everything I Know About Writing I Learned from Grey’s Anatomy

Well, not really.  But I must confess I learned a lot about writing from seasons 1 & 2 of the award winning television show, Grey’s Anatomy.  Not about script writing, either.  But about how to hook an audience, how to reveal character, how to write memorable dialogue, and how to leave an audience wanting more.

How to hook an audience:

Introduce your main characters not at their best.  The series begins with the heroine, Meredith Grey, waking up after a wild night out on the town. ( The first minute of this video, until Meredith disappears upstairs, illustrates this point, but if you watch a little more you will see how several characters are revealed beautifully and succinctly.)

Then, about ten minutes into the episode, we find out Derek is her boss.  She wants to maintain a professional relationship, he wants to keep it personal.  Now we’ve got to continue to watch to find out if she sucuumbs or if she resists.  Same principle applies in writing novels–grab the reader with a great hook on the first page.  Jump into the middle of a situation, reveal a character’s weakness, start with an embarrassing situation that just gets worse.

Revealing character is another skill vital to the writer and one that I learned from watching Grey’s.  If you watched the whole of the video above, you have solid character concepts for all four interns and Dr. Bailey.  Her nickname, “the Nazi,” sums her up beautifully!  What these five characters do and say in a miminal amount of time creates their characters vividly in the audience’s mind.  I strive to pack that much info into concise dialogue or description.

Even though I have an ear for dialogue (having worked in the theatre most of my life), Grey’s showed me that dialogue isn’t just words the characters say–it is an art form.  The following scene is my very favorite in the whole of the Grey’s Anatomy series, because the use of language and dialogue is mesmerizing:

I can watch that scene over and over.  The rhythm of the language almost makes it poetry.  People don’t talk like that nowadays–but they should.  And when they do, it reveals so much about their characters.  That is what dialogue is supposed to do–reveal the characters to the audience.  When we craft those words so that the reader can hear the intonation, the inflection, the way the character’s brow arches when he says a certain phrase, then we have done our job.

What you also need to do as a writer is to always leave the reader wanting more.  Make the hook at the end of each chapter so tantalizing that the reader has to turn that page NOW to see what happens.  Grey’s Anatomy did that in spades at the end of Season 1.

Just when you thought the HEA was in sight–everything changes.  And you CANNOT put that book down until you know everything’s going to be all right.

I’ve enjoyed sharing my favorite and most inspirational clips from Grey’s Anatomy.  In my opinion, the writing in Seasons 1 & 2 was stellar and I go back from time to time for a refresher course.  We can learn the craft of writing from any number of sources.  Keep your eyes open; you never know when or where the your next best tip on writing will come from.

Do you have television shows or movies whose writing has inspired you? Changed your style?  Made the light bulb go off about something you never really got before?  If so, please share a comment!

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9 Responses to Everything I Know About Writing I Learned from Grey’s Anatomy

  1. Simone's avatar Simone says:

    Excellent post! I loved all the scenes you posted. I too am one of the people who never watched Grey’s Anatomy. But television is one of my guides for revealing character through dialogue.

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  2. I’m not a TV person, however, I did write a couple of screenplays when I lived in Los Angeles. (None optioned.) Dialog for TV and movies has to be fast these days. Gone are the slow, fulsome monologues of exposition from the H or H, and the whiny revelations from the villain. Modern viewers don’t have the patience for glorious romances as in To Have and Have Not. It’s a shame it has to be that way; I think we’ve lost something. Gray’s Anatomy might be the exception, so I’ll fire up Netflix and take a look. Good post, JJ!

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  3. Kary Rader's avatar Kary Rader says:

    I may be one of the few who never watched Grey’s but I can appreciate the compulsion to watch. I do watch the spinoff Private Practice. Great post, Jenna.

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      All I can say is “Netflix!” At least for the first 3 seasons. After that the writing dropped off and I stopped watching. I watched Private Practice the first season, but don’t watch much at all now. I’m too busy writing!

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  4. D'Ann's avatar D'Ann says:

    For me, soaps have taught some of the same lessons. People scoff at them, but they are brilliant for thier dialogue, tension, conflict. A lot like romance novels, huh?

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      I think a lot of the soaps could be turned into romance novels! I have a friend who used to write for one of the soaps and he said it was not easy work. They are set within such constraints I assume it takes time and talent to be able to make the plot points, dialogue, and conflict proceed at the correct pace. As you say, D’Ann, a lot like romance novels. 🙂

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  5. Lisa Kumar's avatar Lisa Kumar says:

    Great post, Jenna! While I don’t have any one movie that’s inspired me, bits and pieces of different movies have combined to influence me. Sometimes it’s only a line, sometimes a scene.

    Dialogue is so important, yet harder than most think. It’s not real-life conversation but should read like it is.

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      Yes, dialogue is real-life conversation with a purpose. The plot of a play or a novel is not a slice of life-real life can be incredibly boring. Same thing with conversations. Quite often they go nowhere. Dialogue should always go somewhere, make a point, reveal something, lead to something else. And yes, it is definitely harder to write than one would think!

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