Revision is NOT a Four Letter Word

All writers know that revisions are a necessary evil, a vital (though sometimes tedious) part of the process of writing a book.  Unfortunately, many writers do not see it for what it actually is:  another opportunity for them to be creative.

Now, if you all you are changing in your manuscript are small phrases, spelling and punctuation mistakes, and grammar issues, such pains-taking corrections can be less than exciting.  I tend to think of this type of revision as a “polish”:  your manuscript is almost literally walking out the door and you are making sure its buttons are fastened, its hair is combed, and it doesn’t have spinach caught between its teeth.

Sometimes, however, a hiatus is needed—a vacation from your manuscript. If you are getting weary of working with your current WIP—after months of rounds of writing, critiquing, re-writing, and re-critiquing—set your work aside and let it percolate.  This can actually lead the writer to a stronger conception of their work.  Coming back to your novel with fresh eyes and a willingness to embrace change can truly work miracles.

The revision that excites me most is the one where I truly re-vision a major portion or concept of the work.  Seeing the work in a different light, or thinking about it “outside the box” that I originally put it in, often takes the manuscript in a better direction simply because I am not limiting myself to my original vision of it.

This process is, however, fraught with pain and fear.  Pain because I have to sacrifice ideas, scenes, language, dialogue that I have become incredibly fond of.  The first book I wrote, my medieval, will have approximately 8-10 chapters cut when I revise it this summer.  I know this, and have been putting it off because I like an awful lot of what’s in those chapters.  But the harsh reality is that the major story conflict starts at the end of chapter 9.  Their courtship, while a conflict in and of itself, is not the major conflict in the book; the conflict emerges after they fall in love.  And at its current length of 160K, the book needs pruning.

But there is also fear.  Fear of making a mistake.  Fear that this re-visioning will weaken rather than strengthen the book.  That is a very real risk with every revision, and not a light one.

There is the hope, however, at the end of so many tunnels. 

As I wrote this blog, I recalled some advice a friend recently gave me, suggesting that I think about breaking the book in half and creating a two book set.  Now I’m wondering if perhaps it could be done as a three book set—chronicling the whole story:  boy woos girl and gets her, boy loses girl, boy gets girl again in the end. 

Hmmmm.  A new vision.  A re-vision.  And anticipation of rewriting a story I love suddenly escalates.  Can’t hardly wait for summer now.

Below are a couple of links that may help make revisions easier.  They give advice and strategies from some of the top writers in the business.

 http://www.indiereader.com/zine-article.htm?id=52

http://inkyfreshpress.com/2010/12/writers-on-the-art-of-revision-natalie-whipple-katherine-center-stephen-king/

Stephen King’s book On Writing is a personal favorite of mine.  He has another, earlier book, Danse Macabre, that also has great information on writing, especially for the horror genre.

How difficult is it for you to revise your work?  Do you look forward to revising or do you drag your feet?  Please share a comment about your take on revisions.

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7 Responses to Revision is NOT a Four Letter Word

  1. Charli Mac's avatar Charli Mac says:

    I hated revisions at first but now I love them. It’s makes the story stronger and me more appreciative of the craft. Revisions are beautifully brutal.

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  2. Like Lila, I revise daily, going over the previous day’s chapter and polishing it before I move on. I also keep previous versions of the manuscript, just in case. I rarely regret taking things out, but I’m cautious because once you’ve written a scene just so, you know you’ll never write it the same “perfect” way again. (Generally, you’ll write it better!) Realizing that you’re improving your MS, either by tightening it up or opening it out with revisions is exciting. Great post!

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar Jenna Jaxon says:

      Thanks, Patricia. The dedication to making your work the best it can be certainly shows in your novels. Does it ever get easier to let go of dialogue or scenes that you really love, but realize are not working in the book? Or do you still agonize over letting those parts go?

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  3. Hi Jenna,

    Thanks for linking to Inky Fresh Press! Great post.

    Bridgid

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar Jenna Jaxon says:

      Hi, Brigid. You are certainly welcome. It was a great article. And of course I loved being able to include Stephen King in my post. My favorite author outside of romance. I’ll have to check out Inky Fresh Press more often! Thanks for stopping by.

      Jenna

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  4. lilabarton's avatar lilabarton says:

    I polish constantly, rereading and cleaning up my last day’s progress before starting the next scene. Comes from my perfectionist nature.

    I hate having to cut material but you’re right, sometimes it must be better. I use Scrivener for my writing and so when I cut a scene or section, I move it into an Old Material folder to keep. I usually abandon the material all together, but knowing it’s still around makes me happy.

    Cheers,
    Lila

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    • Jenna Jaxon's avatar jennajaxon says:

      I tend to keep old stuff too. I just keep every revision in a separate file. You never know when you might need a scene. Access what you’ve already written, change the names, tweak it to fit the current work, give it a polish and voila! If it’s good material it will eventually fit somewhere. I appreciate your visit, Lila. Thanks for stopping by.

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